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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello Friends

I m rashmi,a mad reader of MG ffs/ss/os of almost all writers and I must say .hat's off to you all

I have never ever tried my hands in writing n after thinking 4 almost one half year

I m not able to stop myself any more

I want to write a SS on Maan n Geet which is inspired by the Movie 'Dulhan wahi Jo Piya Mann Bhaaye'

Credit for this lovely Banner goes to lovesia.

Thank u Sia you are such a darling.Love you

only d concept is inspired by the Movie not d whole SS

DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE

CHARACTERS

Maan -a normal guy from a rich family setelled in a small town ,studies in Mumbai n lives in hostel

Sameera-girl friend of Maan,studies in same school,also lives in hostel.Her family lives in Delhi n is very rich

Geet- lives in Sameera's house with Sameera's family .A bright student

Maan's Family- Daadi, Father,Mother(a family full of love n respect

for each other)

Sameera's Family-Mother n 10 years old younger brother,Father died of heart attack(a family which attached to each other but thinks for ownself first

Geet's Family -You will know about her with Maan only

prologue-

kab tak kisi ke ahsaano tale jiyungi?Kya kabhi mauka nahin milega mujhe in ahsaano ko utaarne ka

kaash main un logon ke liye kuchh kar paati aur azaad ho jaati is guilt se ki main un logon ke liye kabhi kuchh nahin kar paayi

I hope that u like it

If u want pm for this ss,send ur buddy request on - pmatras

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Punarvivah

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

part one

Part-2

Note

Part 3

part 4

Part-5

Part-6

Part-7

Part-8

Part-9

Part-10

Part-11

Part-12

Part-13

Part-14

Part-15

Teaser

Part-16

Part-17

Part-18

Part-19

NOTE

Part-20

part-21

Part-22

Part-23

Edited by rashmivaish - 13 years ago

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi dear

if i m not wrong

you are talking about old rajshri movie

i loved that movie

nice one

hey

as you said

your ff is diferent

with twist from your side

so here is my

few line comment or you

hope you like

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice concept, looking forward,, add me in😊

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE

Credit for this lovely Banner goes to lovesia.

Thank u Sia you are such a darling.Love you

Part 1

It was first day of Maan in his new school in Mumbai. He took admission in class 11.his family lives in a small town.The school in his town are only up to 10th class so he has to come here to study further

he entered the school n every one was looking at him without a blink(.though he is from a small town but his family is very rich there they r the top buisness family there. they r running a huge sugar mill which provides employment to d people of that town. people of town have great regards for them. being from such a family they were aware of there status n all r humble in his family

Maan was always health concious so had a great body.)Girls were drooling on him but he didn't look back at them.

He went to his class n girls were happy to see him there. he sat on an vacant seat soon a girl came there n sat besides him. he passed a smile to her n sh responded back.

The girl-Hi! I m sameera.

Maan -Hi! I m maan.

sam-Friends?

maan liked that girl because she didn't drool on him n he was comfortable with her so he accepted her friend ship.She was a beautiful girl n every boy was of school tried to seek a chance to be friend with her. She knew that she was beautiful n was proud of it.maintaining her beauty was her first priority n never took a risk with her beauty.

Sameera was studying there since class 9th.In break time they went to canteen n after placing their orders the sat on chairs

Sameera -tell me about urself Maan. What do u want to do in ur life?

Maan-I m from a small town in UP.after completing my study i will opt for MBA n then will look after my family buisness.

Sam- ok

Maan -what about you?

Sam-I m from Delhi. I want to participate in Beauty contest as it is my dream to be miss India.

Maan smiled broadly hearing this but said nothing.after the break was over,they went to their class. Maan soon became friendly to every one in d class as he was a sweet natured guy.

After school was over they bid a bye to eachother n went to their respective hostals.

Precap-

some more friendship talks n a call from Sam's house

If u want pm for this ss,send ur buddy request on - pmatrash

hope u all like it n sorry for spellings n grammar mistakes.I m very nervous as it is my first ever attempt

Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 13 years ago

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rsusmita

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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats dear for the new story

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
hi dear

if i m not wrong
you are talking about old rajshri movie
i loved that movie
nice one

hey
as you said
your ff is diferent
with twist from your side
so here is my
few line comment or you
hope you like

U r right

same old movie featuring Rameshwari

n i loved that movie

n hope u will like it

fingers crossed

Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 13 years ago

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-gurtimaniac-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats for a new story

nice start

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

as i have the idea of your story

so this is my gift for you

hope you like it

few lines

from geet,about geet

khilne se pahle murjha jaaye ,

itni naazuk toh woh kali nahi

milne se pahle ,

khushiyaan uske dar se laut jaaye

itna pathar dil toh uska ,khuda bhi nahi

haan yeh maana

sir pathroo par chalne ka dard hi ,

hai usne jaana

par isse kaante na chubhe gulaab ke

uss bewkuf ko kabhi gulaab ki kashish ne bhi pukaara hi nahi

thik waise hi ,

jaante hai daag hai chand mein

par phir bhi ,chand sa mehboob paane ki hasrat is jamaane mein har deewane ki hai

koi marne ke baad

bana dega aapke liye tajmahal

yeh baat gujre zamaan ki hai

ab toh woh daur hai ,jisme

pyaar ka nasha charo aur hai

khilne ko hai woh kali

jo ab tak andhre se thi ghiri

suraj uska aan ko hai

dukh ka baadal ,jaan ko hai

woh laayga

uske daaman mein khusi,aur karwaayga uski roshni se pahchaan

kyoki woh hoga uska MAAN

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
as i have the idea of your story
so this is my gift for you
hope you like it

few lines
from geet,about geet

khilne se pahle murjha jaaye ,
itni naazuk toh woh kali nahi

milne se pahle ,
khushiyaan uske dar se laut jaaye
itna pathar dil toh uska ,khuda bhi nahi

haan yeh maana
sir pathroo par chalne ka dard hi ,
hai usne jaana
par isse kaante na chubhe gulaab ke
uss bewkuf ko kabhi gulaab ki kashish ne bhi pukaara hi nahi
thik waise hi ,
jaante hai daag hai chand mein
par phir bhi ,chand sa mehboob paane ki hasrat is jamaane mein har deewane ki hai

koi marne ke baad
bana dega aapke liye tajmahal
yeh baat gujre zamaan ki hai
ab toh woh daur hai ,jisme
pyaar ka nasha charo aur hai

khilne ko hai woh kali
jo ab tak andhre se thi ghiri
suraj uska aan ko hai
dukh ka baadal ,jaan ko hai
woh laayga
uske daaman mein khusi,aur karwaayga uski roshni se pahchaan

kyoki woh hoga uska MAAN