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DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE

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Part-6



KHURANA HOUSE


After Maan went to drop Paami,Sam n Vicky Priya locked d door n

turned to finish d left over work. She was smiling n seemed very

contended. Ram saw her n he too smiled as her innocent wife was

very happy today but couldn't stop himself from asking

Ram:- U r looking very happy today.I can see u all tired but eyes

r still shining.

Priya:- haan Raam ,I m very happy today.U know I like Sameera

very much. she is such a sweet girl.tumne dekha na ki woh humaare

saath kaise ghul mil gayi

(though Pyiya was a very mature lady who always stood firm with

Ram to face any hurdle. yet she was very innocent n always

watches world with her good pov. Ram knows very well about this

side of his wife n always shows a right path with explaining

good as well as bad aspects of life.Today again he is watching

his wife for judging a person without thinking)

Ram was still lost in watching his lovely wife


Priya- (without looking at Ram) she is very beautiful Raam. you

know I always wanted a princess 4 my maan. They look perfect

with each other

when Priya didn't get any response she looked at ram n found him

all lost. Priya sighed n called- Ram Ram ! kahaan kho gaye aap?

main yahan bole ja rahi hoon aur aap meri baat hi nahin sun rahe

hain.

Ram looked at her n Priya again asked-sameera kaisi lagi Ram

aapko?

Ram- yes she is very beautiful priya. But it is not all about

beauty.insaan me aur bhi qualities ki zaroorat padti hai life

main.


Priya-haan to hain na sameera kitni sweet. pahli baar yahaan ayi

aur aise behave kar rahi thi jaise humen bahut achchhi tarah

jaanti hai. pammi ji bhi sincere lady hin n vicky- he is so cute.

Ram- tumne maan se poochha hai is baare me?

Priya- Raam they r together since they were in boarding school


Ram-As i observed maan today I found him lost some where else.

aisa lag raha tha ki woh yahaan hokar bhi yahaan nahin tha. i

think maan does not love her.

Priya- No Ram it is not the way u r thinking. Actually Geet nahin

Aayi shayad isiliye who use miss kar raha tha.

Ram-haan mujhe yaad aaya Maan geet ke baare me un logon se kuchh

pooch raha tha. ye Geet kaun hai?

Priya-Maan told me that Geet is Sameera's sister.But as I

remember when I asked Sam about her family in mumbai, she told me

that she has a brother n mother in her family. her father died of

a heart attack. Ram aapko pata hai ki Mr. Sagar khanna was her

father,He was same sagar Khanna who servived in a fatal attack.

Do u remember?

Ram-haan maine kuchh suna toh tha but i didn't know him

personally.



Priya-ohho-! Mr. khanna ke baare me baat karte karte hum main

topic tho bhool hi gaye. Aapko aisa kyun lagta hai ki maan

Sameera se pyaar nahin karta?

Ram-(shaking his head) my dear wife ! pyar karne wale aise behave

nahin karte jaise aaj tumhaara laadla behave kar raha tha.

Priya-haan haan ! aapko to jaise bahut pata hai. aapki kya love

maariage hui thi? Maan aur baabuji ne mujhe pasand kiya tha aur

aap ne mujhe dekhe bina hi mujhse shadi kar li thi,Mujhse toh aap

ek baar milne bhi nahin aaye the.

Ram held priya on her waist and pulled to himself-love marraige

nahin hui toh kya apni biwi se pyaar toh bahut karta hoon.

Priya Shied n said-Ram , kuchh toh sharm kijiye Jawwa bete ke

pita hain aap.

Ram-Hmm jawaan bete ka pita hoon iska matlab ye nahin ki main

boodha hoon chahoon toh abhi prove kar sakta hoon

Priya whacked him n said said- shut up Ram.and pls tall me Why do

u think so about Sameera?

Ram-when Maan asked about Geet, i saw tat Sameera was looking her

mother with an angry look n Pammi ji was signalling her to keep

quite. n to behave sweetly with us she was making a lot of

efforts. It was not coming naturally to her.


Priya-But I didn't feel so.And I know one thing only jab who

hamaare saath rahegi toh hamaare jaisi ban bhi jaayegi.humen toh

sirf apne bete ki khushi chaahiye. jisme who khush usmen hum bhi

khush.

Ram -yes u r right.I pray god to give power to Maan to

differenciate between good n bad.


Priya -aisa hi hoga. mujhe maan par pura bharosa hai


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KHANNA HOUSE


Maan was standing un moved.He couldn't believe what he was

witnessing.he lost all power to think.He was all shocked at he

saw thru d half opened door. Vicky was standing by d side of

study table where geet was studying. Vicky forwarded his hand to

Geet n gave a big Chocolate to Geet.He smiled n kissed d both

cheeks of geet n Said-HAPPY BIRTH DAY GEET DI


Maan could not believe his ears. he thought that he heard some

thing wrong .How it is possible?he thought to knock on d door but

then he heard geet-Thank u Vicky, thank u so so much.aur aaj phir

tumne apni pocket money se mere liye chocolate khridi?

Vicky-Any thing 4 my sweetest di.Ab jaldi se bar kholo aur mujhe

khilaao. I can't wait more

Geet laughed n opened d bar n put one piece in his mouth. Vicky

to fed A piece to Geet

Geet- so Vicky how was d party on Maan's house.U must have

enjoyed there?

Vicky-It was good di n Maan bhaiya was asking about u that why u

were not with us

Geet got little worried n asked- tumne kuchh bataaya toh nahin

na?

Vicky-no Di. But mom told that u were having a headach.

Geet-with a relief)-than god. n promise me Vicky tum Maan ko

kabhi kuchh nahin bataaoge.

Vicky-Never di ! promise.

Geet-It's very late Vicky.Kal jaldi uthma hai na.go n sleep.

Vicky again kissed her n said -good night di n happy birthday

once again.
Geet kissed him to n said- good night Vicky.

Vicky turned n Maan saw a tear in Geet's eye

Maan lost all senses to think any thing but getthered himself n

hid behind a pillor so that Vicky could not see him

Vicky entered his room n locked d poor of hus room. there was no

courage left in Maan to go to vicky n give his gift to him.He was

feeling d earth moving under his feet

he silently came out of d house n drove back to his house


Precap--Maan was thinking to search d source of information to

know about Geet
And a day out to celebrate Sam's birthday



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Did any one expect this?
pls give ur comments on d update n tell me if u liked this

surpsise or not
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Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
can't wait plz update soon :)
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Originally posted by: Semarnk

can't wait plz update soon :)

updated dear n leave ur comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update yar...
N did not think tat it would b geets b'day...
But y she did not go..???
Hope priya ko ram ki jaldi hi samaj aa jaye...
Aur she can she the truth... :-)
Next update jaldi dena dear... :-) :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

maan's father is indeed wise yaar..hope maan will make smart move..pls cont soon..

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Originally posted by: SweetestPari

Nice update yar...
N did not think tat it would b geets b'day...
But y she did not go..???
Hope priya ko ram ki jaldi hi samaj aa jaye...
Aur she can she the truth... :-)
Next update jaldi dena dear... :-) :-)


thanx 4 d comment

in every third or fourth story we see maan n Gaat sharing their b'day
but i wanted to give it different
i was scared before updating that u all will like it or not
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

maan's father is indeed wise yaar..hope maan will make smart move..pls cont soon..


thanx

U will not see here Maan As Msk
so b ready 4 unprectible
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was woowww bt saara update toh maan k mom n dad ne le liya..;)
yaar im still confused that why geet mom told lie to khuranas bout geet.??? Whts the mystry behind geet's character...waiting fr next..
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Originally posted by: PujaShree

Update was woowww bt saara update toh maan k mom n dad ne le liya..;)
yaar im still confused that why geet mom told lie to khuranas bout geet.??? Whts the mystry behind geet's character...waiting fr next..


i agree to u but i want to include every one nicely
you have to know everyone's prospectus

confusion will b cleared as d story proceeds
u have to b keep patience. It is my first ever writing attempt so i too m nervous

i showed u Maan's parents here so u can connect with their character

Aur haan abhi sweet dadi baaki hain but she will b introduced when it will b needed

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