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Posted: 12 years ago
It was an emotional & shocking updt... Was priya behind d accident of geet & dev...?? Is she d main culprit & geet is saved 4rm dat accident by munshiji...? Cont soon waiting 4 d nxt part eagerly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute mansi
waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb yar both part i was read yar m waiting from so many days yar what is the mystry but today u solve it m so excited for next part dear now want to know how maan pacify geet
thanks for update and pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
looks like both maneet r out to cook fr maansi...awesum teaser...updt soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute one.. Mansi.. she is up to something..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehehehehheheheheehhe...cutie pie is defo upto mission milao papa mummy😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
mohi me crying 😭 bada emmotional tha
oh mishty geet ki zerox thi
tabhi mansi usse itni hil mil gayi in such short span
awesome ud
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Posted: 12 years ago
so emotional update...maan in memory of misty,..dadi force maan 2 marry priya...priya refuse 4 feeding...priya left maansi in ac,..maan save her...same name...update soon waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 12 years ago



CHAPTER 21


chapter 17 may 3

chapter 18 may 5

chapter 19 may 7

chapter 20 may 8


I thought to write something light now as last to chap were to heavy.. past will be completely solved in next chap.. but with only with one mystery.

Maan all thought come to the halt with a mobile ring.. he sighed and saw whose call him and find out this is from km.. a little fear run though in his veins.. is geet alright? .. is she tried to run?.. no no he come out from his thought and received call with shivering hands.

"Bro it's me meera!!! When are you coming for dinner.. you didn't even ate you lunch also'" meera blubbered and made maan smiled little to see his small sister bossing over him.

"hold on meera!!! Thak jao gii and I am coming umm is mansi slept?" maan asked

"vo devil and sleep so soon no way.. she is playing with geet in the room" meera told him with mixed emotions sad and happy and don't know what..

"Umm.. is geet eat?" maan asked hesitantly.. but in concern is oozing out from his voice.

"Hmm vo bro she drank soup and then juice in evening so she didn't ate her dinner" meera told him with a smile.

"Hmm I am coming in half an hour.. bye" maan spoke and hang down his mobile.

Maan sighed and starts to packed his laptop beg and some files which adi gave him.. he just want priya behind the bars as soon as possible.

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Maan reached to km and shocked to see hustle bustle of servants who is searching something everywhere even meera is also with them.. dadi was sitting on one couch and her head in her hand with sighed expressions.. even geet is searching something under dining table.. maan sighed to saw his cartoon family again busy in something.

"Is mansi again hide somewhere.." maan thought.

"What is happening guys" maan come and settled himself on couch and nakul come with water.

"Nothing bro as usual searching your ladli" meera winched and made maan laughed slightly.. and again same happened maan called mansi and she crawl to maan as fast as she can.. and hold maan legs.. with a smile.. maan took her in him arm and headed to his room.. for freshen up.. where mansi is showing tongue to other.. even geet is amused to see this 9 month devil who always made meera runs on her toes and meera always take care of her as her child without complaint.. she felt a respect for meera.

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Today mansi slept with maan only.. she is full in maan embrace and hiding her face in her daaa chest. . and maan also in deep slumber.

Near 2:00 pm

Mansi wriggled in maan arms and maan automatically patted her for sleep peacefully but this devil had some other in her little mind.. her stomach grumbled as she didn't eat her dinner fully.. and now feeling hungry.

Mansi opened her eye and pout with sleepy eye and sat on bed.. maan hand is still around her.. she is rubbing her eye cutely.. and watching all around like to recognizing where is she.. in her half sleepy status she is looking like some Barbie doll with so much innocent yet mischievous eye.. which is always upto something.

She turned and started to touch maan face' and start calling him.

"mummm mummm aaa mummm mummm" mansi shirked made maan stirred in sleep..

"daaa mummm mmm" she again winched and slapped on maan nose tightly and made maan open his eye and his eye met with one pair of pearl eye of his princess which are watching them curiously.. maan groaned and sat on the bed and pulled this cutie pie on his lap..

"You never let dadaaa sleep in night naa' hmm" he spoke and nuzzled his nose in with mansi nose and made her laugh.

"mummm mummm" she start chatting again and jumped in maans arm.

Maan took his small glass from side table and her plastic napkin and made her drink water.. which she drunk like she didn't drink any water from ages.. with whole weight on glass.. and made maan smile.

"mummm mummm" mansi again and again chatting same.

"ohh mere bache ko bhooki lagi hai chotu se tummy mai.. chalo dadaa will make some milk.. come" maan spoke and took mansi in his arm and headed toward kitchen.

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Maan made her sit on one table but this girl is always upto something she crawl and sat in one big bowl.. with a spoon in her hand like sword.. and start fighting in the air'

"eejjshshhs ijdnndnd sjsnsjsj" mansi shirking in full naughty mood.. she is fully awaken now.

Maan went and stand behind her.. and saw his devil every fighting she is busy playing with spoon like sword but this moment is broke by a loud giggled.. maan and mansi saw who is this.. and to see the person mansi once again shout to call her.

"ayieee atieee" mansi called geet from her hand.

Geet come near her but still laughing to see this kitchen little warrior.. she made her wear a chef cap and napkin in her neck like a apron.. mansi more jumped to see her new attire..

Maan was watching both girls no no not only girls but naughty girls.. he kept his hand on his waist and narrowing his eyebrows to see both are busy in each other not even paid any attention but what amusing me.. mansi again shout on me..

"daaa mummm mummm" mansi spoke with pout.. she is indeed hungry right now.

I gave her a mean look and she gave me irritated look like I am disturbing her play.. here madam just broke my sleep in this hour..

Geet attention also went to maan and she sniff in her position.. this is very awkward position.. she doesn't to talk with man who can kiss a unknown girl.. Maybe she is here but she lost her all trust from maan.. but meera nature help her to come out so after he went to office.. meera, geet and mansi played lot in mansi room.. but in front of him this is different.. she turned to go but naughty mansi caught her dupatta.. and

"naaa naaa eee naaa" she wants to stop geet to play with her.. now both maneet are in fix.. maan also wants to avoid geet some day till he is in the position to tell her truth.

"umm tum yeha mansi ke pass raho mai isska milk banta hu" maan murmured and left to warm mansi milk.

Geet starts to tickle mansi.. nuzzled her nose and best which mansi enjoyed most their spoon war.. she clapped after wining from geet.

"so my kitchen princess.. kya seva kare appki.." geet spoke and tickle mansi to made her rolled in her hands.

Maan heart is feeling emotional.. as both of them giggling is echoing in whole km as it is night time.

His thought once again went 16 day ago..

I didn't know.. what to think about all this same photo psycho.. indeed someone deliberately did that to hurt me and broke me again.. but who my mind is wondering.. as priya will never want that geet will be back in my life and everything snatched from her.. specially the title of being my wife.. then who can do this.. I decided to go myself to hoshiyarpur as soon as possible.. I called poor adi in mid night and said to make ready my jet for early morning.. I left to hoshiyarpur but to dadi and meera I told I am going for one business trip.. now mansi is only problem for my trip.. but meera said she will take care of her and if any emergency come she will call me and by helicopter I will be in Delhi within 2 hours.. so this is not big deal.. I left next morning in the pretext to know the truth behind the curtain.. I am fuming from inside.. as I know this is impossible that she will be my mishty.. as if she knew her name than she is remember everything than why not she call me.. and how on the earth she reached to hoshiyarpur from delhi.. all question is buzzing me.. if she was mishty she will go mad when she feel her blossoms are heavy in the need to feed mansi.. but there is hope also entered in my almost dead heart.. I was so eager to know the truth.. so eager than I felt my jet is crawling instead of flying.. I am going to give peace of mind if he tried to play my feeling in the pretext something else.. but I know he was as pure as adi .. my father look up to him like I saw to adi.. so this is may be a miracle only.. a cruel miracle which god create to pierced me.. hurt me.. and break me.. now that girl will leave with us how I am going to mange.. she is just exact copy of mishty.. just skinny and pale.

My thought come to halt when pilot announced that we are landing in 15 minutes.. a fear starts to engulfed my heart.. I reached to munshi jii village.. and asked someone about munshi jii house.. I was there before all also but didn't remember anything as that time I was so young only 4 yr old.

both girls giggling make her come out from his memories...

Maan come with mansi milk.. there but this girl is next to impossible.

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Precap: now what is she upto? Thanks for like and comment but I am so disappointed if you starts to felt bore with this ss tell me I will finished it in next 3-4 chap.. I also don't want to bore all of you.. as likes and decreasing so much in first 4 chap I ignored it.. but understand me also.. this ff used to get more 250 likes now not even 230 really.. I didn't expect this.. but maybe I become a boredom to all of you.

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
he he he again i am first 😃
Who said the work is boring it is an absolute lovely story with wonderful twist and turns...
The way u portrait the character is ausome...
So dont feel bad dr...
Coming to the update...
Asusual a lovely one witn naughty little devil...
Maaneet and litte devil in kitchen perfect family...
Waiting for the next update to know more abt the past...
Continue soon dr...
Edited by sri91 - 12 years ago

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