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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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RECAP

Maan,"She moaned in ecstacy & collapsed on Maan as he had pounded inside her coming his semen inside her c**t giving the bite of soreness once again.Maan slowly stroked her back while she drifted.Maan saw her glowing angelic face which were showing the contentment due to his love making & he snuggled her inside his embrace & kissed her forehead.Geet slowly adjusted herself on him rubbing her soft body which aroused him once more but controlled it seeing her sore & tired.

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PART 45 WARNING 18+



It was evening when they were cuddled up inside each other's embrace,content & exhausted of their hardcore love making.Maan stirred & opened his eyes to get the vision of his jaan who was sleeping soundly inside his embrace.Geet was totally exhausted which was seen in her face but it has the strange glow too as she as once again got the wife's place by Maan.She thought that after kidnap fiasco she will be condemned by Maan but she got the glimpse of his love from last few days.Her life was complicated which always reminded of her past.Life is not permitting her to move on with her husband.Whenever they tried to do that then some obstacle would come & stand in front of them which was usually from their past.Both Maaneet dint know that it was Angad who's behind all these conspiracy & now Karan was out loose.Maan was thinking all this when he saw his mobile vibrating.He had kept it last night in silent so that no one disturbs their passionate moments.Maan tried to move when he saw that he was still inside her & the pull made Geet moan in pain.















Maan stilled immediately & adjusted himself to the previous position & slowly came outside while Geet winced in pain but was still asleep due to tiredness.Maan stroked her hair so that she calms & she more snuggled to his chest.Maan grunted softly feeling her soft body which always made him aroused in one way or the other.He slowly slid her body from his body & saw that her softness was wet with dripping come.His erection hardened seeing her like that as she was so warm & tender.He knew that she was sore but his desires were so strong which were riding him to give her the bite of soreness once again.Maan chuckled to himself seeing his jaan who was innocently sleeping not getting any hint of his mind state..not getting any hint of what is going on inside his mind.He bent down & kissed her forehead & moved tucking her inside the blanket.Geet snuggled to it as she was totally exhausted while Maan went near window not wearing anything as he was feeling sleepy & thought of receiving a small nap after attending to his call.















Maan saw his mobile which had numerous missed calls from Veer.He was shocked to see that many of missed calls & once again started ringing & he immediately answered when Veer shouted in panic,"Where r u Maan?"Maan yawned hugely but immediately shocked hearing Veer's raised voice & said,"Am in home Veer..what happened y r u shouting?"Veer asked,"Where's Geet?"Maan answered softly,"Geet is asleep Veer..she's with me!What happened Veer?"Veer took a deep calming breath & said in fast pace,"Maan,Karan is missing!"Maan dint hear it correctly & said,"Pardon!"Veer calmed a bit & said softly,"Maan..Karan is missing!"Maan was shocked & asked,"How?'..When?"Veer said worriedly,"Last night!"Maan said,"Am coming to u..where r u Veer?"Veer said immediately,"No Maan'please always stay with Geet only'i dont know what happening but my gut feeling says that Geet will be in more danger!Please yaar'just be careful & protect Geet!"Now Maan was worried & asked,"But why r u saying like that?How come she will be danger?I was the one who made him to go to mental asylum..then how come Geet's in danger from him?Am confused Veer!"Veer said,"I dont know myself Maan but what Vikram said from that information am figuring that Geet will be danger & mainly from Karan.I will let u know abt that as am going to Mumbai to investigate but please dont let Geet to walk away alone anywhere!"Maan said,"Ok Veer..be careful!"Veer said,"I will'take care bye!"Maan said,"U too!"And he disconnected the phone.













Now tension lines formed on his face as he came & sat on the bed leaning to the bed rest.He turned towards Geet & saw she was still sleeping peacefully snuggling to the sheet.He entered inside it & slept beside her while she felt her husband's warmth & she immediately snuggled cutely & slept on his right arm rubbing her body to his cold body.Maan dint express as he was stressed out & she cutely opened her thief eye to see Maan become moody.He only snuggled her closer but his eyes were fixed to the ceiling.Geet noticed the tension lines & rubbed it distracting him towards her.Maan saw her with shock & asked with a small smile which dint reach his eye,"Did u sleep well jaan?"Geet asked directly,"What happened Maan?U r tensed!"Maan immediately hid his tension & said,"Jaan am thinking of making u more sore..u r asking abt my tension i dont have any tension!"Geet cutely blushed hearing the sore word but cutely glared at him & said,"Dont change the subject!"Maan said trying to distract her,"Jaan am not changing the subject!"And immediately his left hand moved towards her front waist under the blanket & slowly started to make patterns.Geet felt the tingling sensation while her skin started to warm up & she cutely moaned,"Maan!"
















He grunted hearing her moan while his hands slowly travelled to her soft sore curves & took the n****e of her right curve inside his warm mouth from blanket.His right hand snaked her neck & softly squeezed it making her moan his name.She got lost in his passion when he softly bit her hard bud giving the bite of ecstacy which he's bearing now.He immediately moved his hands in the valley of her curves & softly bit her neck giving access to him.Geet's hands went to his abs which made him to take sharp breath & grunted.Geet's hands started making patterns on his back & he softly winced in pain & pleasure feeling her nails.His legs went on her widening her thighs & touched her core from his hardness.She moaned his name in ecstacy & his body rubbed slowly making her warm.Color flooded on her chubby cheeks & she cutely pecked his lips.He immediately jerked the sheet from her & saw her naked body which was full of his love bites & scratches giving the level of his passion.
















Inserting his middle finger he slowly stroked & said huskily,"U r wet jaan!"Geet said cutely blushing,"But am sore Maan!"Maan said,"Leet's give the cure for ur soreness!"And he immediately slid towards her thighs & widened it more & bent his head & immediately thrusted his eager pink tongue.Geet screamed his name while he started licking her swollen c**t.He licked it ravishly making her come once again & he bit her inner thigh marking his possession.He wanted to love her after hearing the news of Karan from Veer.He was worried so much that he was abt to spill the news to Geet.To change the subject he involved himself of giving pleasurable love making giving the bite of sore to Geet once again.He knew her body..how it ignites & calms.He licked it & licked it giving the pleasure to Geet.Geet moaned furiously & said,"Maan i want u now!"He dint listened to her as she writhed under him helplessly.She cutely glared at him & pulled his hairs with strong pleasure.When she came nth time on that time he lifted his head & softly pecked her forehead & asked,"Ready?"Geet who was jelly like slowly nodded & in nano second she felt the fullness of his hard p***s.She saw that he had thrusted inside her so deep & she moaned feeling it.Maan asked kissing her forehead,"Are u alright?"As he slowly circled his hips.Geet nodded & screamed in sheer ecstacy when he thrusted more deeper.















Maan kissed her forehead & grunted,"U r so tight jaan!"He kissed her soft c**t & thrusted more deeper.Geet moaned once again her legs has become jelly like.She gripped his taut b**t & pushed him once again so that his hardness enters inside her more deeper.Maan grunted & saw he was not getting tension free as that news was lingering inside his mind.Geet saw this & once again pushed him towards her & his hardness more entered deeper.She sat up halfly & pecked his M shaped lips & said,"Jaan give it to me!"Maan saw her with wide eyes while she once again collapsed making them both wince in pain.He immediately took himself from her & turned that side standing when Geet stood in difficulty & cupped her palm on his face,"What is it jaan?What's eating u?U r tensed!"Maan said kissing her palm,"It's no concern of u jaan..leave it!"Geet said angrily,"The matter may be not concerned to me but u r Maan!Tell me what is it?"Maan dint say anything & once again took her petal swollen lips into beseeching kiss.When they broke apart on that time Geet took some precious air & immediately she pushed flat on the bed & was kissed everywhere.Geet moaned & in nano second she was made speechless as he entered inside her.She moaned & he rubbed more aggressively & passionately.Geet scratched her nails to his back as she was feeling the fullness & immediately he came inside her.Geet felt the hot liquid & she too came screaming his name.Maan saw her after they came from the trance state.Geet saw his chocolate brown eyes & she pecked his lips & asked,"Are u alright?"Maan nodded & in the fact pace he lifted her & took to the bathroom.He slowly made her stand & she gripped the wall to steady her as her legs were still jelly-like.















He switched on the shower & made her to stand under it.He immediately filled the tub with warm water & lifted her & made her lie inside the tub.He too joined & started massaging her arms & legs.He pulled the small fingers of her toes freeing it from the cramps & poured hot water on it.He took care of her lovingly while she relaxed on his hard chest taking a nap for a while.After their passionate bath he smeared ointment to the love bites & she cutely admired him who busy taking care of her.Maan took care of her & made her to sit on the bed & hugged her making her sleep on his chest when Geet asked,"What is it Maan?What's eating u?"Maan asked shocked,"U never give up!"Geet said pecking his lips,"Nope..am ur wife Maan'if i cant understand u then who will'now tell me what happened!"Maan said casually which was fake,"Nothing jaan..am tensed abt business that's all!"Geet asked doubtfully,"Are sure!"Maan said immediately,"Yes jaan!"On that time his stomach grumbled & Geet got up saying,"I'll prepare something for u!"Maan nodded while he took his laptop to work.



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Here Karan was getting insane seeing Geet's beauty & he dreamt of loving her & got up sweating badly.He knew that she's married still he was getting insane to have her.He drove the car at midnight in disguise to a place where he always spent time.It was an abandoned castle which was old & dusty from so many years.He went to cellar of the castle & pressed an stone wall to reveal a secret door.When he entered a very foul smell came which gave the hint of the body decomposition.He saw around her & saw 20 glass cases which contained the skeletons of someone.Seeing the jewels on the neck of the skeletons can be recognised that they were women.He saw around him fearlessly & an sinful smile spread on his face.He addressed to the skeletons,"Hello my darlings..u guys r happy to see me.I came back'i came back to u all & now another member is gonna join u..wont u get ready to welcome her?Dont be in hurry as she needs to be tamed to join u but i can say that u will all be jealous seeing her beauty as it is so natural.U all have to take orders from her as she's gonna become Mrs.Karanveer Bohra!U all were satisfiable to me for time being but she'she is the fire while u all were candle!She's fire!"He took his wallet & took a pic & showed to the skeletons of the girls,"See..her name is Geet'beautiful isnt she?"Karan once again laughed but this time it was maniacal laughter.He shouted spreading his arms & seeing towards dusty ceiling,"In coming month Geet u will be mine!I want to feel u Geet.Am getting insane seeing ur beauty & am dreaming abt u too..but soon will make this dream come true!"His laughter echoed like blood is moving inside its veins.




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Note-Guys am warning u all this track has so much violence & am gonna explain the negative emotions of Karan in this.So one who feel uncomfortable can skip this track.So much to reveal in this track.


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Posted: 11 years ago
its hot and i m scared but i beleive ur writting skills
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Omg super hot and passion filled part ...aww maan become thence after veer call..and geet can understand him well so nice ..waiting for more dear wanna se how maan saved his geet from devil
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Posted: 11 years ago
FAbulous part ,maanet made a passionate love and maan is tensed about karan missing and karan is all set to hunt geet waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very very good, sri. Tis brilliant sweety! And yes, me has updated Pyaar aur junoon chp 3. I shall edit title now, pls read and leave your comment, all right?

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Posted: 11 years ago
you can go as violent you want just please no rape awesome update maan distracting her with sex because she realized he is hiding some thing from her loved how he took care of her and karan is pas sick he needs to be put down awesome update thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: dumas

you can go as violent you want just please no rape awesome update maan distracting her with sex because she realized he is hiding some thing from her loved how he took care of her and karan is pas sick he needs to be put down awesome update thanks for the pm




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