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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

so now u know how much ur readers love ur wriiting

hai na dear Ritzy

😛

loved the update and this dreamy maan dreaming abt his jaan

and some of ur lines which u added to enhance the beauty of the so so so romantic song were really nice and hot

this majnu maan is a gone case now😆😆😆

loved his dream

and geet's care

oh wow sharing one bananna with maan

cho chweet

only one complaint

geet did not even look at dear maan majnu with that love filled eyes

when will that happen dear

when this care and concern will convert into love and confession

waiting for that so eagerly

and very glad that u r already developing a new story

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

part 25
awesome part...
lovely...
Geet has blind and unbreakable trust on Maan...
hes lucky to have one like that...
cont soon dear...

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

wowww awesomly written amazing update...

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

that was so sweet!

continue soon

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

Aww So Beautiful Update dD...Loved It Very Much!!
Maaneet Scene were sweet n lovey
loved the song n Poem...very well describe
banana part ws just superb..loved it
inttesting precap...
waiting for next...contonue super soon
thank u for pm

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

lovely update

& MR.MSK control over ur dreams😉😆😆

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Superb update Di ...

continue soon ...

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

very nice.. loved Geet's innocence.. she is so cute..

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#399

wowww awesome update

i somewhere felt maan was insecure n frustrated that he isnt able to tell his feelings to geet but the way geet cleared it out without even knowing about it was just awesome

loved the song a lot

n the lines u added were really beautiful

when geet told i trust u sir i could actually imagine the gleam which would have come in maan's eyes hearing those words

n the rain has a major role in their love story n even today it showed maan how beautiful an angel geet is

waiting for next part

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#400

I read the update yesterday night only dear but i was busy that time so could not comment.

I loved the update dear, slowly slowly Maan's feeling is getting stronger and we can see the physical side of it too... that's very natural, we don't want a saint right?

He fell in love with what her personal self is, her hard work, her sincerity, her strenght .. her personality

But the our Geet is so beautiful, Maan bechara for how long can he keep check on his desires.

Though in repect of Geet's trust he is keeping himself on check.

He is blown away by the kind of trust Geet have on him, she trust him even after so much happen to her, any girl would loose her trust but Geet's respect for Maan is such that even in this state of mind she is blindly trusting him. Maan will never break her trust...

but Geet darling, respect ke aage bhi kuch hota, thorda dimag aur dil ko kholo... but i know, her past is stopping her to even think in that direction... I really wnat to know her whole past.

I loved the kela wala part.

Awesome update... loved it so much