Dulhan Wahi jo piya Mann Bhaaye

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Friends
I m rashmi,a mad reader of MG ffs/ss/os of almost all writers and I must say .hat's off to you all
I have never ever tried my hands in writing n after thinking 4 almost one half year
I m not able to stop myself any more
I want to write a SS on Maan n Geet which is inspired by the Movie 'Dulhan wahi Jo Piya Mann Bhaaye'
Credit for this lovely Banner goes to lovesia.
Thank u Sia you are such a darling.Love you

only d concept is inspired by the Movie not d whole SS



DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE

CHARACTERS

Maan -a normal guy from a rich family setelled in a small town ,studies in Mumbai n lives in hostel

Sameera-girl friend of Maan,studies in same school,also lives in hostel.Her family lives in Delhi n is very rich

Geet- lives in Sameera's house with Sameera's family .A bright student




Maan's Family- Daadi, Father,Mother(a family full of love n respect
for each other)

Sameera's Family-Mother n 10 years old younger brother,Father died of heart attack(a family which attached to each other but thinks for ownself first

Geet's Family -You will know about her with Maan only





prologue-

kab tak kisi ke ahsaano tale jiyungi?Kya kabhi mauka nahin milega mujhe in ahsaano ko utaarne ka
kaash main un logon ke liye kuchh kar paati aur azaad ho jaati is guilt se ki main un logon ke liye kabhi kuchh nahin kar paayi


I hope that u like it



If u want pm for this ss,send ur buddy request on - pmatras



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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi dear

if i m not wrong
you are talking about old rajshri movie
i loved that movie
nice one

hey
as you said
your ff is diferent
with twist from your side
so here is my
few line comment or you
hope you like
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept, looking forward,, add me in😊
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DULHAN WAHI JO PIYA MANN BHAAYE

Credit for this lovely Banner goes to lovesia.
Thank u Sia you are such a darling.Love you

Part 1

It was first day of Maan in his new school in Mumbai. He took admission in class 11.his family lives in a small town.The school in his town are only up to 10th class so he has to come here to study further
he entered the school n every one was looking at him without a blink(.though he is from a small town but his family is very rich there they r the top buisness family there. they r running a huge sugar mill which provides employment to d people of that town. people of town have great regards for them. being from such a family they were aware of there status n all r humble in his family
Maan was always health concious so had a great body.)Girls were drooling on him but he didn't look back at them.
He went to his class n girls were happy to see him there. he sat on an vacant seat soon a girl came there n sat besides him. he passed a smile to her n sh responded back.
The girl-Hi! I m sameera.
Maan -Hi! I m maan.
sam-Friends?
maan liked that girl because she didn't drool on him n he was comfortable with her so he accepted her friend ship.She was a beautiful girl n every boy was of school tried to seek a chance to be friend with her. She knew that she was beautiful n was proud of it.maintaining her beauty was her first priority n never took a risk with her beauty.
Sameera was studying there since class 9th.In break time they went to canteen n after placing their orders the sat on chairs
Sameera -tell me about urself Maan. What do u want to do in ur life?
Maan-I m from a small town in UP.after completing my study i will opt for MBA n then will look after my family buisness.
Sam- ok
Maan -what about you?
Sam-I m from Delhi. I want to participate in Beauty contest as it is my dream to be miss India.
Maan smiled broadly hearing this but said nothing.after the break was over,they went to their class. Maan soon became friendly to every one in d class as he was a sweet natured guy.
After school was over they bid a bye to eachother n went to their respective hostals.


Precap-
some more friendship talks n a call from Sam's house


If u want pm for this ss,send ur buddy request on - pmatrash

hope u all like it n sorry for spellings n grammar mistakes.I m very nervous as it is my first ever attempt





Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats dear for the new story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

hi dear


if i m not wrong
you are talking about old rajshri movie
i loved that movie
nice one

hey
as you said
your ff is diferent
with twist from your side
so here is my
few line comment or you
hope you like

U r right
same old movie featuring Rameshwari
n i loved that movie
n hope u will like it
fingers crossed
Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for a new story

nice start
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Posted: 12 years ago
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as i have the idea of your story
so this is my gift for you
hope you like it

few lines
from geet,about geet


khilne se pahle murjha jaaye ,
itni naazuk toh woh kali nahi

milne se pahle ,
khushiyaan uske dar se laut jaaye
itna pathar dil toh uska ,khuda bhi nahi

haan yeh maana
sir pathroo par chalne ka dard hi ,
hai usne jaana
par isse kaante na chubhe gulaab ke
uss bewkuf ko kabhi gulaab ki kashish ne bhi pukaara hi nahi
thik waise hi ,
jaante hai daag hai chand mein
par phir bhi ,chand sa mehboob paane ki hasrat is jamaane mein har deewane ki hai


koi marne ke baad
bana dega aapke liye tajmahal
yeh baat gujre zamaan ki hai
ab toh woh daur hai ,jisme
pyaar ka nasha charo aur hai

khilne ko hai woh kali
jo ab tak andhre se thi ghiri
suraj uska aan ko hai
dukh ka baadal ,jaan ko hai
woh laayga
uske daaman mein khusi,aur karwaayga uski roshni se pahchaan

kyoki woh hoga uska MAAN

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

as i have the idea of your story

so this is my gift for you
hope you like it

few lines
from geet,about geet


khilne se pahle murjha jaaye ,
itni naazuk toh woh kali nahi

milne se pahle ,
khushiyaan uske dar se laut jaaye
itna pathar dil toh uska ,khuda bhi nahi

haan yeh maana
sir pathroo par chalne ka dard hi ,
hai usne jaana
par isse kaante na chubhe gulaab ke
uss bewkuf ko kabhi gulaab ki kashish ne bhi pukaara hi nahi
thik waise hi ,
jaante hai daag hai chand mein
par phir bhi ,chand sa mehboob paane ki hasrat is jamaane mein har deewane ki hai


koi marne ke baad
bana dega aapke liye tajmahal
yeh baat gujre zamaan ki hai
ab toh woh daur hai ,jisme
pyaar ka nasha charo aur hai

khilne ko hai woh kali
jo ab tak andhre se thi ghiri
suraj uska aan ko hai
dukh ka baadal ,jaan ko hai
woh laayga
uske daaman mein khusi,aur karwaayga uski roshni se pahchaan

kyoki woh hoga uska MAAN

thank u 4 this poem n i love u 4 that
need ur support in this journey
if u iked part 1
pls hit like thanx again
Edited by rashmi.vaish68 - 12 years ago

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