hai ritzy and sorry for not cmmnting in last update .
story is going in great pace and loving the flow of the story and request u to continue as u wrote it . plz no cutting pitting and its going great ritzy
may b i am not cmmnting regularly but frm the bottom of my heart its a beautiful story and throughly enjoying it .
This updte was so cute one .
dheere dheere meri zindagi mein aana ,
dheere dheere dil ko churana (want maan to sing )
Awww, he was cute ,i loved the scene where he was niharofying her and promise himself that he is going protect her trust .
Mohabbat ke shehar me ek dafa hum gye...
dekhi jo pyari surat to hum tham gye...
zindagi me the bahut gum humne dekhe magar...
unki aankho se aisi pee ke humare sab gum gaye...
chadha hum pe unka nasha aisa ki..
dekhte dekhte unke deewane se hum ban gaye...
Phir mohabbat ka asar aisa chhane laga...
har jagah unka aks nazar aane laga 😳
continue soon
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