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Desipunjaban

@Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

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-:PART 8:-

MORNING MAAN'S BDAY

Maan got ready and first thing he did was to go to the temple...always on his bday he visits the temple...he got this habit from his mother,when he was a child he used to visit temple every sunday with his mother...but after her demise he visited temple on a very few specific occasions...

he came back to mansion and decided to work on his plan.😆😆...he called up the detective agency ,and told them the few details he had about geet..like the mall,about the accident and the shop she ran towards...

though the information was not efficient enough to find traces about her...the detective couldn't dare to say a no to maan..😭😭.

the maan singh khurana was not used of hearing no to his demands😡😡..

so the agency assured him to get the best possible results...satisfied he started his journey to the khurana's orphanage...there were many orphanages and welfare centres run by the khurana's trust...but the foundation of this orphanage was laid by maan's mother on maan birth...so dadima used to visit this place specially...

when maan reached there he was received by dev and mr.dhawan[head of the orphanage,a man in his late 50's and an ex employee of khurana industries...he had known maan since childhood and seen him climbing the stairs of success with hardwork...respects him a lot..]

maan went with him to his office and talked about a few general matters...then they went to the hall where everyone was gathered..

maan gave a short speech to the people and then tey started with the entertainment and lunch...

there was a small stage show organised by the kids of the orphanage ...maan watched the kids dancing and was happy 😊to bring a smile on their face...he then saw his cell ringing.

so he excused himself and went towards the corridors to receive the call since it was very noisy in the hall...

TEASER:- THE SECOND ENCOUNTER...

MAAN(ST):-geet beautiful name...maan ki geet...😉

plj leave ur comments

lv nav...😳😳😳

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

maan is in love with geet..love at first sight😳😳😳😳cant wait for maaneet to meet..pls cont soon..

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meena..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

awesom parts

loved it

pm me aftr updating

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sridevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice update. maan in love with geet.

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

NICE STORY

READ IN ONE GO

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Desipunjaban

@Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

sorry frnds! i wont be updating today...
its raining like cats and dogs so no power supply

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rsusmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

nice updates dear
waiting for the encounter

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

maan tho fida hogaya

lovely update

thanx for the pm dear

cont soon

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kkiddoopms

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hii dear have read u r new works prolouge nice start but just wanted to ask u why u have typed all words in caps its quit irritating to read all caps latters hope u don't mind but plz change it dear it will change the appearnce of u r work a lil but it will help u and also the readers will like it too as it makes it lil easy to read sorry if u mind it...😊

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

recap:-so he excused himself and went towards the corridors to receive the call since it was very noisy in the hall...

-:part 9:-

He was discussing some project with adi over the phone and then he suddenly lost his voice...

he saw geet standing with pinky in the corrridor...maan was shockingly surprised..😆😆😆

he hid behind the pillar and tried to overhear their conversation because he saw geet was upset with something...he wanted to know reason of her sadness..pinky in order to uplift geet's mood was telling her that she should forget yestreday's event and cheer up...

they will soon buy a new fish tank for zoro...geet just noded her head..

maan(st):-oh!so she lives here...geet her name is geet...what a lovely name..just like her self...she is an orphan!!??,,,...but that does not matter ...she will soon have me and will be part of family...now maan u have to plan a meeting with her (maan babu itni si der mai itne sare sapne)....oh god!!i get so unpredictable...wen it cums to her..gosh!!

...hmmm..ok this sounds great...i should gift her a new fish tank,apologise and befriend her...hmm...

maan it looks so simple but is it??

he was all busy in his self thought , did not realije that geet and pinky have gone towards the hall where everyone was present...

adi again called him up since maan was no more replying...

maan's cell rang again and he was brought back to the world...he moved his gaze back to the same place where geet was standing earlier...,but then he realijed she has gone..

he got irritated and told adi that they will discuss the matter in the office.😡.😡😡

adi scared kept the call..

maan went back to the hall praying to see her once again...n the wish was fulfilled(meri kripa se)😆😆😆

she was standing near the golgappa stall..he could understand from her expressions that she loved them😊😊..he hid in a corner and clicked her picture 😉😉and saved it as his wallpaper in his mobile..⭐️

he spoke the words in his heart geet..maan ki geet