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Posted: 12 years ago
hai ritzy and sorry for not cmmnting in last update .

story is going in great pace and loving the flow of the story and request u to continue as u wrote it . plz no cutting pitting and its going great ritzy
may b i am not cmmnting regularly but frm the bottom of my heart its a beautiful story and throughly enjoying it .

This updte was so cute one .
dheere dheere meri zindagi mein aana ,
dheere dheere dil ko churana (want maan to sing )

Awww, he was cute ,i loved the scene where he was niharofying her and promise himself that he is going protect her trust .


Mohabbat ke shehar me ek dafa hum gye...
dekhi jo pyari surat to hum tham gye...

zindagi me the bahut gum humne dekhe magar...
unki aankho se aisi pee ke humare sab gum gaye...

chadha hum pe unka nasha aisa ki..
dekhte dekhte unke deewane se hum ban gaye...

Phir mohabbat ka asar aisa chhane laga...
har jagah unka aks nazar aane laga 😳

continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
luved it dii
continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

such a dreamy part...drooling maan was a treat to dread... khuli aankho se sapna!!!!! hayooo rabbbaaa... and the song u chose JUST PERFECT...

i loved maans hesitation to tell geet that they may have to stay overnite in the office ALONE!!! but more i loved was geets answer... maan tho pehle hi ghayal tha ab tho poora ka poora latoo on her...love the way both understand each other without words...

"Wahi toh'I am obviously hungry'isiliye I am asking to share and not giving you full" ... i just loved this line...

both alone at office for the remaining nite... i hope they share their thoughts and a lil of past... am looking forward for the next part...

am so happy that u decided not to cut short or stop writing and all... kya yaar ritzy it was like a bomb for me... cant imagine maaneets ff without u... so dont even dare to think on those lines...

am happy that maan have earned the trust from geet... worthy and well deserved by a person like him who helped her in the hardest situation a gal can face and also motivated her to move forward... hope love too follows soon...



lakshmi , beautiful one . enjoyed ur words.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! wonderfully written! awesum song! r u an amazing writer! Maan n Geet workin n Maan dreaming! Maan n Geet stuck at the office cos of rain! Maan apologises n Geet assures him! Maan vows never to break her trust! Geet makes coffee 4 him n shares her banana wid him! Geet trusts him! Oh wat is dis abt u leaving n qutting! Pls dnt! U r a terrific writer! 👏⭐️Love the way u write! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly Beautiful chapter Ritzy👏
Awww Maan's daydreaming 😆
The most important thing to get from someone is trust n she being broken trusting him, a guy, thats an achievement defo 😃
He's going to keep her trust forever 😳
Aap hanste bhi hain sir😳
Dekha Babaji…mein toh achi bachi ki tarah puch rahi hoon and he is making fun of me😆 Typical Geet😆
Waiting for Kal raat 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
geet k chhoti chooti batein maan k dil ko chhu gaye...awesome...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing and superb thx dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing one..
Each time ur Song selection for update is superb..
This FF is different , but loyal readers like... it

So keeping writing, don't change Ur flow of FF which u have thought earlier
loving the pace of FF the way is moving..

eager for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oye hoye, I love this old number...
And the lines in between were also very expressive...
Rofl, how sweet of Geet to think tht Maan wud also be hungry and sharing her banana... Aise chote choteoment only will bring them 2gether...
Continue soon Di... :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey di...!!
it's amazing...!!
d song selection was jst mindblowing...!!!
u made me remember d hum-tum epi of ghsp...!!!
i jst love geet...though she herself was hungry bt still she had shared banana wid maan...dat's really sweet of her...!!

u are simply amazing...!!!
i jst luv ur writings...!!!

waiting for nxt one...
luv ya...!!!

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