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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

maan (in his thoughts)
jab se hui hai shaadi
kya kya mein kar raha hu
aafat jo hai gaale mein daali
uss ko har pal bugat raha hu

jab woh pahli baar mili thi
thapaad ki khanak suni thi
par phutti kismat thi meri
jo uske baad bhi
mein wahi,biwwi banaane ke liye chuni thi

kya woh akele hi kafi nahi thi
kyu isse laga vicky ki kami thi
jo yeh isse mujh par chodti hai
jaise woh hai tommy
aur mein hu delicioue piece of chicken ponny

kya yeh kutte billi ka
jo circus meri life ban gaya hai woh kam nahi tha
jo mein ab
iske pyaar ke khatir
ban raha hu watchmen
apne hi kamre ke ,bahaar khada hua hu
madam hogi raazi
tabhi to paas hogi ,
meri bed par sone ki arzi
nahi toh ,kal ki yeh headline hogi
ki mein guest room mein sofe par so raha hu
darte the log mujhse
ab mein apni biwi ke terror se darr raha hu

just lovely ... had a big grin on my face through out reading ur poem...

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

just lovely ... had a big grin on my face through out reading ur poem...

for once

think about maan's face

bechaare ke face se hawaai hudi hui hia

apni zindagi ko yaad karke😉😆😆

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

for once
think about maan's face
bechaare ke face se hawaai hudi hui hia
apni zindagi ko yaad karke😉😆😆

well definitely yes... u have captured his love so well in ur words ...

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

maan (in his thoughts)
jab se hui hai shaadi
kya kya mein kar raha hu
aafat jo hai gaale mein daali
uss ko har pal bugat raha hu

jab woh pahli baar mili thi
thapaad ki khanak suni thi
par phutti kismat thi meri
jo uske baad bhi
mein wahi,biwwi banaane ke liye chuni thi

kya woh akele hi kafi nahi thi
kyu isse laga vicky ki kami thi
jo yeh isse mujh par chodti hai
jaise woh hai tommy
aur mein hu delicioue piece of chicken ponny

kya yeh kutte billi ka
jo circus meri life ban gaya hai woh kam nahi tha
jo mein ab
iske pyaar ke khatir
ban raha hu watchmen
apne hi kamre ke ,bahaar khada hua hu
madam hogi raazi
tabhi to paas hogi ,
meri bed par sone ki arzi
nahi toh ,kal ki yeh headline hogi
ki mein guest room mein sofe par so raha hu
darte the log mujhse
ab mein apni biwi ke terror se darr raha hu

ahaha nishu is there more to come? hahaha

loved it! I will def. put this on the update😉😆

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

well definitely yes... u have captured his love so well in ur words ...

yes she did Lakshmi

I smield adn just imagined Maan hahahaha

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

well definitely yes... u have captured his love so well in ur words ...

what to do

yaar dil ka rishta hai isse

iska dard hame mahsoos hota hai😛😃

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

yes she did Lakshmi
I smield adn just imagined Maan hahahaha

well maan must be thinking... hell sab ko patha chal gaya kya???

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

well maan must be thinking... hell sab ko patha chal gaya kya???

😆 pata toh chelega jab woh badal gaya ahaha

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

ahaha nishu is there more to come? hahaha
loved it! I will def. put this on the update😉😆

are you sure😕😲

yaar kyu sab se juute khilane ka iraada hai😆😆

waise final touch rahta hai

so hold for feww more minute😉

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#300

ready for few last lines

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