MG-SS ADHOORI DASTAN/epilogue pg 81 [completed]

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

hi thanks 4 da pm 4 chap 3 bt read chap 4 n 5! Intense emotional updates! Wt a twist! So Kajai is his first love n is pregnant! Maan loves Geet! She is also pregnant! Maan tells Kajal he will take care of her bt loves Geet! Well written! update soon

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

loved the teaser

can't wait for the update

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sandymg

@sandymg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

just read all the parts...

what a twist..poor maan he is in such a fix!!!

this ss has so much of emotions that you feel it through you...

the way you have potrayed how maan, geet and kajal are suffering is simply awesome, i felt as if it is happening in front of me...

it is just so emotional that it makes you cry...

i am not only talking about this ff... each and every ff you write, its makes you feel so good because you can go through their emotions and understand them very well...

just love the way you describe👏👏👏

continue soon...

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crazyfanofdsdv

@crazyfanofdsdv

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

loved the all three of the updates

so glad that geet is able to think of kajal in a situation like this

so sad that maan is stuck between his first love and his current love

can't wait for the next update

so glad that maan has realized that geet is the one he wants to be with

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dumas

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

AWESOME UPDATE GLAD HE WANTS GEET AND THEIR BABY AND GEET IS STILL EVEN IN THIS CONDITION THINKING ABOUT KAJAL THE HER BABY GLAD KAJAL REALIZED EVEN MAAN HEART BEAT FOR GEET HOPE NOTING HAPPENS TO THEIR BABY LOVED THE UPDATE