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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

ready for few last lines


yes! am giving you guys very muscial updates😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


yes! am giving you guys very muscial updates😆

ok
-lakshmi- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
even am waiting for todays musical update
mrs.msk thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

bechara
king se kya ban gaya😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

maan (in his thoughts)
jab se hui hai shaadi
kya kya mein kar raha hu
aafat jo hai gaale mein daali
uss ko har pal bugat raha hu

jab woh pahli baar mili thi
thapaad ki khanak suni thi
par phutti kismat thi meri
jo uske baad bhi
mein wahi,biwwi banaane ke liye chuni thi

kya woh akele hi kafi nahi thi
kyu isse laga vicky ki kami thi
jo yeh isse mujh par chodti hai
jaise woh hai tommy
aur mein hu delicioue piece of chicken ponny

kya yeh kutte billi ka
jo circus meri life ban gaya hai woh kam nahi tha
jo mein ab
iske pyaar ke khatir
ban raha hu watchmen
apne hi kamre ke ,bahaar khada hua hu
madam hogi raazi
tabhi to paas hogi ,
meri bed par sone ki arzi
nahi toh ,kal ki yeh headline hogi
ki mein guest room mein sofe par so raha hu
darte the log mujhse
ab mein apni biwi ke terror se darr raha hu

dekh lo
oo duniya waalo
kya tha mera ateet
aur ab kya kya rahi hai mujhpe beet
waqt woh tha kuch aisa
hota tha sab waisa ,chata tha mein jaisa
ab woh madam chah rahi hai
aur mein usske nakkhre utta raha hu
mrs.msk thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

even am waiting for todays musical update

almost done😳😳😳
just final maaneet touches are needed😆
---nishu--- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
my poem also need few touchup
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Posted: 12 years ago

maan (in his thoughts)
jab se hui hai shaadi
kya kya mein kar raha hu
aafat jo hai gaale mein daali
uss ko har pal bugat raha hu

jab woh pahli baar mili thi
thapaad ki khanak suni thi
par phutti kismat thi meri
jo uske baad bhi
mein wahi,biwwi banaane ke liye chuni thi

kya woh akele hi kafi nahi thi
kyu isse laga vicky ki kami thi
jo yeh isse mujh par chodti hai
jaise woh hai tommy
aur mein hu delicioue piece of chicken ponny

kya yeh kutte billi ka
jo circus meri life ban gaya hai woh kam nahi tha
jo mein ab
iske pyaar ke khatir
ban raha hu watchmen
apne hi kamre ke ,bahaar khada hua hu
madam hogi raazi
tabhi to paas hogi ,
meri bed par sone ki arzi
nahi toh ,kal ki yeh headline hogi
ki mein guest room mein sofe par so raha hu
darte the log mujhse
ab mein apni biwi ke terror se darr raha hu

dekh lo
oo duniya waalo
kya tha mera ateet
aur ab kya kya rahi hai mujhpe beet
waqt woh tha kuch aisa
hota tha sab waisa ,chata tha mein jaisa
ab woh madam chah rahi hai
aur mein usske nakkhre utta raha hu


madam ka order hua hai
is liye mein kitchen mein passina baha raha hu
fry pan aur spoon udd rahe hai
saare masaale bhi jal rahe hai
itne hai onion kaate
ke ab baarish ki tarah aasu tapak rahe hai

naksha badal gaya hai
is puri kitchen ka
lagta tha pahle baag phoolo ka
ab jang ka maidaan lag raha hai
aisa hi toh hoga
jab yaha duniya ka aathava ajooba ho raha
jisne aaj tak anda nahi hai ubbala
aaj woh madam ke liye BIRYAANI pakka raha hai




finally from maan
dekh mein tere pyaar mein kya kya na bana geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
me done dear
tell me kaisi hai
now please
as my time to go
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Posted: 12 years ago


awesome poem dear... sorry i donno ur name and ur user name is too difficult for me ... just curious how did u choose that user name?

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