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MG SS : Dastaan e Wafa



PART 17


Jisse Zindagi Dhoon rahi hai
Kya yeh woh makam mera hai

Maan entered in the church all restless wanting to see her fine by himself ...n what he saw made his heart feel at peace instantly ..geet was kneeling in front of mother merry .. eyes closed praying ..her face was so serene that he felt a pang of anger hitting him to have put her life in danger ..

She opened her eyes n looked up at him .. completely at ease as if she knew he is here .. n smiled at him brightly ..he couldn't be more at ease then having her all fine ..

Aap yahan ...?? Waise acha hi hua ..wohh maan actually wohh minister k ..//

I know geet .(maan looked away guilty not being able to look at her) ... n they have been taken care of for now ..u don't need to worry ...

Ohh ..tu aapke jasoos abhi bhi mere peeche hain ..iss hi liye aap yahan aagaye ..

Maan couldn't believe this girl ..few minutes earlier her life was endangered n here she is smiling as if everything is completely normal n he shook his head sighing last 15 min had been hell for him n this girl is taking it all so casually ..n then she said peeking at him from side ways ..

Waise agar meri jaan khatre mien hugi tu aap aise hi mujhe bachane aajayege ...humesha ..

Maan turned n looked at her ..her face was as always glowing with the smile don't know y but she is always so happy sometimes he envies her ...how can she remain happy all the time even after knowing the danger that lurks behind her all the time ..

Tumhain shak hai ..??

Nahi bilkul nahi ..(maan smiled at her instant reply her trust in him was his happiness rare but seeing her eyes so full of trust for him makes him contented).. mujhe yaqeen hai mien jab bhi kisi problem mien phasoongi aapp zaror aayenge ...

Acha abb chalo yahan se ..we need to leave ...

Geet saluted him animatedly n laughed taking her bag with her ..going ahead while maan stood thr lost in her laughter ..

Ya chain se bas ruk jau
Kyu dil yeh mujhe kehta hai

Geet n maan sat in the car n she continued telling him about her new project of management .. her day at college even congratulated him for getting over the case officially it was in the news this morning .. maan sat thr silent pretending to listeing to her when infact his full focus was on the lone strand dancing on her cheek ..actually making him feel the forbidden desire he thought he would never feel ever again ...

Jasbaat nai se mile hai
Jaane kya asar yeh hua hai

Geet stopped her ranting when she saw maan's hand coming close to her ..it was enough that he was dressed to kill in her fav red n black combo that he was testing her patience by looking at her like that ...she felt she would melt under his heated gaze ...n she to avoide all her gande gande thoughts she continued talking ..but now her voice got stuck in her throat n she held her breath seeing his hand advancing towards her ..n ever so slowly he caressed her cheek with the insides of his palm ..the heat from him made her face flush n he tucked the strand of her hair at the back of her head lost in her ..while she closed her eyes in complete submission ...he almost forgot his sanity but then her closed eyes n that innocent submission made him remember the exact moment that happened 8 years back ..neha looked just this innocent n vulnerable lost in him when he had first kissed her ..n then she didn't talked with him for next 2 weeks ...he jerked back at his place realizing what he was doing .. n geet opened her eyes embarrassed n looked down smiling with a blush painting her cheeks red .. n he fumbled at his words ..

I ...wohh geet wohh hair strand ..mien bas ..

Geet smiled looking at his troubled face so embarrassed n so cute she could just eat him alive at this moment ..but oppsss geet control ...n she held his hand that was clutching the seat ..

I know ..n I trust u ...😳

Maan looked at her shocked n saw her eyes completely smitten ..lost in him ..she didn't knew what she was saying n what she was getting herself involved in ..but he knew n the most f**king paart of this all is he still feels contented having her trust even when he knows he is just going to break it one day ...but may be she'll get over him till then ...may be he wont have to ..may be just may be ...

Ek aans mili phir mujhko
Jo kabul kisine kiya hai

Ha..Kisi shaayar ki ghazal
Jo de ruh ko sukoon ke pal
Koi mujhko yun mila hai jaise banjaare ko ghar


They reached the small hill maan usually goes when he wants to be alone ..all the guards were at a long distance this place was both away from the chaos of the city n peaceful .. don't know y but he wanted geet to accompany him here ...n here he is standing by his car's bonnet looking at the scorching sun while geet stood by his side all confused ..

Hum yahan kyun aaye hain ..??

Coz that's where I come when I want to be away from the whole world ..at peace ..

Geet just hummed her response looking at him lost ..she knew thr is no use saying anything he isn't listening ...she knew he is disturbed by what happened today ..n holding himself responsible for it ..she tried to be patient for an hour then started making noises to get him talking or at least scold her ..but he wouldn't even acknowledge her presence n finally she gave up n stood in front of him with her hands on her hips ...

Listen if u have brought me here to give ur silent treatment I m better off from here okie ..

She was about to walk away when maan held her hand n stopped her ..she glared at him turning her head towards him n he released her hand n sighed ..

Sorry ..its just ..i m not in the best of my mood to talk ..

Geet turned n held his hands ..n said eagerly ..

Then take it out... (maan looked at her onfused n then looked back at the vast spread city infront of them but she was adamant n took him up to the edge of the hill).. here see this is city responsible for ur stress ..take it out on it ...(maan released his hand from her n started moving back)..

Stop it geet ...

No u stop it ...stop blaming urself for everything wrong happening here maan ..coz sometimes its just destiny ..

Maan looked away n murmured to himself ..
Mene jo neha k saath kiya that wasn't destiny ...

Geet couldn't hear him but knew its something on his mind ...n she stepped closer to him ..her back was facing the hill a step back n she would trip down while maan faced the hill lost in his thought when he felt her holding his hands ...firstly he was shocked n almost pushed her back but stopped seeing her fumbling n she held his palm balancing herself entangling her soft small fingers with his hard long ones ..

Apne haath phela kar (she took his hand n spread them).. ankhien band kar k (with one hand she close dhis eyes).. uss insaan k bare mien socho jis se aap iss dunya mien sab se ziada pyaar karte hu ..(neha's smiling face came infront of nhis posture relaxed geet could feel it in the less stiffness of his posture n smiled).. abb gehri saans lo ...(he did).. n exhale all ur worry in this air ...(he did).. let this city bear the weight of it ...

maan saw all those happy moments with neha ..those times which were the golden days of his life n he opened his eyes n found hers' captivating his ...he didn't knew how but he did felt light .. her smile ...her hold on his shoulder ..those hairs that now here out of her braid flowing freely with the air ..he circled his arm around her waist n bent down at her face with an intention to kiss her cheeks but then decided otherwise ...n with his breath teasing her senses he whispered a

thank u ..😳

geet smiled n hid herself in his arms ..n they made thr way back to his car .. after having thr lunch brought by his guards ..maan discussed her management assignment n helped her select a topic ..n she thanked him ..n finally with the sun going down the horizon leaving a pink hue on the sky they also left the hill n maan dropped her to her caf ...

Naye mausam ki sehar
Ya sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai jaise banjaare ko ghar

Hmm..

Maan was sitting in the caf ..as usual having his coffee it was Monday n he didn't saw her for last 2 days ..he purposely didn't ..he wanted to stay away from her ..the growing attraction from her side wasn't in anyones favor but she looked so happy today ..curious he strained his ears to hear her convo with her friend pinky ..

I just love them pinky ..they both r angels ..un dono k saath kaise mera time guzar jaata hai pata hi nahi chalta ..

I know warna Saturday tak tera mood kitna kharaab tha .. we all were praying k tere fav students sun ki cls bunk na Karen ..warna pta nhi kya krti tu ...waise abb batayegi kyun mood kharaab kar k bethi thi 2 din se ..

Arre kuch nahi wohh ..bas aaj mera management assignement ka submission hai na tu bas thori tension thi iss hi liye ..

Maan kept the bills on the napkin ..n left not pleased knowing about her last 2 days ..she shouldn't be getting attached with him like this ..he will have to make sure that the minister leave her to stay in peace ..n then he would also make an exit from her life for her own good ..

(Instrumental)

Today was thr anniversary ...it has been 8 years since he confessed his love to neha .. the day always bring awful memories ..n usually he locks himself up in his room for the whole day to mourn n curse over his f**ked up life ..but today he out driving at 7 in the morning coz he just got to know geet didn't make it to the caf today n hasn't stepped out of her house .. which means she is skipping her college as well ..

2 hours later he sat in her home playing lodu ..actually learning it again ..she has high fever n since meera had am imp presentation she or amy couldn't stay back neither geet would let them n maan couldn't leave here alone seeing her b.fast still untouched ..knowing her she would sleep herself all through the day without having anything ..so he stayed n now he was fighting with a 18 years old girl over this game ..coz she was cheating ...damn the nerves of this girl she was trying to fool MSK ...

Geet tum cheating kr rhe hu ..

Aha ha ..jab haarne lage tu geet tum cheating kr rhi hu ..g nahi chaliye dice dijeye ..

Nahi bilkul nahi ...tum galat rule se khel rhi hu I remember some bits yeh galat hai ..

Maan mera dice dijeye meri turn hai ..(but he hid it behind him)

Nahi first u miss geet should learn to play fair ..(geet stood on her knees over the bed hovering him trying to dodge him n take the dice)..

Maan dice dijeye na ..(maan retreated n held her hand which was now att his back trying to take the dice) ..

Not until u admit u cheated ..

I didn't ..abb dijeye mujeh dice

n she tried with another arm but maan didn't bulge n they both ended up coming too close to feel other's heart beating furious against each other ..maan's breath fanning her shoulder n her raged breathing making a teasing contact b/w her soft bossoms n his hard chest ...he clutched her arms tight n she lost her balance almost falling over him n they both came back from thr trance ...n sat at farther distances ...

after a few initial minutes of embarrassment coz of thr closeness .. both glanced at the lodu board ..smiling at thr act a few minutes back how childish they got ...they couldn't believe they were fighting over such a silly thing ..n then thr eyes met n they both laughed whole heartedly ..

Jaise koi kinara
Deta ho sahara
Mujhe woh mila kisi mod par
Koi raat ka tara
Karta ho ujaala

Aise hi roshan kare woh shehar
Dard mere woh bhula hi gaya
Kuch aisa asar hua
Jeena mujhe phir se woh sikha raha

Hmm..Jaise baarish kar de tar
Ya marham dard par
Koi mujhko yun mila hai jaise banjaare ko ghar
Naye mausam ki sehar
Ya sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai jaise banjaare ko ghar


(Instrumental)

After a few days her marks for management assignment were announced n she had topped n as per the bet b/w dishti n tanmay geet's friend ..if geet topped tanmay would give all an ice cream treat n if rahul topped drishti would ..
They all left the college early ...with a huge mass exiting th main gate n the guards missed geet's group exiting n they kept waiting but geet didn't came n then they went in to search for her ..n she wasn't in the college ...they didn't knew where she is they went to the caf but she didn't reached thr as well ..worried n scared of MK's temper they called gaurav ..n as expected he yeld at them ..worried he left the office ...but maan got to know of his sudden exit from KC ..he got suspicious but he had a meeting to attend n he went for it .. here geet n her group continued to enjoy .. the best part about her friend was even though thr was competition thr wasn't jealousy n hatred ...they loved n she knew even if rahul would have topped they would have partied the same way ...later meera n amy too joined them ..
Here after 30 min maan's meeting ended n he inquired about gaurav n got to know he is still not back ...he felt something fishy n called him ..n as expected gaurav told him geet is missing ..maan almost got panicked in front of his staff but then composed himself n drove off from his office but even after an hour he couldn't find ..his patience was giving up n his mind was thinking of all the worst scenarios geet could be in cursing himself to have put her life in danger ...n finally he got the news geet is in her caf ..
Maan drove maniacally to her caf n heard her giggling with an old couple ..he sighed looking at her fine but then felt anger rushing in filling in veins with poison thinking where did she went dodging her guards ...but he couldn't possibly walk in n ask her ...so he went back to office n worked ..or trie to work ..since geet was late for her duty she had to work extra hours n she stayed in the caf till closing ..n left when jaspal uncle locked the caf ..


Uska tha yeh chehra
Deta hai jo pehra
Jaane chupata kya dil ka samandar
Auron ko toh har dam
Saya deta hai
Woh dhoop mein hai khada khud magar
Chot lagi hai usse phir kyun?
Mehsoos mujhe ho raha
Dil tu bata de kya hai irada tera

Maan felt the restlessness growing in him seeing her walk out from the caf but he waited till jaspal uncle was at a safe distance n then came out n followed her a few big steps he was able to catch her n he jerked her towards him scaring the hell out of her ..

Just what the hell do u think u were doing dodging ur guards today ..tumhain pata hai yeh kitna dangerous hu sakta tha ..kuch bhi hu sakta tha tumhain .do u get it geet (geet looked confused seeing him practically seething in anger with red flaring eyes).. now don't give me that innocent look geet ... I m trying to protect u here god damit please stop being so childish ... aaj kuch hu jata tumhain tu kya karta mien ...

Hmm..Main parinda besabar
Tha uda jo darbadar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai jaise banjaare ko ghar

After a few more sore scolding maan was bit relaxed n get got to explain where she was n probably what would have happened ...maan wasn't satisfied it scared the hell out of him today knwing he has lost her ..it was worst feeling he experienced in years yes he has felt even worst then this but it has been so long he felt any emotion other than self hatred that today he couldn't handle the fear of loosing her ..

Naye mausam ki sehar
Ya sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai jaise banjaare ko ghar

N for the first time he realized it isn't going to e easy for him as well to leave her ..all this long he always thought she would be the only one who is going to get hurt when this will be over her attraction towards him would make it hell a lot more difficult to cope up with the situation but today he got to realize it would need every ounce of his will power to walk out of her life .. coz a nasty selfish part of him has began to like the similarity in geet n neha ..the warmth he felt from being with geet is same as he use to feel 8 years back with neha .. n thr is this selfish part of him who doesn't want to loose it but he knows he is done being spoiling others life for his selfishness ...n he would no longer spoil geet's life for his own selfishness it is bad enough that she is physically attracted to him n now he can't add up to this coz surely geet can't be any way a part of his complicated life ..thr is no space for anyone in his heart n life except neha ..n when she will return everything will be just like it was when she left ..

Jaise banjaare ko ghar
Jaise banjaare ko ghar
Jaise banjaare ko ghar


Geet came out of her trance receiving a smack by meera ..

Tu phir khus hi khus muskura rhi hai ...get up girl aaj Sunday hai u have to reach at ur school at 9 ...

Hmmm ...

Was all she said getting up from her bed ...last 2 months had been amazing ..that night in the middle of the road she finally found someone who cares for her ..who has concern for her ..someone who will be affected with her presence n absence ..someone who has a very special place in her life n may be even she has gained a tiny miny place in his heart ...geet blushed just thinking about it ...she didn't knew what love is but since that night when she felt the concern oozing out from maan's eyes for her she felt herself falling for him every second ..his hard exterior ..his soft heart ..his scolding for not wearing a sweater ..his appreciating nod at his coffee ..his delighted eyes while having her hand made pasta .. his laughter ...that was the first time she heard him laugh ..lodu wasn't so fun ever ..she chuckled what it ended up at ..n the red hue covered her face making feel the butterfly dancing in her tummy ...n she finished her bath n stepped out to change smiling at herself .. n then saw the clock its 8' O clock already ..damn she is late ...she was suppose to meet nishaan n sneha before class ..


***^^***
pheww its done ...yeppieee hope u'll like it
please please please ...do leave ur reviews n hiit the like button ..really nervous about how it came out to be ..

waiting for ur response ...

PRECAP :- Maan getting J of Amy ...😆😉 Nishaan n Sneha back ..😳

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amazing parts banjara beautiful song maan also attract to geet but he doesnt want her to be part of his life
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Nice update
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amazing parts dear
i loved it


thanks for updating 👏
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khud k frustrations kyun geet k upar nikal rahe ho maan...geet toh tumhre zindagi mein aur dil mein bas chuki hai...dekhte hai kais nikalte ho usse...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Geet hided the usb in church
Maan scared to know the ministers men back after her
He stayed with her n played ludoWhen she is sick
Both getting closer
Geet s missing has made him realize t will be hard for him to o
Nice parts
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Sobia it's amazing. Geet is hiding that USB from maan , it's not right. I know she is doing all this because she started to love maan and wants to be near him. But this act if her is dangerous for maan and for her itself too. But if I look from other side, it's not wrong as maan is spending his time with geet only for protecting her other wise he would never come across her. Maaneet feeling are going more profound, they just loving each other company. Geet wants to live her whole life with maan but maan is planning to go away from geet as his past is having some horrible incident. waiting for next dear
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hi thanks 4 da pm n 4 updating! sorry 4 troubling u 4 updates! Lovely long detailed updates! Well written! superb song! Geet enjoys the time with Maan! she dodges the minister's goons n hides the USB! Maan goes 2 her at the church! she explains bt he knows! Maan takes with him! Maan falling 4 her bt controls! Geet assures him! Maan thinks abt Neha! Maan takes care of Geet! Maan angry wen she dodges his guards! he shouts her! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome parts
maan is neglecting his feeling for geet

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