VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 03

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thebians

@thebians

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Poor Geet!

she is not ready to believe she lost her baby,

and Maan is trying his best to make her realize.

It is a huge shock for mothers who lose their kids like this.

Very well written,

you've explained all emotions brilliantly.

highly appreciable.

w8ing 4 next update.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

wow lovely painful update.. te way geet entering km and asking to do arti and slapping nakul and seeing all tis my maan crying lying on veer ki lap was so emotional painful.. te way geet was restless without my maan and veer giving her my maan ki shirt was lovely.. te way my maan getting up and seeing his geet and controlling his passion making his geet to get ready and thinking to divert geet ki baby doll but his geet is adamant was lovely.. te way my maan asking her to prepare bf and geet is worried for my maan and te way he is preparing ginger tea was so lovely..i love te update kutty

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

That's really painful..😭Poor Geet... Maan's words are definitely gonna affect her.. Hope she will come out of trauma soon..

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

loved it...
fabulous part...
bt feeling really bad for geet...

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Awesome update di
Omg its just heartwrenching to c maaneet in that condition
Iaw real wly feeling bad for maan
Hope he suceeds in making her realise and bring her back to normal
Waiting for next

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Vishal51

@Vishal51

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

awesome part,feel bad for maaeet.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

sahi mein bahut bura lag raha hai maan ko dekhke...aur kitna sahega bechara...geet ko bhi sahena pad rahe hai...dono phirse pehle jaise ho jaye...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...