MG-SS ADHOORI DASTAN/epilogue pg 81 [completed] - Page 28

Chapter 4

Why are you confused in first chap geet is thinking about past starting days of her marriage... than some past which continued in 2nd chap after this story come in present again in chap 2 where maan and geet is loving each other making love which is not first time as geet told to her tap that how passionate maan is... after this story is moving in present only.

Write now there marriage is 6 month old (first 3 month maan didn't except geet but after slap incident he starts to take this relation seriously and in last 3 month there love reached on peak because of geet jolly nature and maan hunger for love after kajal.. maan didn't told her about past as sometime he forget sometime geet stopped him) and kajal died 7 month ago, where maan and kajal made love 8 month ago.

I think now everything is clear.

2. This ss had happy ending with a feeling of adhoori dastan.

Chapter 5

Maan went in his and geet room right now to talk with geet some time.

Maan entered in his room and found it empty which raised his heart beat. But a figure caught his attention which is sitting in their room balcony, from her postures maan is able to tell that she is crying her heart out which made maan stopped in his track, how he faced her in starting of their marriage she sacrificed everything and again she did that, which made maan her lifetime slave. Maan didn't able go to her and talk with her so he left to talk with kajal first.

Maan entered in kajal room and found her all lost, her body is there on the bed but she is not in this world. Maan went and sat near her feet.

"Where were you all the time kajal? How you survived? Tell me everything please, I thought because of me I lost you and baby, I came there that day but those villagers killed you and throw you in valley" maan said in broken voice.

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Precap: another storm and one month leap. last 2 chap left with epilogue.

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