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a BIG SORRY to all
i know my excuses will not work
so 2mrw i vl update a special part
full with dhamaka and romantic maaneet parts 😉
PAKKA WALA PROMISE

as its Sargoshiyan's 1st Anniversary 🥳
so yes i have something special in my mind to turn the story in 90 degree angle 😆
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Before starting 2day's part, i am going to make u all bore with my tiny miny speech


A BIG BIG BIG THANK YOU to all my readers to stay connected with me for last one year. Yes, 2day Sargoshiyan completed its one year, and all I can say is, it's because of you all I am still here writing this story. The way you guys waited for this story, as this sam is very attached to accidents and sickness, and really hospital is my 2nd native home.



Thank you all for supporting this lazy writer and will always wish to see my all readers with me. And really wanna see more and more comments from you all.

NOW CAN I EXPECT MY SILENT READERS TO AT LEAST PRESS ONE LIKE, at least I can able to understand how many of you are actually reading this from last one year journey'


Happy Birthday Asmi n Vanshi 🥳 this update is for you both 🤗


Part 35

Maan looked and her and just cursed himself to say this much. He can easily read her face and the pain for not having her mother near her

Maan cupped her face,

Maan: Geet, don't you think I'm the unlucky one who doesn't have any siblings like you have? And then you have Riabhabi, who always loves you as her own kid

Geet: you too have daadi ma na? I don't have any

Maan: yes, and I have one hitler dad, you don't have someone like him

Geet slapped him playfully and both started to laugh. Maan just wanted to see this princess happy, and no sadness was allowed anywhere near her, but what they missed was the person who's watching them and smiling


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Natasha entered with soup for Anukalp, and saw him smiling while looking outside from the window

Natasha: kya baat hai? Today Sir is in too good mood

Anukalp: when I was in bad mood?

Natasha: no no, infact never, cause you were in worst mood, now should I count the worst mood days as that will be easy

Natasha replied while laughing

Anukalp tried to change the topic, so choose Mom kalaadlato distract Natasha

Anukalp: waise is this Geet about whom you were talking about?

Natasha looked outside and smiled,

Natasha: cute girl, but don't know why, she was not comfortable with me

Anukalp: maybe not extroverts like your son

Natasha: now whats wrong with my son?

Anukalp: nehi nehi, I was just

Natasha: I will mix spicy with your soup, if you will not stop poking my son, yaadrakhna, now complete this, I'm going downstairs

Anukalp: hah hah, I will drink it

While going, Natasha turned back at her husband and asked again

Natasha: Jaan will you come downstairs, for the lunch?

Anukalp: ya sure

Natasha: ohk

Anukalp again looked at the garden, where he saw his son listening silently and the girl was talking something animatedly. He wondered how his son became so good listener

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Maan: Geet why don't you go to daadi ma n pinky, I will go and freshen up on that time

Geet: ummm, Maan can I stay here for some time? You go na? I will be here

Maan: but tum akele?

Geet: So what? Its your house, so no one will kidnap me

Geet said and winked at him, making Maan smile

Maan: ohk, you stay here then, I will go and come back soon

Geet: ohk, no problem, take your time

Geet assured Maan with her dazzling smile. Maan smiled back and went towards his room. And Geet stood up to see the plants

When Natasha entered the garden to call them, she saw Geet touching one red rose. Natasha went towards her and asked,

Natasha:you like the red roses?

Geet looked at her and smiled faintly

Geet: jii, wo, haan I like all red colors

Natasha: same goes with me, but Maan always prefer white and light colors in everything, boring colors

Geet smiled at her

Geet: aapki and meri bohut milti hai

Natasha: then we can make team

Geet: but how can we?

Natasha: why not beta?

Geet: I will go after sometimes na?

Natasha: haan but you can come anytime as well

Geet: but

Natasha: Geet, you are Maan's good friend na? And now we all meet with you, you can come anytime here.Adi also come here and consider this home as his 2nd home

Geet: but aunty, im here only for 2 months. Then I will leave for Delhi

Natasha: but in these 2 months you can be in my team, right?

Geet: haan, and I will be with you

Geet said with a big grin. She was getting comfortable and coming back to her own bubbly nature

Natasha: aur waise bhi Geet. Who knows I will go behind you to Delhi for my team member?

Natasha said while winking at her. They both laughed together

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That day went like a glimpse of eyes. All enjoyed the whole day with fullest fun. Geet and Pinky easily mixed up with Maan's family.

According to Pinky:

Daadi ma is the sweetest daadi just like the yummy chocolaty flavor cream. Soft and easy going with all. And the most important side is, she knows how

Natasha aunty is just like juice. She can turn her nature like the person she will talk with. Just like juice can turn into any shape according to the size of the glass

Anukalp uncle is strict in nature, but at the same time his heart is very soft. Just like a cream roll. Hard from outside, but inside it, the cream is totally full on soft

(hehehehe, our Pinky can never be able to come out from her foodie nature)

According to Geet:

Daadi ma is like a pillar of the family. She is still that much strong to control the whole family. But not with any strictness, but with the love she keep showering towards each and every member of the house

Natasha Aunty made me feel like im in my own house. The way she kept looking after what I need what I want, may be mumma would be the same if he was with me today. While looking at Natasha Aunty, watching her taking of daadi ma, uncle n Maan, I understood from where Maan got that softness in his nature

Anukal Uncle is the man of words. His behavior reflects his thoughts, mentality, honesty and hard work. He's just like my Papa. He too believes that the world is with you until you will be able to fight against all, if you can't, no one will come to you to ask how are you or what you want. So one should work hard to make his/her own unique place to live the life with pride (well this is what my Abbu taught me from my childhood, coping his words here, thnx Abbu for your advices)

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Days went like this. Its almost 3 weeks in Mumbai. On free times Pinky and Geet used to go to Khurana Mansion to spend their time with daadi ma, aunty and maan. Sometimes uncle too join with them specially in evening.

The most funiest thing is the homely rule made by Daadi ma and Maan's mom. Maan's father have to be in home before 8pm. After that the door will be closed and he have to spent his night in the outhouse along with his office files.


But poor man, only he's under that rule. Maan can go to anywhere at any time. As according to the ladies, Maan is still young and he has the right to live his life in masty.

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It's one Sunday. Both Pinky and Geet came back from Delhi the early morning. They spend last 2 days on their home and came back early to join the class.


Pinky left for the class but Geet didn't feel like going to class. So spend the whole morning in bed, sleeping soundly.

Near afternoon she went to Khurana Mansion to surprise Maan, as she was feeling bore alone in the hostel room.

Geet entered the khurana Mansion and met up with Daadi ma in the garden.

Geet: good afternoon Daadi ma

Geet chirpily wished her while hugging her from behind

Daadi ma: aree beta, aapyaha? when you came back Mumbai?

Geet: today morning Daadi, Pinky went to attend the class, but I was feeling tired, so stay in the room. But see, now I was feeling bore on that room, to yaha chali ayi

Daadi ma: bohut accha kia, come lets go inside

Both went inside.

Geet: Daadi ma where's everyone?

Daadi ma: Natasha went to see her one friend. And Maan is still in his room, may be didn't wake up

Geet: kyaaa? Its 2pm daadi. And that kumbhakaran is still in his dream land?

Daadi ma laughed at her comment.

Daadi ma: aap ek kam kyun nehi karti? Go and wake him up. Until then I will go to kitchen and see whats cooking today

Geet: main? I mean mai kaise?

Daadi ma: kyun, is there any restriction order hanging in front of his room?

Geet: nehi nehi, but daadi. Aap ka pota nangi pungi to nehi sota na?

Saying to Geet saw Daadi ma's shocked face and hurriedly put her palm in her mouth to stop her babbling big mouth. But after some seconds, both laughed out together.

Daadi ma: accha you go now, i'm going to kitchen

Geet nodded her head and headed towards stairs for reaching Maan's room

Daadi ma suddenly called her from behind,

Daadi ma: waise geet beta

Geet: Ji daadi?

Daadi ma: for extra security, you can close your eyes and enter his room

Geet: good idea Daadi

And both laughed one more time.

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Geet was knocking the room for last 5 minutes. And after getting no response she opened the door as it's not locked

Geet slightly opened the door and peeped inside. There he was. Sleeping soundly in the bed.

Geet: here I am knocking the door from so much time, and he's sleeping so peacefully. Looks like if an elephant will cross above him, he will not wake up

Geet entered the room and went near his bed.

Geet poked him with her index finger

Geet: Maan come on yaar, get up, kitni soti ho tum

Maan just shove her hand and hide his face behind the pillow

Geet: grrr, maan don't make me mad now. I hate it when someone avoid me. Maan get up now. It's late

Maan: sho sho, go away now, let me sleep

Geet: hawww, how dare you? Now you will face the worst of me

Saying so Geet grabbed the water jug and emptied it on Maan's head

Sudden water attack made maan shirk and he felt like someone just dropped him on the middle sea

He almost jumped and sat on the bed totally dumb folded

Geet started laughing while looking at his face.

Maan: what the hell are you doing here? And what's the meaning of throwing water on me Geet.

Geet was still laughing like a maniac to see Maan all wet

Maan: stop laughing now, you are looking like a horrible witch you know?

Geet stopped her laughing to hear Maan, and looking at him all angry while putting her hands on her hips

Geet: how dare you called me a witch? You monster

Saying so geet tried to hit him with the jug that she was still holding in her head. Maan tried to snatch the jug, and in this process the sudden jerk made Geet fall on Maan, while the jug was on Maan's hand.

Geet: how dare you call me that, samajhti kya ho aap ne aapko? Tum koi raaj kumar ho kya?

Geet started her pouting talking totally unaware of the position. She was sitting on Maan but is her complaining babbling she didn't even notice that

And here, the poor Maan was niharofyingGeet. From last two weeks, every night she is the one who keep peeping in his dreams.


And today also he thought Geet as one of his dream. After the water splash he actually understood that it's really her

Geet: now what made you numb? bolna nehi ata kya?

Geet asked her while putting a full stop on her babbling. Maan came out from his dream land and looked at her with a mischief smile that was playing near his lips

Geet: what?

Maan: you know Geet? I never workout with so much weight

Geet: oyee hello, wake up, kya bole jarahi ho?

Maan: Nehi samajh aya?

Geet: nehi

Maan: You have gain much weight now, aab samajh aya?

Geet: maaannn, tell me directly rather than playing the hint game

Maan smiled at her and then came close to her, which made Geet startled

Maan softly tell her: I'm trying to tell that you are sitting on me Geet and I can't take that much weight for a longer time.

Geet looked at him horrified and stood up from him like she got some current shock

Maan controlled his laughter to see her uncomfortable.

Geet: sorry' wo

Maan: relax Geet, chill, by the way what are you doing here?

Maan asked geet in order to change the topic

Geet: wo daadi send to wake you up


Maan: what a unique way to wake me up, wah

Maan said to himself and then looked at the watch and saw its already so late

Maan: oh its actually late, you wait here, I am coming in 10 minutes

Geet: ohk

Maan went to the wash room while taking his towel. Geet looked around the room

The whole room's wall was surrounded with his framed pictures, with his family, friend Adi. But one picture made her walk towards it

Black and white picture of a cute little boy. Sun light was falling on his cute little hands and he'stotal concentration was there, and that time the picture was clicked

Maan came out of the washroom and saw Geet looking at the picture.

Maan: Daada ji clicked that picture when I was only 6 months old

Geet: it's actually you?

Maan: yes, why are you giving me this look?

Geet: you were so golumolu type, pehle jyada accha look tha

Maan: geet, what's that golu molu means?

Geet: hmmm, it means cutie fluffy pie type (sam: I actually have a sister whom I call by this name, hehehe)

Maan: ermmm, stop using these horrible names on me Geet. You are actually cutting my famous singer image yaar

Geet: cute is not a bad word, waise you still have that fluffy look you know?

Maan: no ways, I work out every morning for two hours

Maan said while showing his two fingers in front of her eyes

Geet: not bad, but still you are cute, after cutting that fluffy portion for the workout

Maan: Geet, dare you change my name

Geet: dare you threat me or else I will call you as khambe

Maan: what? Geet from where you get all these names?

Geet: from my intelligent brain, you know?


Geet replied while giving him a wide cheeky smile


Maan: mere pe use maat karo, pleaseee

Geet: then don't call me witch

Maan: ohk done, but don't throw water on me again

Geet: I will do it, sorry can't help on it. But tum mujhe witch boli to you will come to know your more new names

Geet said while winking at him

Geet: now come downstairs, I'm going to Daadi ma

Saying so Geet left the room, while maan looking at her retreating figure with a puppy look

Maan: don't know how many colorful dendrites and axon she has inside her brain

Precap: ermmm, not sure


PART 35 on BLOG


Everyone happy with the update??? hope you all like today's part 😊

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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Well written...!
loved the update
how natasha made geet comfortable..
pinky n food connection is famous n u wrote very well...
wo shayad pinky kam n sam ka zyad tha isliye ice cream n all :P
dadi n geet gel up very soon.dadi is a true softy rockstar

uncle ke words are so nice...abhi pata chala ki sam mein itna patience n pyar n advices kaha se milte hai,...

Maaneet moments are always pleasure to read...
geet cuming to maan room n pouroing full water n their cute sa fight which i loved...
Maan n geet are made for each other...

Loved ur update to the core...
waiting for the next

For completing one year in Story line...May aise hi chalta rahe n updates b jaldi mile😛

to ur ff Sargoshiyan...
love dis story but wish wo prologue na ho :(

lots of love..,
vanshi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update geet mixing with maan family maneet moments fab



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nice update after a long time
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Wow!!!!! Finally update mila,,,,,,,,
Awesome superb update ...loved every single line of this part...
Maan's father to sweet lag raha hai..
Maan's bedroom part was fabulous...
Oops maan k itne saare names...LOL
N the last line was ROFL!!! Really very funny...

Update soon...gayab mat hona...
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Awesome update...loved it
Maaneet moment were superb
waiting for next update continue soon
thanks for pm

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