MG FF- PARINEETA THREAD 8 - Page 52

awsum update. very welll described maan's inner turmoil and just claiming that you are only mine. just hope he does not regret in the morning. geet just giving in him beautiful. Please update soon cannot wait for long. waiting

Beautifully written..to say the truth...loved it

But I just hope Maan does not regret anything in the morning and leave a shattered Geet behind...that would be heart breaking..

All the words described passion...frustration...the battle maan has been fighting with himself...and love..which is yet to be discovered by him yet...

this was outstanding..!!

loved it so much...!!

:)

Thank you Thank you Thank you... Aish!!
You are simply 'THE BEST'!
Love you for that!!

OMG, can't believe they finally made love... or rather Maan made love to Geet and she just gave in.
She always gave in to his demands and protected him from the very beginning... be it taking all the blame on her, beating the guys at school to giving him peace in her embrace and letting him take over her body even though she knew that is not right at this point and he may regret it later.

Coming back to Maan's inner turmoil... he is confused yet he can't stay away from her or her thoughts. He is fighting a constant battle and that is killing him. Geet can see that something is bothering him and in order to sooth his pain and emotions she gave herself completely to him... she is definitely feeling the pain during their intimate encounter but that is her heart paining this time as she knows he is not in his senses and she does not want him to regret this closeness.

I really hope Maan remembers everything in the morning cause you did mention he is a bit tipsy but not completely out of senses. I am guessing he will remember this in the morning and I can't wait to know how he will react next morning. Please surprise us and let us feel this for a little longer where he will have the same love for her in the morning. Please let it be Gayatri that breaks our spell of Maanet romance and not Maan himself.

I don't know if they used protection or not... or if you have another twist in mind... I don't want to give you any ideas as I love the way you are progressing the story and would love to have it go based on your imagination and not get influenced by our questions.


I think Maan's trip is well timed as he is clearly confused and the distance might make him realize the intensity of his love for Geet. I think for that the physical closeness was essential as that will fuel his desire to be with her even more.

Very well written part, Aish. Full of emotions and battles. Keep it up! I am sooo proud of you and am happy to be one of your greatest FANs.


Love you,
Tarana

Also, the broken heart emoticon is going to give me some sleepless nights now.

Unless you give us the next update soon...

C'mon.. you can do it!

Hope to get one more update before the weekend.

Q - Is Parineeta my 1st priority these days??

A - Well heck ya!
It is so touching and it takes me to their land where I can feel each character is real and emoting and talking in from of me just the way you are describing them in your words.

beautiful update but u hope maan dont regret it.

awesome update dear

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hope he does not repent after that and is happy over the fact she is with him