MG SS- SANEYEEKA THREAD 1

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nitya

@preethi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

good one.. loved it 😃.

Loved the understanding btw maan and geet

waiting for next part

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

That was an awesome one aishu...

both are completely in awe of the other and completely in their own imagination world...

Geet has seen him and Maan has not!! and when the guy is so eager to catch a glimpse of her in the party , the theme seem to just shatter his hopes... But even the mask doesnt seem to be a hindrance anymore.. They are completely lost in the other during the dance...

and u r so evil to make him leave the engagement party in the mid... and i loved the part where Geet feels really restless on seeing him leave and him recognizing her following him... and then ofcourse the expression of their love and anxiety to be with the other as a kiss...

Lovely... but am wondering about geet's words... i can understand what maan tried to explain.. but Geet... 😕

Now i want a double update soon.. i mean aaj... 😉

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

hey cc net ditched me chalo wow u written soo beautiful tum musician bangaya re i love this and there submision to each other their silent love its looking like i was seeing adream nice one re

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

wise ek request i am waiting for ur coment on my work its a request only tuje bura lagatho sorry cc

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nga0130

@nga0130

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Awesm
luv d intensity of their feelings..
Waiting eagerly for d nxt part..

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

aaj kal free hai tu update de na ...

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aditimaan

@aditimaan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

its lovely nd emotional ud.waiting 4 next

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

part 5
nice part dear...
interesting...
cont soon...

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#319

It was a beautiful update.

Maaneet enchanted by each other
That they forgot the world around
Them.

Finally their engagement taking place
Its a new feelin all together.
Maan has to go away.

Geet sad n heart broken. But
Maan claimed her even widout knowing
Her or seeing her
I luv the way he soothed her.