As The Tide Turns - a MG SS - part 4, pg 12, 26/2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was a bit hesistant to post this, because I've been in two minds over whether I should continue or scrap it altogether... but anyhoo, this is part 1 and we shall see where it goes from here. Enjoy :)



Part 1: An Ocean's Refusal

The shuffle of the letters landed on the hardwood floor with a soft thud, almost as if they were attempting to alleviate the plan.

She got up, calmly walked her way over to the front door of her small townhouse and picked up the manila envelope.

Tearing it open, she pulled the package of papers out swiftly, flicked through to the last page and gave it a once over.

Pulling the ballpoint pen from the breast pocket of her blazer, she signed on the dotted line, below her former name.

Geet Singh Khurana.

...


She sat on the shore some hours after signing the divorce papers, the darkness of the night providing a blanket for her silent tears.

Although the divorce was mutual, and a long time coming for the past two years of their five year marriage, something still pierced her heart sharper than a stake being aimed right into someone's abdomen.

The chilling wind that came with the tidal waves crashing vehemently onto the shore and back attacked her fragile paleness. She closed her eyes, letting the cool breeze soothe her soul, or at least attempt to.

After a few moments, she slowly opened her eyes and the moonlight shone down on the sea, caressing it with its shine so that it left its silvery-green mark on the water.

'There's nothing more beautiful than the way the ocean refuses to stop kissing the shoreline, no matter how many times it's sent away' he had said, squeezing her hand tightly as he leant down to place a chaste kiss on her lips.
'I didn't realise you were such a hopeless romantic,' she had teased, backing away slightly as she pulled him along the sand, letting the sun baked grains caress her toes and his warm dusky scent fill her whole.

She blinked momentarily, as if to mentally erase the memories. A lone tear escaped her eye and she brushed it away with the back of her hand. Geet patted her thighs, brushed the loose hair strands behind her ears and stood up. Grabbing her flip flops, she turned back to make her trek up the sandy hill and back to her home when she bumped into him, instantly recognising his scent and making out his features faintly under the dark sky.

"I knew I'd find you here," he said, and she could have sworn that she saw a faint smile play across his lips.

...

Index

Part 1: An Ocean's Refusal - above




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Now this is definitely a surprise! And a pleasant one at that, to have a short story from you. 😊

Okay, so we're going to be dealing with a troubled couple here. I'm already wondering if the story has started with divorce, where can it lead in the future chapters; to a life where they both are together or not..?

I definitely want you to continue this Fozia! Would love to read more! 😊
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so far so good
looking forward to this!
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Very nice & interesting 😊
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A mutual devorse,whats going on?
Update next part soon with longer update
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nice start
update soon
thanks for the pm
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more places to thap thap...
sounds very interesting...
isn't the shore line the best place to introspect...
Somehow the soothing of the waves almost like a womb, a far off memory, making you feel closer to yourself.
Waiting for more soon Fozia..
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congrates on new SS
beautiful part 1
thanx for the pm
waiting for next updates
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wow ...😃 sounds very very interesting...waiting to read more...😊
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CONGRATS for new story...

ur stories are always gripping...

very interesting start with a DIVORCE...😲...

but divorce from whom...u just gave us hint of her being mrs. Khurana...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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