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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



awesome poem dear... sorry i donno ur name and ur user name is too difficult for me ... just curious how did u choose that user name?

its my son name with date of birth😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
and thanx for liking the poem
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

I hope you didn't hurt your brain or stressed your brain with alll the "hardwork" "Labor" and "Pain" you went through😆

uske liye dimaag thodi chahiye 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
u are supposed to be reading 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

me done dear

tell me kaisi hai
now please
as my time to go

it was great
am bout to update now😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devil_muse

uske liye dimaag thodi chahiye 😉

tyoh kiya chahye? dande?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok me wait for five minute
than off to bed
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 80

Before I begin...enjoy this poem by Nishu!! Its HILARIOUS about Maan's thoughts and feelings!!! PLEASE READ!!!

jab se hui hai shaadi
kya kya mein kar raha hu
aafat jo hai gaale mein daali
uss ko har pal bugat raha hu

jab woh pahli baar mili thi
thapaad ki khanak suni thi
par phutti kismat thi meri
jo uske baad bhi
mein wahi,biwwi banaane ke liye chuni thi

kya woh akele hi kafi nahi thi
kyu isse laga vicky ki kami thi
jo yeh isse mujh par chodti hai
jaise woh hai tommy
aur mein hu delicioue piece of chicken ponny

kya yeh kutte billi ka
jo circus meri life ban gaya hai woh kam nahi tha
jo mein ab
iske pyaar ke khatir
ban raha hu watchmen
apne hi kamre ke ,bahaar khada hua hu
madam hogi raazi
tabhi to paas hogi ,
meri bed par sone ki arzi
nahi toh ,kal ki yeh headline hogi
ki mein guest room mein sofe par so raha hu
darte the log mujhse
ab mein apni biwi ke terror se darr raha hu

dekh lo
oo duniya waalo
kya tha mera ateet
aur ab kya kya rahi hai mujhpe beet
waqt woh tha kuch aisa
hota tha sab waisa ,chata tha mein jaisa
ab woh madam chah rahi hai
aur mein usske nakkhre utta raha hu


madam ka order hua hai
is liye mein kitchen mein passina baha raha hu
fry pan aur spoon udd rahe hai
saare masaale bhi jal rahe hai
itne hai onion kaate
ke ab baarish ki tarah aasu tapak rahe hai

naksha badal gaya hai
is puri kitchen ka
lagta tha pahle baag phoolo ka
ab jang ka maidaan lag raha hai
aisa hi toh hoga
jab yaha duniya ka aathava ajooba ho raha
jisne aaj tak anda nahi hai ubbala
aaj woh madam ke liye BIRYAANI pakka raha hai

It has been two days since my cooking incident and Geet would not let me come in the kitchen. Even to get a glass of water, I was banned. I don't understand what I did wrong. I mean she asked me to cook and I did. I gave her even something better than that biryani. I gave her a new creation "Pasta Biryani" no one would think of that except for me. Now, I am being punished for being creative.

And that Vicky my own brother is against me. He gets to spend more time with Geet than I actually do. I mean I am the one that brought them here, I am the one that took them out, I am the one that gave him all the video games, toys and whatnot BUT NO that doesn't matter. His di is still the best. What am I then? Only Anamika is with me well I think that too until she starts to speak and walk. She will too leave me and join forces with Geet.

"Bhai come play with us. We are playing dance central. Di is so good"

"Vicky, your bhai doesn't dance."

"Who says?" (He asks offensively. He gets up marching toward them who were busy immitating the moves on the tv) "Vicky move let me show your Di who is a pro at dancing"

Maan steps in front of the tv smirking at Geet. Geet on purpose chooses a hindi song knowing very well how Maan is unaware of Indian movies and indian music. Maan looks at the tv waiting for the song to come on. He saw a lady and a guy pop up in indian outfits. Before he could even know what was happening the music started from "Hum Aapke Hai Kaun" movie "Didi Tera Devar Dewanna" song. Maan looks at Geet shocked while she smirked.

"I am not dancing to that song"

"Why? You are backing out now? Vicky your brother gave up"

"No, I didn't. Okay Geet if you want this competition than here you go"

OKAY GUYS WATCH THIS VIDEO OF THE GAME TO KNOW WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT. ITS ACTUAL DANCE STEPS FROM THE GAME!! YOU WILL LAUGH!!!
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S6ujlMXSwps&playnext=1&list=PLTiEVV6PTa7rJUKiibl-DqiL9TaxWA0ZS&feature=results_main[/YOUTUBE]

Maan starts dancing it was a partner dance much to Maan's relief. Geet started off with moving her arms abover her head while twisting her hips. Maan couldn't beleive that this was the same Geet who used to be shy to talk or even look at him directly.

"Bhai its your turn now"

He focuses on the screen where the guy comes in twisting his hips much to his dismay. He was so stiff to even move making Geet laugh while she danced. She held his hand while Maan had to put his one arm up and bob his head. Man if there was a camera right now than he would've looked so ridicules. Geet went down on her knees while Maan stood behind her doing the dance steps. He was very stiff instead of enjoying the dance steps and the music he was just concentrating on the moves. Vicky stood in the side clapping while Anamika giggled and laughed. Maan was relieved when the song came to an end.

Geet clapped when she saw her high score and high-fived Vicky.

"You know Maan I know how to dance. My mom taught me dancing when I was young. I was even a dance teacher in Hoshiyarpur."

"Really Geet? I didn't know that. Well, since you are best at dancing am sure you won't mind dancing for us. Right Vicky?"

"what? No. Maan. I can't."

"Why not? Please Geet for me?"

"But..."

"Please di...am sure you will be way better than bhai"

Maan playfully smacks him on the head while he pouts.

"Okay..."

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hl5hZ1E-1zw[/YOUTUBE]

Geet looks at all of them with a smile. She goes to the computer putting on her favorite song. She tucks her sari pallu inside her waist while Maan and Vicky take their seat.

Kehta hai mera yeh dil piya
Koi hai koi hai hi nahin - 2
Saaya hai tu chhaaya hoon main
Tu na ho to main bhi nahin - 2

Geet spins in circle when the music starts looking staright at Maan while dancing. The lyrics depictated her feelings for him. She moved so smoothly while looking at him with different emotions. She comes near him brushing her fingers around his shoulders before going in front again. Teasing him. He gets up holding her hand. He gets down on his knee kissing her hand. She smiles as turns around leaning backwards against his body.

Choodi jo khanke to kehte hai khan khan
Ghoongroo jo chhanke to kehte hai chhan chhan
Khan khan ho ya phir chhan chhan ho
Matlab inka hai jab tak ho do
Main bhi hoon tab tak jab tak tum ho
Jo sach hai voh tum maan hi lo


He holds her by the waist turning her around slolwy. She puts her feet on his leg shaking her anklet and her bangles. He tried to hold her hand but she moves back with a smile.

Subah ke pal ya shyaam ke do
Ek do saala ek hi hai
Do aankhon se dekhe hum
Phir bhi nazaara ek hi hai
Dil hai do lekin sanam
Pyaar ki dhaara ek hi hai
Kehta hai mera yeh dil piya
Koi hai koi hai hi nahin - 2


He picks her up from her waist twirling her around. He was about to kiss her on his lips but Geet smacks his face. Making him a little angry. Geet comes forward putting her hand on his heart while he holds her tightly. He turns her back towards him as they both moved to the music. He puts his chin on her shoulder while Geet places her hands on top of his removing them.

Suni kahaani hai yeh puraani
Hanson ka raja, hanson ki rani
Phirte hain ek sang harpal hi
Nain mein jab ek neer bharaaye
Gudwa aankh di neer bahaayi
Pyaar ki ho mann mein jhal khal bhi


She moves toward Vicky pulling him up towards her. Maan picks up Anamika with a smile. Geet and Vicky dance together. She mimicks Maan as the Raja and herself as Rani. While Maan craddled Anamika. He takes out his phone taking a pic of Geet and Vicky together.

Kehne ko do jism sahi
Lekin bas ek naam hain hum
Kehne ko hum do sapne hi
Lekin ek armaan hain hum
Itna pyaar hua kaise
Sochke khud hairaan hain hum
Kehta hai mera yeh dil piya

Geet stands in front of Maan holding his hand he pulls her closer while still holding on to Anamika. She rests her head on his shoulder as he carasses her waist slowly making her shiver. A blush crept up on her face while she smiled. He pulls her out and twrils her again until she wraps her arms around his shoulder. She kept her eyes closed unable to look at him anymore.

"I love you Geet"

She looks at him with a blush coming out of his grib. But Maan wasn't that eager to let her go just that. He held on to her hand while they both danced. Vicky clapped and came toward Maan to be picked up knowing how possesive he gets of him. Geet held on to Anamika as Maan picks him up.

He puts his arm around Geet's shoulder while she leans in relaxing. Anamika tried to raise herself up in Geet's arm to touch Maan's face. She puts her hand on his face smacking him. Making everyone laugh.

"yeh bache mere dushman ban gaye hai"

"Its not my fault that they love me more." She kisses her face "You know when she gets older I will teach her how to dance just like the way my mom taught me"

"Di teach me too...I want to learn dancing"

"I will teach you even better...cooking. So that you can be the only male in this house that knows how to cook"

Maan knew what she was referring too. She is again back to taunting him about his cooking incident. Looks like she won't let him live this down his whole life. Time to get revenge.

"Geet its kids nap time isn't it?"

"ohh yes. Lets go Vicky for a nap and I don't want to hear any whining either"
Maan smirks as his plan worked. He watches as Geet goes upstairs towards the kids room. After putting the kids to bed which took half hour she comes out of the room to find the whole house dark. Fear gripped her as she slowly made her way downstaris looking around for Maan.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Penh-GB5Fc8[/YOUTUBE]

As soon as she was down the step she felt someone pulling her hand dragging her somewhere. She knew who it was so she quietly followed. He led her to his gym which was decorated with candles illumating the whole room. Maan pulls on her hand tightly when the music began until she falls into his arms. She wraps her arms around his shoulder while he encircles his arms on her waist moving to the slow beat.

Maan slightly dips her while kissing her neck. Geet gasps feeling his soft touches after a long time. She didn't dare open her eyes. She just wanted to be lost in his touches. He holds her right arm slowly moving his fingers upward toward the hand. Both dance around the gym, Geet just followed as tears rolled down her eyes.

He stops and removes hair strands from her eyes wiping her tears away. He puts his finger under her chin nudging her to open her eyes. She slowly does looking at him with love while his eyes protrayed the same feelings and emotions.

"Geet did I do something wrong?"

He pulls her closer to himself. She nodes her head no and hugs him tightly as they slowly swayed and listening to the words of the song. He runs his hand on her back making her shiver. Her body was burning with his slow touches. She stiffened when he rested his palm right on top of her blouse hook.

"Maan..." She whispers.

"Geet, don't worry I won't do something that you are not confortable with"
He moves his hands downward again toward her waist but Geet held his wrist stopping him.

"No. I like your touches. I want to enjoy these moments with you. I love you Maan but am scared if this is all real or fake. I don't want to wake up from this if its a dream."

"Its not a dream Geet. This is all real. The man standing close to you is real. This man who loves you more than anything, who will do anything for you is real. Am sorry for hurting you before. I will wait for you for a lifetime if needed. For now lets enjoy these moments"

Geets smiles and nodes her head.

"I need to show you what a good dancer I am."

He winks before picking her up in her arms turning her around so that her back hits his chest. He moves his hand upward slowly feeling her skin underneath his touch as she shiverd closing her eyes. He holds her hand tightly both moving all over the room just lost in each other...he dips her backwards. Her head falls backwards letting her long hair sway as Maan places soft kisses on her neck moving down slowly toward her chest.

She holds her breath when she felt him right near her cleavage. She digs her nail on his shoulder making him moan.

"If you do that than I don't know what I will do"

She blushes as he pulls her up. She looks at him with love. Maan looks at her lips and slowly moves in pecking her lightly. Geet captures his lips when she felt him moving away. He couldn't control anymore. He nibbles on her bottom lips tasting her as if he was doing this for the first time. She responds back to him slowly but not as strong as him.

"I love you Maan."

"I love you too Geet"

Both moved back and fourth as they hugged tightly enjoying their close moments together.

Note:
okay do you guys think Geet is ready?FIVE MORE CHAPTERS TO GO!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by mrs.msk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lpost karke delete kar diya
yeh cheating hai

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