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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for new thread ...
Update is awesome ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Jess..??๐Ÿ˜† also going for trip.. Poor Maan.. Nice update.. I thought Maan will bump with Geet but..this Jess..๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pehle to Apologies Inna badly late hone k lye
Read 4 chapters in the afternoon today ๐Ÿ˜Š
Bekaar comments on each chapter r in the posts below ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 8
*Sigh* When mums cant make yew agree to go where she wants to take yew then, their strictness is lyk the last nail in the coffin, em the victim too ๐Ÿ˜”
mutterings n cursings r the only way to let the frustration out then ๐Ÿ˜”
Geet there ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Intro ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Was she expecting sumthing else to b told by Maan about her ?๐Ÿ˜ณ
I wonder, when did musical chair get so interesting ! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Mujhe bhi puzzle solve krna hai ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Mother's entertainment ๐Ÿ˜† Poor guy ๐Ÿ˜†
Maan-Ayush-Anaya bond is so gud to read Mayyam ๐Ÿ˜Š It makes me remember the group I had ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 9
Maan avoiding her is justified on his part, but new thing , I guess, is Geet's sensing him avoiding her, guess she doesn't feel gud about it ๐Ÿ˜‰
Reading other's letter, is a bad bad habit Maan ๐Ÿ˜›
Dekha ! yew let the curiousity took better of yew n then the shock !
Is it Maan coming to the conclusion or Me ๐Ÿ˜† Ayush feels special 4 Anaya ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Where has she disappeared all of a sudden ? ๐Ÿ˜•
Mayyam, u rocked ๐Ÿ˜ƒ wid the letter thing ๐Ÿ˜‰
Indeed , distance doesnt matter when hearts r connected ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ I remember I said the same once !
They have progressed 4om being formal friend to trusting each other enough to share their lives !
Ooo now I understand which wish has cum true ๐Ÿ˜‰
Hurray Mayyam ๐Ÿฅณ
Dream ! Fish ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›
but ahem ahem, dreaming about Maan ,wo bhi waise ๐Ÿ˜† Studious Geet turning naughty haan ๐Ÿ˜†
Transformation ๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 10
Of course, the dream had to take her sleep away ๐Ÿ˜‰
Poor Geet, cant help herself ๐Ÿ˜†
Maan has done enough stalking n drooling, its tym 4 Geet now ๐Ÿ˜† Go Geet Go ๐Ÿ˜†
Mera wala Black aur Avi wala Blue ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Geet is toh gone ๐Ÿ˜†
Maan, dude yew cant even imagine what she is thinking ! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Aww Ayush ko koi serious kyun nhi leta ๐Ÿ˜†
The whole world does know about it ๐Ÿ˜†
Except these two neglecting their feelings 4 each other
Ayush has becum an entertainment ๐Ÿ˜†
Maan has bumped into Geet right ? ๐Ÿ˜•
Lemme read 11 to sort it out ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Pehle to Apologies Inna badly late hone k lye
Read 4 chapters in the afternoon today ๐Ÿ˜Š
Bekaar comments on each chapter r in the posts below ๐Ÿ˜ณ


No apologies needed! I won't hold it against you. ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 11
Mayyam ๐Ÿ˜ก
Maan ki ixxat ka faluda ๐Ÿคฃ
SBV
If G can wish lyk that, then I must declare, that I've a right to wish so ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
Now I understand y yew wrote 'history repeats itself' main samjhi I've 4gotten sumthing so important ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Damn ! y he Mayyam ? ๐Ÿคฃ
Uff black
Haaye his fingers โค๏ธ
Observing the reflection to gauge his expressions is a gud idea Geet ๐Ÿ˜‰
Eye locks r happening very often now ๐Ÿ˜‰
Ayush ka sense of humour ๐Ÿ˜†
Hi5 Geet ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Em just lyk her when it cums to these extra-curricular activities ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gotcha ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Awww mujhe Maan k lye bura laging bechara ๐Ÿ˜†
Waiting 4 the trip to start n please bless Maan wid less jess-nama ๐Ÿ˜†

I missed so much
But finally all read ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Loved all the chapters ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thanx loadz buddy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Golly gosh Mariam, your threads move unbelievably fast!

Coming to the updates now, I adore the simplicity and innocence of this story! I am actually really enjoying the steady pace, and the intertwined love triangle between Anaya-Maan-Geet, if I've read correctly...

Geet is such a role model and a strong, independent woman - and I love how Maan admires her for that more than her beauty or her personality.

Not just with Geet, but each character of this story has a characteristic which is easy to identify and relate with - and that's not something that's done easily at all. So kudos to you for that, you are an immensely talented writer ๐Ÿ‘

Looking forward to the next chapter now, let's see where this trip leads them... and if Maan can get away from chipku Jess! ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayyo13


No apologies needed! I won't hold it against you. ๐Ÿค—


Oye when did I say yew needed an apology aur yew'll complaint ? ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜†
I just wished to say that n I did say , that's it ๐Ÿ˜›

But haan since I read n commented on all 4 toh I must b given a reward right ๐Ÿ˜‰
Yew wont Complaint I know, but yew can certainly reward ๐Ÿ˜‰

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