The Seven Year 'Hitch' - Thread 2 link pg 1 - Page 7

Originally posted by: dqno1

Brat's blog is on

http://bratsthoughts.wordpress.com/

She is also on IF as .Maggie. so you can catch up with her...

Avi... (sorry guys I can only make 10 posts every 24 hrs and there is a PM limit... hope u see it here)

Originally posted by: dqno1

Can't wait to read your comments on that! Get ready to be blown away!!

Originally posted by: Onir

Just started reading it..😊.. Actually going slower, as not keeping well. But will surely read it soon to finish all 15 parts on her blog... 😊

Originally posted by: dqno1

Feel better dear...

You must be my intelligent twin as I am down with flu again too... I feel like a truck ran over me..

Just had some khichdi with meds so will probably know off for a while soon...

Next part on Tuesday?

TC Onir🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

First of all, congratulations for the story. And I'll say what I told you earlier. Anytime! I could do this much for a friend, couldn't I? 🤗

Thanks so much... 🤗.

I started highlighting the points which I really want to say something about, the ones which had me thinking how deep and wonderful they are but I realised I've highlighted the whole chapter so I'm just going to talk about it generally. 😆

😳 Now what should I reply on this one. You liked the chapter this itself is giving me such a great feeling, then your precious analysis on parts or full imagine how I must be feeling Miss QoC... 😃

The way you described the darkness in Maan symbolising the darkness surrounding him just made me agree to everything written there. Isn't it always the case that a person sees everything to be the way he feels inside? Maan could have described darkness and silence as being soothing, or he could have related the lights and the hustle bustle with the disadvantages that come with being that big a businessman. (The lights symbolising the fame and the difficulties associated with the game, and the hustle bustle as the restlessness of such a life.) but no, he took darkness to be how he felt inside. It was his inner feelings seeing things around him, taking them to be the darker side of the two facets they could contain... But it was all very well penned down!
Yes I too feel a person always sees & percieves things & surroundings according to what he feels & is going through. That's the reason it is said that - to be the happiest person int he world you need to feel happy within... what you're inside innately will alone be projected & radiate through your being, and no pretence or make belief world created by self can hide or help you to keep from feeling the truth. Glad you could see through & also got the meaning of what I was trying to put in through using the symbolism in the way I did. 😊
The guilt, the sadness and the pain you feel at knowingly or unknowingly urting the one person who loves you the most and whom you love the most, is just too big to be dealt with easily. On top of it, if a person already depends more on actions than on words, it becomes more difficult to face what you've done... I don't know what Maan has done that has hurt both of them this much but I certainly do feel sorry for him for not being able to let out his feelings, to convey how much he wanted to apologise for his actions and words.
Yes the ones you love the most, have the pwoer to hurt you most too. Because others don't matter to cause the level of hurt that a loved one can cause. As you trust & believe in that person as love causes you to be so. About the reason of all this hurt & Maan's doings you will know soon, hopefully. 😊
Geet's character and heart are real strong. And righteous too. I moved the fact that even though she is apologising for her tone, she still held on to her opinion of the topic being correct. She still told him that she isn't regretful of what she said, just of how she said it.
Yes this was what I really wanted to bring forward. Geet here is no doormat or one to take it all without being at fault. But at the same time she values her relation & safeguards it with all her might just for that one person who is her life, soul & love. I'm happy that this thought came forward well.
I've often heard that marriage is a relationship which is as sensitive as glass yet as strong as rock. It can break into a million pieces if not handled carefully but it gives the strength and support that a person needs to live life. Maan's apprehension of it all being the end reminded me of this... But Geet's take on all of it makes up for the rock that their relationship is. She is strong enough to let go of the pain even after being hurt herself. The last line though, made me smile. Hope is never truly lost, is it? The whole world tests on hope's shoulders and so does Maan. Even though the whole chapter gave the gloomy, sad feeling, the last line cancelled it all for me. There's still hope for them and I'm betting on Maan to make the best use of it. 😊
Yes afterall they're life partners, better half of each other. They fill in the gaps left by the other in their relation. The last line was meant to create hope in Maan as well as all who read it, that there's salvation possible. Yes Maan will do more than his best to restore it all as much as he can & of this I assure you. 😊
I almost forgot to mention SBV! Couldn't stop yourself, eh Onir? 😆
Yes SBV... 😳 I just had to bring it here, I couldn't resist it, afterall mere liye bhi kuch hona chahiye na... 😉 You noticed it, I guessed you would... 😆
Thanks for this Onir! I'm really eager to read more of it! 🤗

Will surely continue soon... 🤗

Originally posted by: crazydream

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.
Amazing story. Congrats for writing such a story
Thanks... 😊
Loved the way u described the atmosphere
Of the mansion, Maan's study now aftr that
Incident happened n the way it was for last
7 yrs. His emotions, wat he is feeling now
After he hadmade a grave mistake, everything
Seems to be distancing frm him.
His inner turmoil, wish to turn everything
Wrong to right was shown beautifully.
Glad you could connect with the whole scenario...
Wishing to speak to Geet, his soulmate.
But all his resolution failed seeing Geet
Saying sorry instead of him. Geet eyes
R now displaying a different emotion
Instead of usual twinkle.
Yup... These two are deeply bonded & will surely come out of this trouble soon.
The last line was superb. All is not
Lost. There's a different zeal n
Determination to win back her.
The last line was to instill hope in Maan to revert all back howmuch ever he can.
Loving this story.
Continue soon.

Thanks... will continue soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Congo for new story

BM