MG-FF What does she want? Thread 2 Chapter54 pg134

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cutemishti

@cutemishti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Awesome part.
Maan in a jolly mood.
"I bet you must have heard about him" 🤣
No geet maan is waiting for you to introduce him to mk.

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Both of dem were restless, drooling n chking out each other hehehehehehe

Maan saw her n such a tease he is...poor sherni geet hahahahahahaahaha

Maan givi shock after shock to her...

Best line, u must have heard of mk to maan...hahahahahahaahaha, u in for surprise geet dear...or rather shock...

Awesome updt...thnx

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Me loving the flow n space of story.

Geet hurrying to meet her hubby but doesn't
Want to pretend. Absorbing his avatar which
Is to be die for. The gaurd unknowningly
Teased her.

Loved the way she is cribbing to Babaji.
Maan teasing her senses. How easily she
Falls for him. N that act of him ki woh aisa
Ladka nahi hai was awesome. Maza aa gaya.

The pace is perfect n u write as u planned.
If u fast forward it then it will not be interesting.

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

awesum updt...loved it... geet admiring maan frm far...naughty maan...what is ging to happpen at the dinner????waiting eagerly fr the maans face off as MK and geets reaction...continue sooon...

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

fabulous update

loved it dear

superb one

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#696

"Who would miss the chance to work with MK? He is the best in his field. I bet even you must have heard of him" Geet replied.🤣😆
i am dying to see geet's reaction when she meets mk (maan)😆😉...i am sure she will faint with shock😆🤣😆...continue soon... 😛

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#697

Awesome update

haww even watchman knows about it

geet tried not to run but she had to run

geet drooling maan

maan teasing was simply fab

continue soon

waiting for their date 😉 😉

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

now only geet's babaji can save maan 4m geet when she will come 2 knw abt maan is MK🤣... god is she so stupid that she even didn't bother to find out the full name of MK 😡