MG-SS ADHOORI DASTAN/epilogue pg 81 [completed]

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

part 5
nice part dear...
cont soon...

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prati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

di jst read d chp 2-5 & it was sweet bt had lots of pain too... so, maan's past was d reason 4 him to be so rude in strting days bt slowly she made her place in his heart... bt nw dat past wid his seed is back in der lyf & geet didnt knew abt it till kajal came... & maan again went in dilemma whom to choose & whom to leave bt aftr geet's condition he knws dat he cant live widout her & she is his soulmate & kajal is nw jst his responsibility... bt she will hv a adhoori dastan of der love stry??????? bt still geet is angry wid d fact dat y she wasnt informed abt it b4 d marriage... i hope things get bttr soon... cont soon di will be waiting...

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

GEET IS ALSO PREGNANT

WHAT WILL MAAN DO TO RESOLVE THE ISSUE

HE DOESNT LOVE KAJAL ANYMORE BUT HAS A RESPONSIBILITY TO HIS CHILD AND HER

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

heart wrenching updates ...geet is broken beyond repair now ...

maan ka past wapas aagaya aur wo bhi unborn bay k saath its really unbearable ...

all want k geet sacrifse kare maan k liye ...i hope sab ye na chahe k geet maan ko devorse de k man aur kaajal ki shaadi kawa de?

maan gave right to geet to take decision in futur /.ubt geet maan se itna pyaar karti he k hamehsa maan ki khushi k liye hi sochegi ...

geet is also presgnent but she is thinking k maanko tension de di is news main ...abhi geet ka state of mind aesa he k wo kuch samjh nahi pa rahi par she is feling alone ...

another storm is coming ? ab wo kya he maan ko tension se freee karne k liye kahi geet khud ka abortion na karwa le?

eagerly waiting for next ...update assoon as posible cant wait for long

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Bhanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

OMG..this is such a emotional ride..so much pain, love, anguish, hurt, care and understanding..all the emotions are here and to make things worse both are Pregnant but Maan is clear that he just loves Geet and knows his responsibilities too..but what is Geet's stand regarding this matter and the precap of another storm, omg is it Geet gonna leave house before Kajal does and does not realize Maan's love and now Maan wanting to keep Kajal in the outhouse, now how can he think that will wrk, does her constant presence remind them of the past though their love and understanding is strong..so eager to know whats in store for and what is this storm in precap all about

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maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Superb 👏Update

ohhh again geet in lots of pain n 😭crying n not able to face her

n after all pain she got one more hurt by dadi about her own parents's knowing about maan's past n they all hided from her
poor girl not able to sherd more tears
😭😭😭
maan's feelings n thoughts about geet n his love for geet made him took right decision ⭐️

Awesome writing dear 👏👏👏... the way u wrote alls pain love feelings ... hats of to u n spe last part n maan's realization on geet's fainting n his reaction on doc send him out, maaneet happiness ... their baby... AMAZING 😃
Love it
😊
happy with maan's decision n his trust in geet trust in him

one more storm 😲... n leap ?????

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Smily

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

nice update

so now geet is also pregnant

nd maan realize that now he doesn't live without geet

nd kajal is also understanding it

but precap is scary now wht storm is coming??

continue soon

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Twist pe twist...

Story's name is Adhoori Dastaan. M nt sying giv sad ending coz i hate sad endings spclly in maaneet stories.bt Adhoori Dastaan will b of Kajal na? It means it story of her bt shown thru othr pov. Its adhoori Dastaan of Kajal n Maan...
Nt fair...
Concept is gud bt maaneet me se ek ki ehmiyat kam ho gyi...
Jus wrote wat i felt,dnt even knw if its logicl or not.

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sona rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

lovely update yar,very beautifully written.

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#340

Chapter 6

In wee hours maan went to his room and shocked to see geet sitting on swing and watching sky silently that is surely not her nature.

"Geet" maan kept his hand on her shoulder slowly not want to startle her at this time and status.

"Why you did this to me? Why" geet whispered while her tears rolling continuously.

Maan down cast his eye to thought at last geet is accusing him for all this but he even didn't had slightest idea that kajal is alive if he knew it, he will turned sky ups and down just to searched her but he took all accusation quietly as he understood geet status also to his husband love and his child in another woman worm is something that no girl going to tolerate.

"Geet!!! I will take any punishment, from now on you will decide everything for us" maan surrendered in front of geet and sat near her on his knees and took her hands in his hand.

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