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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
hearing his plan geet burst laughing...maan thought geet is making fun oh him..
Maan:what is this geet..i am doing all this for us and u??
Geet:maan sorry i am not laughing at u...woh thinking of sameera's condition laugh came out..i am really sorry..
Maan:oh...thinking about her...u know when i was talking to her i wanted to laugh soo much..but i tried to control so that we can laugh togther after the ending of my plan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
maan-wase u r looking soo cute with 100 volt laugh nd i want to eat u
geet-maan aap phir se suru ho gae
maan-ab biwi hi itni eatable h toh isme mera kya dosh h nd with this he took her petal like lips in his rough lips nd talking all the juice from her
nd his hand went to her waist lil squeezing it
geet was moaning in the kiss nd...
Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

and.. and hehehe yaar mujhe sharm aarhi hai...
ok..ok. then maans hand automaticaly went to open the dori... geet kbew very well what are his intentions and wht would be his next move.. after all he reads her every night.. maaneet were so much in pSsion. maan would make love at the spot..if geet woukdnt bit maans lips nd maaneet controled their desires.. after all they wete in office.. geet blushed hard and dashed out from there to her cabin..
here Dev came with his new gf in office to show off...but poor girl she dint know she was the 30th one.. after all dev singh khurana is a playboy opposite maan singh khurana..but good at heart..and as alwYs runs to his sweet and fvrt bhabhis cabin to tell his stupid clg mastis and bike riding..and again his new gf...ufff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34


i thought. i hould not. make everyone vllian...hehehe...poor maaneet already have so many villians...
Edited by RukhluvMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
when dev entered he saw geet blushing nd her swollen lips nd decided to tease geet
Dev- hey bhabhi!
Geet-hi dev!so what bring u here?
Dev-vo sab chodo na bhabhi.pehle mujhe yeh batao aapke lips ko kya hua? like innocent boy
Geet was all sharam se pani pani
Geet-dev tum bolo tum yahan kyu aaye ho nd who is with u?
Dev-arey bhabhi main toh aap se milne aaya hoon?kya aapka devar aapse milne bhi nahi aa sakta.nd she,she my GF
Geet-WHAT?abhi thode din pehle hi toh tumne mujhe nisha se mil wa ya tha(sorry agar kisi ka naam nisha hai . i just picked up it randomly)
Dev- bhabhi woh toh ek hafte pehle ki baat thi.
at that time maan enter in Geet cabin
Maan-kya baatien chal rahi hai bhabhi aur devar ke beech?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
yes this idea has already used but i dont have problem enjoy your self.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Dev:ehh bhai...kuch khaas nahi..bas mein unse yeh puch raha tha ki unke hooto ko kya ho gaya??

at that time maan saw her lips...it were swollen and geet's eyes were seeing down...maan remembered their little office romance and blushed..

Dev: wah kya baat hai bhai...aap aur blushing??
Maan:Dev shut up...tumhe aur koi kaam nahi hai???aacha yeh batau ki tum office kyun aaye??
Dev: bas aviyi..
Maan: sambhal jao..office ka kaam kab suru karoge??
Geet: kya maan aap phir se suru ho gaye???caliye hatiye...dev tum jao aur enjoy karo...tumhare sadu bhai ko tho main sambhal lungi
Dev:thank u bhabi...love u...
Maan: Dev!!
Dev: oops sorry...bye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Maaneet-bye...nd smiled
maan coming close to geet
Maan-toh kya kaha tumne sadu?huh? by pulling her close
Geet-maan main toh majak kar rahi thi chodiya na mujhe
but maan didn't leave her nd pulled her close their lips were mere inch away at that time Dev again enterend the cabin nd was shocked to his bhai-bhabhi open romance by voice of door both maaneet got conscious both part away nd looked every where
Dev-Bhai i know bhabhi is hot but plz kamse kam door lock kar ke kijye jo bhi karna hai
Maan gave him glare
Maan-tum yahan waapas kyun aaye ho?
Dev- woh me aapna mobile yahaan bhul gaya tha woh lene aaya hoon.
Dev took his mobile nd said bhai agar aap chaho toh aap ghar jaa sakte hoon nd run away
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
ahhahaha avi page ke sare jo parts the padh ke i cant control myself
hehehhe nbht maja aaya can i write next ya kisi ne kuch or socha h
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Posted: 12 years ago
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other than dev one more person saw maaneet close moment nd that was nnone other than Sam who burning in jealousy.Sam couldn't take it anymore nd decided to broke their lovey dovey moment.
Sam-hi maan!yahan se ja rahi thi thought to meet u.
listing to the voice both maaneet turned towards its source nd saw sam standing giving cheeky smile to him.(poor girl kitna bhi luck try karle maaneet hum writers alag nahi hone denge)
seeing Sam Geet got angry nd stompedher foot and try to walk away. but as she was moving Sam try to make geet fall.geet closed her eyes in fear but before she could feel hard floor she was in the arm oh her lovable hubby who looked equally afraid for her...

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