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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

updated my post on page 138

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jenny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

This is am marvellous update...

The whole part is so emotional and really touching. You wrote it so real and its the best.

The best scene would be the secret unsaid promise better Maan and geet. They don't need words to describe their emotion.

Maan's special attention to Meera.. love the whole scene. The way he claim Meera's baby to be apart of his family.

And the final part... Maan gifted Geet his lucky pen. No one would give their most possessive things to anyone, unless the other person means a lot to them.

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dreamymishti88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

superb

fantastic update

liked a lot dear

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maaneet5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#864

Osum Update maaneet spending time together wow well beautiful geet with handsome maan wah kya combination he yaar

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

Ahhh!! I just realized that in the time I have missed commenting on Winter Sonata you have updated 6 chapters.😲 I was wondering if I was ever going to catch up, but finally I made it. Extremely sorry Ritzy dear. Par after the exams I have just been trying to play catch up at all the threads.

So let me give short inputs on my favorite parts Here we go

Chapter 28

Along with Geet, or rather because of Maaan has a new leash on life and he is taking more interest in things around him. Things that were always around him but that which he never really noticed or paid much attention to, namely the women's hostel.

Also, there is the added incentive of Geet being there. So Maan is obviously going to go, hai na?😉

Infact, not only is he taking an interest he is showing his total commitment by inviting his business associates. It's one thing for him to attend, but when he invites people he respects, that goes to show how much he trusts Geet and believes in her causes.

I love this man's strong sense of responsbility and commitment. One look at Geet and he was her's forever. One look at Meera and he is committed to her as a brother forever.

Now that is what I call a real man.😳

Aur ab Geet ka nazariya bhi dheere dheere badal raha hain. She is becoming more and more aware of him.

Let's see if Maan's wish to see her dancing comes true. I have a feeling it will😉

Ritzy humare itne pyaare Maan ko nahi tadpayegi.

Loved this one Rizy. Ok I'm off to read the next one.

Once again, sorry for the delay, but I get to read so many of them together, so I am not too sorry.😉

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Chapter 29

Ahh!! Rahat Fateh Ali Khan and O Re Piya. Mera favorite singer and one of my favorite songs. (I think I mentioned this recently on Sanayeeka) The flute that plays at the beginning is just beautiful.

Hayee!! Finally Geet is on stage and Maan is mesmerized. 😉

I loved the blending of Maan's emotion and Anu's poem. Ekdum sahi combination. I think that poem elevated his feelings as well as clearly expressed it. The eyes and heart following every nuance of her step and rejoicing. 😳

And I was so glad to see Geet dancing, as if she has dropped some of her shackles or her "baandishein"as you call them. Shackles that always tie her down and bind her from within. The whole faltering on the stage and then looking upon Maan as God and asking to be set free and his unspoken promise in his gentle smile, was something so very unique and heart touching that I felt my heart catch as I read that part.

And yeah such conversations do seem unreal when you come back to planet earth. And that is why Geet is all shaken up.

You are so true to his character Ritzy and after reading the last update, and his convo with Meera I felt that very much suited his character, the way you have painted it. he is committed to being her brother and being a man of action, he acted upon it immediately. And Meera definitely needs a strong brother like him in her life.

Their car convo went from being cute to emotional in moments. That pen really is a precious gift he handed to Geet. Buying something with money would have been a piece of cake for him, but giving her that pen once again showed the depth of his feelings for this woman. Since she is so precious to him, he can only give her that which is most precious to him😳

No wonder he is her God.

Ok, that was supposed to be a short comment, but I just couldn't help myself, after reading that beautiful chapter.😆

Another fantastic one Ritzy.👏