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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for new thread ...
Update is awesome ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jess..??😆 also going for trip.. Poor Maan.. Nice update.. I thought Maan will bump with Geet but..this Jess..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pehle to Apologies Inna badly late hone k lye
Read 4 chapters in the afternoon today 😊
Bekaar comments on each chapter r in the posts below 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 8
*Sigh* When mums cant make yew agree to go where she wants to take yew then, their strictness is lyk the last nail in the coffin, em the victim too 😔
mutterings n cursings r the only way to let the frustration out then 😔
Geet there 😲
Intro 😃
Was she expecting sumthing else to b told by Maan about her ?😳
I wonder, when did musical chair get so interesting ! 😳
Mujhe bhi puzzle solve krna hai 😳😆
Mother's entertainment 😆 Poor guy 😆
Maan-Ayush-Anaya bond is so gud to read Mayyam 😊 It makes me remember the group I had 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 9
Maan avoiding her is justified on his part, but new thing , I guess, is Geet's sensing him avoiding her, guess she doesn't feel gud about it 😉
Reading other's letter, is a bad bad habit Maan 😛
Dekha ! yew let the curiousity took better of yew n then the shock !
Is it Maan coming to the conclusion or Me 😆 Ayush feels special 4 Anaya 😃
Where has she disappeared all of a sudden ? 😕
Mayyam, u rocked 😃 wid the letter thing 😉
Indeed , distance doesnt matter when hearts r connected 👍🏼 I remember I said the same once !
They have progressed 4om being formal friend to trusting each other enough to share their lives !
Ooo now I understand which wish has cum true 😉
Hurray Mayyam 🥳
Dream ! Fish 😆😛
but ahem ahem, dreaming about Maan ,wo bhi waise 😆 Studious Geet turning naughty haan 😆
Transformation 😆
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Chapter 10
Of course, the dream had to take her sleep away 😉
Poor Geet, cant help herself 😆
Maan has done enough stalking n drooling, its tym 4 Geet now 😆 Go Geet Go 😆
Mera wala Black aur Avi wala Blue 😳
Geet is toh gone 😆
Maan, dude yew cant even imagine what she is thinking ! 😉
Aww Ayush ko koi serious kyun nhi leta 😆
The whole world does know about it 😆
Except these two neglecting their feelings 4 each other
Ayush has becum an entertainment 😆
Maan has bumped into Geet right ? 😕
Lemme read 11 to sort it out 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Pehle to Apologies Inna badly late hone k lye
Read 4 chapters in the afternoon today 😊
Bekaar comments on each chapter r in the posts below 😳


No apologies needed! I won't hold it against you. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 11
Mayyam 😡
Maan ki ixxat ka faluda 🤣
SBV
If G can wish lyk that, then I must declare, that I've a right to wish so 😳😉
Now I understand y yew wrote 'history repeats itself' main samjhi I've 4gotten sumthing so important 😳
Damn ! y he Mayyam ? 🤣
Uff black
Haaye his fingers ❤️
Observing the reflection to gauge his expressions is a gud idea Geet 😉
Eye locks r happening very often now 😉
Ayush ka sense of humour 😆
Hi5 Geet 😃
Em just lyk her when it cums to these extra-curricular activities 😳
Gotcha 😃
Awww mujhe Maan k lye bura laging bechara 😆
Waiting 4 the trip to start n please bless Maan wid less jess-nama 😆

I missed so much
But finally all read 😃
Loved all the chapters 😃
Thanx loadz buddy 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Golly gosh Mariam, your threads move unbelievably fast!

Coming to the updates now, I adore the simplicity and innocence of this story! I am actually really enjoying the steady pace, and the intertwined love triangle between Anaya-Maan-Geet, if I've read correctly...

Geet is such a role model and a strong, independent woman - and I love how Maan admires her for that more than her beauty or her personality.

Not just with Geet, but each character of this story has a characteristic which is easy to identify and relate with - and that's not something that's done easily at all. So kudos to you for that, you are an immensely talented writer 👏

Looking forward to the next chapter now, let's see where this trip leads them... and if Maan can get away from chipku Jess! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayyo13


No apologies needed! I won't hold it against you. 🤗


Oye when did I say yew needed an apology aur yew'll complaint ? 😡 😆
I just wished to say that n I did say , that's it 😛

But haan since I read n commented on all 4 toh I must b given a reward right 😉
Yew wont Complaint I know, but yew can certainly reward 😉

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