MG SS : Dastaan -E- Wafa *|| Part 18 @ Page 74 ||* 21-June-15 - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 15
awesome...
oh they are telling the others their story...
and Maan had a feeling that Geet might be hiding the USB?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
great updates waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet crazy fr maan...
Despite geet saying that she didn't hv the USB maan still checked her lockers...
Waiting fr nxt prt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I wonder where she have hidden it !!!
I think it would be some place where Maan would think of the least.

So he got to get glimpse of her craziness.

Nice chapters
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Posted: 11 years ago
MAAN CAN USEE GEET'S CRAZINESS FOR HIM AND IT SCARES HIM AS HE KNOWS THAT HE WIL NOT BE ABLE TO RECIPROCATE HER FEELINGS
BUT WHO WAS NEHA
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum parts
sooo maan was nt really fully convinced with geet n he hd searched her house again...nw both married 😊 waiting to knw more n who was neha??
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
loved past n present...
geet hide maan's USB !!!
he searched everywhere...
loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
loved all d chpt
no one wants to mature before age
even if they do there is always a part that wants to be felt protected cherished pampered n when u get that chance there is no right or wrong being selfish sometime is right
Maan is a mystery he was married?
is nishaan his kid
abt usb i think she shld hide it somewhere near Maan so it can be safe.
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Posted: 10 years ago

hi all,
here after a long time ..missed me ..??😳
ah ..my apologies to all those waiting readers of this story ...especially khwaishfan i did saw ur waiting posts but couldn't update ...
was completely blank with the story line for this one so couldn't type for it

at last thanks to my dear friend Priyanka aka priya_21 i managed type something ..
i don't know how good it is ..but this is what i could come up for this one ..

hope ull enjoy this double update

thanks all those people who commented n liked the last update


hope u'll enjoy reading

luv ya
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Posted: 10 years ago

MG SS : Dastaan e Wafa



PART 16


Pagli si hai woh ..
Mere liye har pal ..
Ek paheli si hai woh ..
Kabhi itni samajhdaar ..
Tou kabhi ek nanhi bachi si hai woh ..
Mushkil hai buhat usko samajhna ..
Par ab meri zindagi mien ..
Ek aadat si ban gayi hai woh ..
Mere hasne ki waja bhi hai ..
Par kabhi buhatt pareshaan bhi kar deti hai woh ..
Aankhon se ujhal hujaye tou
Hadd se ziada mujhe beqaraar bhi kar deti hai woh ..
Itni asaani se har mushkil mien muskuraati hai ..
Kbhi kbhi tou apni batoon se mjhe hi rola deti hai woh ..
Kaise karoon mien byaan yeh dastaan -e- wafa ..
Koi rishta nahi humara ..na sukh ka ..na dukh ka ..
Par phir bhi ...
Kabhi mien uska humsaya ..
Tou kabhi mere akelepan ki saathi hai woh ...


Life was never this beautiful for geet ever .. the smile never left her ..the joy overwhelmed her ..she was never tired even after the long tiring day ...just thinking about meeting him again tomorrow at the caf brought a smile to her face ...meera often use to caught her smiling to herself ...but geet never disclosed her secret .. her group at college were happy seeing her so excited all the time though they complained to her about not being thr for their gatherings but geet never mind ..she never bothered about anything else ...coz now it wasn't just early morning serving of a cup of coffee that let her see him .. he use to drop by often sometimes she caught him in his car far away from her when she would be out with meera or amy .. specially on Sundays when she use to go to her school for dance classes .. so much so that she began expecting him thr ...which was so stupid he is a business tycoon he can't be running behind u every time geet ...but then a tiny miny hope was always thr .. with a fear as well ...fear to get caught by him ...fear of him knowing about her lie ...fear to loose that USB ...fear to loose him ...the thought alone shivered her with anxiety ..since last one month she has become so use to him being around that she doesn't know what she will do without him being in her life .. the feeling she had for him has intensified tenfolds ..n now she knows she is attracted towards that geek god of a person ... she is very well aware of the fact that she is stepping into a dark tunnel n she has no clue where it will end up ...but she is loving the feel of having him by her side always to protect her ..his words from a month back in the church still echoes in her mind crystal clear ...n she sighed hugging herself close feeling the cold wind of morning on her skin ...remember the day she had stepped out of her home to hide the USB safe somewhere ..

Standing in front of her college gate she sighed biding bye to all her friends ..only she know how difficult it had been to decline thr offer for movie ...but she needed to do this ..she can't have it in her house anymore ...meera just found it yesterday n asked about it ..she had to make up a story even she didn't believed n now she had to hide it somewhere safe ...she walked a few steps ahead n away from the college vicinity hiding behind a large tree at the boundary of a park she checked her bag to make sure she has the USB ...but couldn't find it panicked n horrified she started checking in thr frantically n finally got hold of it .. sighing with relief she took it out n smiled looking at it ..

Thank god babaji ...agar yehh khoo jaati tou pata nahi kya huta ...abb mujhe ise jaldi se chupana huga ..

But her relief was short lived when she heard a hush whisper of few guys behind her ..

Yeh wahi hai na ..??

Han wahi hai ...isske bag mien hi who USB daali thi guddu ne uss raat ..aur phir najane kahan se wohh saala MSK aagaya tha ...

Court mien wohh USB uss ameerzaade ne nahi nikali matlab wohh USB abb bhi iss larki ke paas hai .. boss ko phone laga aur puch kya karna hai ..

Geet was sweating in horror realizing they were probably the goons from that night only the miniser's men ..oh god she is in big trouble n the USB is with her as well ...shit ..!! she saw them dialing on thr phone n she took the opportunity n climbed the tree n jumped in the park's boundary wall n crossed it reaching the church with a shortcut avoiding being caught by them with the USB ...while on the other side the 2 goons called for thr partners as instructed by the minster they had to retrive the USB from that girl coz they had seen her having that USB in her hand ...but the girl slipped just in few moments they looked down to dial on thr mbl n now were searching for her all along the streets ...but geet had successfully entered the church n to her luck it was empty ...situated in a less populated area the church wasn't that well funded n people also didn't visited it in week days so she was relaxed in here ..trying to locate a suitable place to hid the USB ..n due to her negligence she tripped over the carpet flooring which was torn from a place ..but gladly the father came in time n held her before falling ..nervously she straightened ..

Sorry father ..mne dekha nahi ..

Its okie my child ..waise bhi yeh torn carpet tumhara nahi humara galti hai .. (he sighed in disappointment).. ajj sab ka paas apna house decorate karne ka money hai but god k ghar ke liye nahi ..

Geet chewed on her lips n asked rather carefully trying to fake innocence n concern ..

Father yeh carpet flooring kabhi change nahi huyi ..??

Last 5 years se tu nahi huyi ..but u go ahead n pray to mother merry ..kya pata tumhare pray se hi log ka sin kam hujaye..

Geet smiled nervously at the old aged father who clearly seemed disappointed with the world so full of sinners ...as he walked ahead she sighed coz even she is here to commit a sin ..kneeling infront of mother merry she prayed for forgiveness n hid the USB beneath the carpet flooring of the church under the wodden stand ...(sorry sorry sorry I don't know exactly what its called on which they place thr hand n pray in the church 🤢 sorry if anybody know let me know ill edit it ..😃) so it would be safe from coming under people's foot n would be safe .. she had to take this risk now ..she has to keep faith in her destiny n in mother merry for keeping it safe here in front of her ...

While Geet was in side hiding the USB ..a black BMW reached thr n stopped with a screeching sound coz of its speed n maan stepped out followed by guarav all worried n walked towards his guards he placed for geet's security ..n gaurav asked his men dressed in casuals

Geet kahan hai ..?? n wohh log geet tak puhanche kaise ..??

Sir wohh geet college se aaj caf k bajaye iss taraf aagayi ..we were confused so we kept a close watch as usual n unfortunately who minister ke 1 goon jo uss raat hum se bach gya tha wohh yahin tha n he recognized geet ..

It was maan's desperate voice this time questioning them ..

Tell me they didn't caught her

No sir they didn't ..actually (they couldn't hid thr smile much for maan's annoyance who was loosing his patience).. wohh geet ne tree par climb kar k park mien jump laga di .. n she flew away ...

What ...(gaurav exclaimed shocked with the new info n maan sighed)..

Abb kahan hai geet ..

MK wohh andar church mien hai ..

Aur wohh admi ..

Gaurav sir wohh log kafi saare thay ..we couldn't have possibly be able to manage them so we led them in an opposite direction since they were asking people around for geet ..

Maan never stopped to hear further n made his way inside while gaurav continued conversing with his men ..


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