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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread
waiting for the update

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congrats on yr new thread...will be waiting for yr next update
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Waiting for ur triple update in thread 3 😉 😛 😊
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congrats for the new thread..
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update kab milega...???
it's already past 10...
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Thanku Guys for the Likes and comments.. And sorry for the late update..😳

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Part 11

I dint wait for maan to return, felt like having some lone tym in my room. the silence in my room gave many answers to my unsaid questions. But for the first tym even the room failed to answer my questions. Y did he bought it in my name? just to make me his maid? Then he could have bought it in his own ya phir parents name!! did he too reciprocate my feelings? But hw can a rich handsome man like maan love a simple girl!! But then his care.. may be b/c he felt he is responsible for my state!! But above all that hw he got my sign in those papers!! I have signed only contract papers but then I read all the conditions before that!! Oh god!! I felt my head spinning with numerous questions. I can't talk to my mom since she doesn't noe the truth. May be I should talk to Aryan!! Haan!! That will be fine..
I took slow steps towards Aryan and saw him sleeping on couch with mouth wide open!! He is looking like a cute baby. Mom tried to make rid of that habit. Once she even stuffed laddoo in his mouth!! But he being the Aryan, ate that and next tym he made his mouth open more wider, so that she could stuff pakora, jalebi's etc.. shaking all those funny moments I was about to wake him up when a loud horn of some vehicle stopped me in tracks.
I ran outside to give whomever the person is, a peace of mind, but got shocked to see a familiar looking red BMW in the pavement. The car door opened and there stood my hot sleepless question!! He was looking so angry. But y? did he came to noe that I read the documents!! U r gone geet beta!! But I made the table look like I haven't touched any files!!
Suddenly I realized he was taking long steps towards me. oh no!! wat if Aryan sees. Still I speak to him, I can't make maan and Aryan meet. I rushed towards him and BANG'!!

Agar girne ka etna shauk hain toh akele girthi na.. mujhe kyun girathi ho?
With the sudden bang I was lying on top of him and he was staring at me confusedly.
What?
Geet.. u r so unromantic.. it was supposed to be a maahi moment..
Maahi moment?
Haan.. haven't u seen that in serial where hero heroine bumps into each other and they stare like the world ceased to exist!!
Tum serials bhi dekthe ho?
I asked shocked!! MSK and serials, unimaginable!!
Na.. mama dekthi hain.. sometimes I vl accompany her.. actually If we think keenly I wonder there will be a maahi moment!! Whole the tym hero will be thinking when the director will say cutand when he can remove the moti heroine from his body, rt?
I too thot abt that point. May be he is rt!! but wait!! Did he call me moti indirectly!! I gave him an angry glare and stood up, he too followed my actions.
What r u doing here?
Suddenly his playful face changed to angry one.
Why dint u inform me before going?
Wo mein bhool gayi thi..
U were unwell geet.. pata hain when I came back I rushed to c u but when I dint find u I got tensed and all kind of negative thots rushed to my mind. Thanks to nakul, he said u were fine. Dubara aise ki toh dekh le na.
I m sorry..
I said meekly sensing his anger for the first tym. He calmed a little bit. Next second his palms checked my throat and forehead for temperature. I was feeling goose bumps all over the body. And the result, I started to sweat.
U r sweating.. acha hain.. it's a sign of ur temperature coming down. Seems like my health drink did it work.
I smiled a little. He came closer to me and kissed my forehead. I looked at him unblinkingly.

Sleep tight cutie.. and dream about me..
He walked away winking. I stared at his direction till his car vanished from my sight. Unko kya pata ki my dream is he himself..
I turned and walked towards my house. Aryan came out yawning.
Tum kahaan thi ? what were u doing there?
Kuch nahi.. I .. I want to talk.
Kya baat hain geet? U look serious..
First of all when will mom come?
She will be late.
Ok..
Can we sit outside and talk?
Yeah sure.. come..
Maan's POV
I m feeling so happy to have geet in my life. At first I thot of her as an innocent beauty. After all she is the first girl who dint fell for my charms. Then her undying koshish made me attract even more. That's y she tried to cook even when she doesn't noe the C of cooking. Then the day when I came to noe that she is the owner of the company "At ur service" but she came KM just for company's reputation I fell for her more. I closely watched her the 2 days after the challenge without her knowledge. Her humbleness, naughtiness, care.. pata nahi kab mujhe usse pyar hogaya. So I played the big game. day by day I kept on giving some clues. I almost made her feelings confirmed when I saw jealousy in her eyes for violin. Pata nahi kab meri dil ki haalat who jaanegi.. the day we confess our love I vl give my gift, her dream. Esliye toh I bought it under her name by keeping the papers inside the contract papers.
I had the sudden urge to c her once more, so I took a U.turn. But the sight made me shocked. geet was hugging and kissing cheeks of another man. Damn! I can't c the face of man, since his back is facing towards me. she was looking very happy. No.. no one can come between Geet Handa and Maan Singh Khurrana. Whoever it is will have to pay. Geet is mine..
lakshmi, lily, maansee, prafulla, mayapari.. Thanku Guys for spamming the thread and waiting patiently. Love u Guys... 😃Did u all love the new edited banner from Jass ??


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Edited by Remya_Pillai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooow...
dat was nyc update...
bt short nai tha...kitni jaldi khtm ho gaya...

o teri...😆😆
maine n geet bechari ne kya kya socha tha about his anger...bt yaha to he was angry on her for leaving dat too widout telling...😃
yaar ya maan kinna cute hai...😳😳
he actually watch serials...😲
i jst luv him...😳😳

maan ne jaroor aryan ko dekha hoga...😆😆
abi maza aaega...😛😛


me despratly waiting for nxt update...
Edited by deepali1022 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update

sach mein geet unromantic hain ya maan yaar

mahi and serials woh bhi maan can i imagine it dear

and last maan ne geet ko aryan ko kiss karte dekha and he did not even see his face

poor aryan ab kya hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratzzz for the new thread...
wow flirty n gussa...
lov this hotty naughty😳
uff geet ke smile se hi gayab ho gaya uska gussa..
maans POV was super...
geet n her crazy mind...
abhi bhi confused kyun hain...uff...
me waiting for some more kitchen romance...
atleast geets dad ll be able to put some brains in her...
maan JEALOUS...😳
lol woh bhi geet ke dad se😆😆...
ll be waiting for next update...
Edited by mayapari - 12 years ago

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