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Hasini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: trishadcute
Wow that an fantastic update 👏
But i love horror story & i'm loving this ...😃
But is that dream or reality ..
Pls update nxt part soon ...

thanks a lott dear...

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Hasini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! well written

thanks a lottt dear...

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Hasini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Ash1991
wow...
really scary part...bt interesting...waiting fr next part...
first time reading a story of such theme on maneet...

thank you so much dear...

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
Amazing...I love thriller suspense n horror stories a lot...

Can't wait to read more...

thanks a lottt dear...

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz
This is getting hell of scary now LoL I read it days back but i wasnt able to comment as IF wasnt rendering me so doing it now!

Ohk so Maan is ready to treat Geet but the thing is who will treat Maan from Lovaria after that :p ;)
awe so again an attack on Geet! I dont know what actually is it but would love to see both paranomal n phsycological ;) n n n most of all how a phsyc. start believing in all this paranomal stuff for his lady love ;)

awww thanks a lottt dear...thank you so much...

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Hasini

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 4

She was wriggling to get free of the hold but all her efforts were waste….then she felt her towel is going off her body… with all her effort she freed her hands and caught hold of her towel….then she felt the weight over her was reducing and the towel stopped to move then suddenly she felt a tight slap on her cheek but no one was there… Due to this trauma and fighting she fell unconscious….

She opened her eyes to find herself in a different place… first she tried to rubbed her eyes to get the clear vision of the place… then she found herself in a comfy bed and the room was huge… she thought she was in some palace….then suddenly her mind shifted to yesterday night….Fear started to cover her mind… the horrific night and her trauma was making her to fear the surroundings….Suddenly she felt someone is approaching her but no one was there…. But she started to shiver and moved to the corner of the bed….Then she heard some footsteps…Fear was making her mind to get blocked…the room door opened slowly… Due to the fear she covered her face between her knees and looked at the door from the corner of her eyes…

A person entered the room and he looked at geet who was shivering like a small baby...he went near her to check what is bothering her… when he approached her she feared more and pushed him down which made him to tumble on the floor..

"Get out from here… I know what you're trying to do to me… GETOUTTT…."

She shouted …she was hysteric and the more he approaches the more she becomes wild….

He knew her condition is making her to do like this… but he need to first make her believe him and people around her… because people suffering from these psychological problems will have lack of trust against people surrounding them… and he being new to her will make things worse…

"Geet… I am here to help you…."

He tried to assure her in his calm voice… wanting her to believe his words… but no use the more he goes near her the more she is becoming wild….

"No… I don't… get out…. GET OUT…"

She screamed on top of her voice… this made her become unconscious again….He came near her and lay her properly on the bed….He checked her pulse and gave her an injection to make her sleep peacefully and also to make her calm mentally….He want her to become normal… so for that only yash can make her come out of this because she knows only yash here and he is her best friend… he had to first make her feel comfortable and make her come out of that fear ask her what really happen…

He came down to call area where everyone were sitting worried….As soon as Yash saw maan he came towards him feeling tensed regarding geet's situation….

"Bro… how is she?"

"Yash she is still in her fear.. she didn't come to her normal self…She is not even believing me…. So I need you to go and also take meera with you… I think after seeing you both she will be back to normal…"

"Sure bro…we will try…"

He said gesturing to meera who stood next to him…. Both went upstairs and went near geet who was still sleeping peacefully….Both were waiting for her to wake up… after few hours geet opened her eyes to see Yash and Meera next to her… instantly she got up and hugged meera crying helplessly…Meera on the other side had tears in her eyes seeing her best friend in this condition….she rubbed geet's back soothing her…

"I am scared meera..please HELP me..."

She pleaded in between her sobs…

"Shhh… Geet your fine… clam down… shhsh…"

Meera consoled her trying to bring back to her normal condition….geet cried endlessly hugging meera… yash sat on the other side of the bed and watched his two best friends in pain….seeing them like this, mainly seeing geet like this is breaking him….after sometime they both made geet to calm down. Yash decided to inform maan….so he went down and saw maan talking with dadi…

"Bro…"

He looked at yash and moved near him…

"Yes yash…how is she?"

"She is now better bro… do we need to ask her about yesterday night.."

"Did she spoke anything…?"

"No bro just she is crying and saying am scared…."

"Hmmm…. Listen yash… she has under gone a mental trauma..i think by asking her about yesterday night might take her to deep depression… first I need to study each and everything… her movements, character, behavior etc… for that she needs to forget that and behave normal… so I advice you guys to keep her engaged…and make her laugh….if she is not able to be normal I must hypnotize her and read her mind…we must be careful in each and every step of this…."

"Okay bro… will follow each and every instruction given by you… I want her to become normal bro…"

Maan kept his hands on yash shoulder and assured him with his smile…

"Sure…"

When maan is about to leave yash called him…

"bro…"

"Yes yash.."

"hmmm…. I want to ask you something…"

"Anything yash…"

"I want geet to stay with us… if you allow permission… because I feel it is not safe for her to stay alone… and after seeing her condition yesterday I got scared bro… you saw yourself in which condition she was found unconscious…."

Maan thought for some time and recalled yesterday night incident and how geet was found in her house half naked….he felt very bad for her condition….after analyzing…

"Hmmm… I think your right yash… without knowing her condition completely I think we must keep her with us as you said her parents are living in hosiyarpur….being alone is very dangerous in this condition…"

"Thanks bro.."

Maan patted his shoulder…

"She will be fine…"

"Hmmm…"

Both hugged each other and maan left for the hospital…

Precap: Maan Admiring Geet...OOPS... then treatment... LOL...😆

Guys i am actually sad with the likes for this story... Please give me suggestion guys...

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Edited by bubblygal1711 - 12 years ago