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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear
I loved it very much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 23:

Yaar ritzy you made me cry in this update, kitna emotional and cute update tha. Maan thinking of the past which he spent with his mother. How much he miss his mom.
Chi...mein koi ladki hoon'main Maan Singh Khurana hun
Awww, it was damn cute chota sa MSK showing attitude to his mom how sweet it is, and mom told him angel story. Maan loves the chun chun sound of his mom. And yes you told the true meaning of mishty 👏😃 I dont want to move to next update yaar, i want to read it again and again. 😳
Maan loves kheer 😃 but he dont eat now as his life is filled with pain.


Daadima…kya yeh ghar phir se muskura sakta hai…makan se ghar ban sakta hai?

How painful it is, it shows how much maan is missing his mom and dadu. They both left him whom he loves the most. and dadi is thinking after a long time maan talked with her all these things and she want him to be happy with his family. Hw much they are suffering is very well protrayed in this update, and sure one day maan will bring his mishty and she will make this Mansion a HOME again with a smiling maan and dadi on her side and giving her support to fulfill her dreams and they give a chance to geet to live her life again happily which she missed in her past 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it di...
awesome update...
loved the way maan cared for geet and geet trust for maan...
geet and maan shared banana... so cute...
beautifully written...
waiting for the next update

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 24

Hayeee what a dreamy update copying maan's dialogue "man karta hain ki yeh update aise hi padhte rahu" 😆 I loved geet scolding herself and she made some thing for maan 😃 and want to gift it to maan. Oh oh her praying to babaji is always cute and maan tho lost in geet.

Kitni cute hai yaar…man karta hai bas dekhta rahoon...oh teri, itni choti si baat karni thi bas Babaji se…avert your eyes Maan…kisi din zaroor pakad legi tujhe

Hayeee hw cute 😃 maan babu bachke rehna as you told one day geet will find you red-handed 😆 sach mein yaar geet kitni thank you kehti hain but what maan did is not less 😊

Geet…Geet…please ruko. Kitni baar thanks kahogi?

Yeh lo maine bhi yahi kaha maan but no one should disturb geet during her thank you chanting 😉😆 aww geet's card was so nice and maan caressing her name, he is acting like a love sick teenager but loving it a lot and the kheer hayeee what a co-incidence. Maan is remembering his mom's kheer and geet brought it, Telephaty 😃

shayad tumne bhi utne hi pyaar se...mera matlab dhyaan se banayi hai…isi liye…it is just perfect

Oops maan careful dude 😉 maan loved kheer thats amazing and geet is so happy and over whelmed that he liked her card and kheer. And a deal from maan to geet, when ever she prepares kheer she has to get it for maan. How sweet it is Totally totally such a lite update, i was smiling all the while reading it and loved geet pov at the end about her maan sir. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
dreamy part . ...

loved it ...

loving this lovely maan ...

uff she is really a angel...

maan ke man ke baat bina kahe hi samgh jati hai ...

hope maan jaldi he apni feeling confess kare ...

or ye kya itn wait kee or update finish ho gaya ...


hungry for more dear ...


jaldi aana ...

ye dil mange more ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
geet is sooo sweet
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear friend sorry for not commenting I was accessing through the mobile and couldn't comment.

But what updates. I liked the chapters very much. Somehow i feet like this is way better than the original. All the characters are three dimensional.

Love you, thank u. and don't even think about abandoning us midway. ( tumhe shaap lag jayegi- just joking yaar, you are one of my favourite authors) I am telling all my friends and contacts to read your FFs. Happy?
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25

Yaar what should i tell about this update, no words are coming out. The update was fabulous but the precap is 👏❤️

Kal Raat Zindagi Se Mulakat ho Gayi

i am waiting for this update eagerly. 😃
The story is moving so smoothly yaar, just loved the simple words of geet which are touching maan's soul unknown to her.

Geet had no idea how her simple words were touching Maan's soul. In fact they were cleansing his heart of all the pain and frustration he had bottled up in his heart till now.

These lines stole my heart. Maan is deeply, purely and crazily in love with geet. He is day dreaming about her, awww how pure and simple geet is. How can a person even try to hurt such a innocent soul. The words which you wrote in purple were fanbulous, just want to read them again and again. Those words are maan's heart. And geet is able to understand each and every gesture of maan and her st's about maan working skills are damn cute. 😆 A very sweet and cute update. Loved it very very very much.. n i am more curious about precap dont know whose pov it is?
continue damn soon dear. thank you so much for the pm and so sorry for late comments was busy but now i am back 😃

Dear, dont even think of leaving us please its a request. You are one of my favorite writer because of whom i got inspired and started my writing career. Please please dont even think like that. Its a sincere request from one of your reader. You told me once dont even think of stopping writing and now how can you. Love you so much dear 🤗 and i am sincerely sorry for my late comments 😭
Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a dreamy part...drooling maan was a treat to dread... khuli aankho se sapna!!!!! hayooo rabbbaaa... and the song u chose JUST PERFECT...

i loved maans hesitation to tell geet that they may have to stay overnite in the office ALONE!!! but more i loved was geets answer... maan tho pehle hi ghayal tha ab tho poora ka poora latoo on her...love the way both understand each other without words...

"Wahi toh…I am obviously hungry…isiliye I am asking to share and not giving you full" ... i just loved this line...

both alone at office for the remaining nite... i hope they share their thoughts and a lil of past... am looking forward for the next part...

am so happy that u decided not to cut short or stop writing and all... kya yaar ritzy it was like a bomb for me... cant imagine maaneets ff without u... so dont even dare to think on those lines...

am happy that maan have earned the trust from geet... worthy and well deserved by a person like him who helped her in the hardest situation a gal can face and also motivated her to move forward... hope love too follows soon...



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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Maaneet are to work at project alone.
Geet has so much trust on him that
Maan is wonderinghow can a person
be like her. So different frm the world.

Maan's staring session started. He has
a good time wid Geet. Her every simple
act bowls him.
Liked d fact that Geet also understands
him. Caring him. Geet offering just half
of banana becoz she is also hungry. The
way she said that was so so cute.

Loved ur poems. Glad u wrote it. Was
missing ur creations frm long time.
Continue soon.

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