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Posted: 12 years ago

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INTRODUCTION ABOUT ME

HEY FRIENDS!!!I HAVE BEEN A SILENT READER OF THE FORUM FOR A QUITE LONG TIME NOW AND HAVE READ MANY INTERESTING AND AWSMM FICTIONS OF ALL SO TALENTED WRITERS...(HATS OFF TO UR WRK)...SO INSPIRED FROM THEM I HAVE DECIDED TO PEN DOWN MY IDEA HERE.I DONT KNOW HOW GOOD IT WOULD BE,BUT I WILL BE REALLY THANKFUL IF YOU GIVE IT A TRY...SINCE I M NEW...I M TRYING MY HAND ON A SHORT STORY.

if by any means you find the story has already been written,i m really sorry but i m not copying...do let me know i will discontinue it right away...thanks for tolerating my bak bak...the character sketch and the prologue are given below...I have posted this ss in fanfictions forum...on reqest of brown eyes...i m posting it here as well..

CHARACTER SKETCH AND PROLOGUE- PAGE 1

PART 1,2,3,4- PAGE 1

PART 5- PAGE 2

PART 6-PAGE 2

PART 7-PAGE 3

PART 8- PAGE 3

PART 9-PAGE 5

PART 10-PAGE 6

PART 11-PAGE 8

PART 12-PAGE 10

PART 13-PAGE 13

PART 14- PAGE 13

PART 15-PAGE 16

PART 16-PAGE 18

PART 17-PAGE 20

PART 18-PAGE 24

PART 19- PAGE 28

PART 20-PAGE 31

PART 21-PAGE 33

PART 22-PAGE 36

PART 23-PAGE 38

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-:CHARACTER SKETCH:-

MAAN SINGH KHURANA

THE HOT AND ARROGANT BUSINESS MAN...MOST ELIGIBLE BACHELOR OF THE COUNTRY,,,,,WITH LOOKS TO KILL AND SMILE TO DIE FOR...A MAN OF MORALS...LVS HIS DADIMA A LOT...(AND IMAGINE EVERYTHING GRLS FOE HIS LOOKS AS U LIKE😉)

GEET HANDA

BUBBLY,CHIRPY AND A FUN LOVING GIRL...TAKES EVERYTHING WITH A SMILE ON FACE...WITH EYES SPEAKING VOLUMES...LIVES IN AN ORPHANAGE...SHE IS DUMB..😭😭(BUT DAT DOES NOT MAKE A DIFFERENCE...BABA G BACHAYE MAAN KO USSE...ISHRE MEIN BAATE KAR KAR KE MAAR DALEGI😆).BUT STILL HAS NO COMPLAINS...HAS A HIDDEN FEAR AND PAST...DATS YET TO BE REVEALED...

SAVITRI DEVI KHURANA

OUR PYARI DADIMA...SAME AS THE SHOW...LOVING AND CARING...A WOMAN WITH STRONG MORALS!!!!😃

DEV SINGHANIA

BEST FRIEND OF MAN...FUN LOVING (GOOD CHARACTER)...RESPECTS MAAN AS A BROTHER..

OTHERS CHARACTERS WILL BE INTRODUCED AS THE STORY PROCEEDS...

HELP ME WITH POSTING PICTURES..😳

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-:PROLOGUE:-

I WROTE YOUR NAME IN THE SKY,

BUT THE WIND BLEW IT AWAY.

I WROTE YOUR NAME IN THE SAND,

BUT THE WAVES WASHED IT AWAY.

I WROTE YOUR NAME IN MY HEART,

AND FOREVER IT WILL STAY.

LOVE NEEDS NO MEDIUM TO COMMUNICATE,NOR IT NEEDS ANY MEDIUM TO UNDERSTAND WHAT OTHER WANTS TO SAY.FOR IT IS FREE FROM ALL HUMAN BOUNDARIES,AND KNCKS IN LIFE WITHOUT UR PERMISSION...YET IT IS SOMETHING DAT NEEDS TO BE POSSESED,FOR IT IS FREE FROM ALL EVIL AND LIES..

LOVE HAS A SPECIAL DEFINATION OF ITS OWN FROM EVERY SINGLE INDIVIDUAL...JOIN ME AND EXPERIENCE WAT WUD BE THE MEANING OF LV FOR THIS SPECIAL COUPLE...😊

LEAVE COMMENTS...

(I AM OPEN FOR BUUDY REQESTS...SEND ME ADD REQUEST IF U WANT PM FOR THE UPDATES)

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-:PART 1:-

SINGHANIA APARTMENTS

BHAI KI NAUGHTY KAHANI YE HALKAT JAWANI...RINGS A MOBILE...

DEV:-HELLO!

DADIMA(DM):-GUD MORNING BETA!

DEV:-GOOD MORNING DADIMA...HOW R U...ARE D TESTS GOING WELL??

(SHE IS IN LONDON FOR SOME NORMAL HEALTH ISSUES)

DM:-ALL IS GOING FINE BETE ..N M ALLRIGHT...I HAVE CALLED U UP FOR SMTHING IMPORTANT.

DEV:-HMM...TELL ME WAT IS IT DADIMA.

DM:-YOU KNOW BETA I M HERE FOR MY MEDICAL TEST...N IN SOMEDAYS ITS THE BDAY OF MAAN'...AS YOU KNOW EVERY YEAR ON THIS DAY I MYSELF VISIT D ORPHANAGE STARTED BY HIS GRANDFATHER...BUT MAAN WONT ALLOW ME TO COME BAK FOR THE EVENT THIS TIME...N HE WONT EVEN GO N SEND SOMEONE ON HIS PLACE...SO I WANTED A FAVOUR FROM YOU..

DEV:-SURE!!ANYTHING FOR U DADIMA...TELL ME WHAT DO I NEED TO DO.

DM:-BETA I WANT YOU TO MAKE SURE MAAN FOR SURE VISITS THE ORPHANAGE HIMSELF N ENJOY A DAY OFF FROM OFFICE ON HIS BDAY...

DEV:-OH MY GOD DADIMA DATS NEXT TO IMPOSSIBLE!!HUSH!!

DM:-PLJ BETA...I HAVE TALKED TO MAAN...N I JUST WANT TO MAKE SURE HE DOESN'T SKIPS FROM IT...

DEV:-OK DADIMA DON'T WORRY...I WILL DO IT N WILL ALSO MAKE ALL THE ARRANGEMENTS FOR THE PARTY!!!

DM:-THANKS BETA!!BYE N TAKE CARE OF URSELF N MAAN...

DEV:-BYE! COME BACK SOON !!

-:PART 2:-

DEV GETS READY IN ALL HURRY...OTHERWISE HE WUD MISS MEETING THE PUNCTUAL SINGH KHURANA(OH DATS WAT I LIKE HIM CALLING)...N DASHES HIS CAR ON THE GATES OF THE MANSION INDICATING HIS ARRIVAL BY HONKING HIS CAR MADLY...

AT 8AM...(KHURANA MANSION)

MAAN ALREADY FOR OFFICE HAVING HIS BREAKFAST...N CHEKING HIS MAILS ON THE MOBILE...

DEV ENTERS..

DEV:-HEY YAAR...ALL GOOD...

MAAN:-NOT ANYMORE(UNDER HIS BREATH)...YES ALL IS GREAT...U TELL

DEV:-I KNOW...WAT U MURMERED JST NW...(LAUGHS)

MAAN:-SO WAT BRINGS THE KING HERE SO EARLY IN THE MORNING...DERE MST BE A RESON...ELSE U N WAKING UP SO EARLY IS NOT POSSIBLE...

DEV:-HOW WELL U KNOW ME YAAR!!!

ACTLYY I M HERE TO INFORM U DAT I HAVE BEEN GIVEN A DUTY BY DADIMA TO MAKE SURE U ATTEND THE ORPHANGE FUNCTION TOMORROW...

MAAN:-DONT WORRY ABOUT DAT DEV...I HAVE ASKED MY SECRETRY TO ARRANGE EVERYTHING FOR TOMORROW ACCORDING TO DADIMA'S WISH...N U ALSO GO THERE TOMORROW N HOST THE PARTY...I WILL BE BJY...HVING A FEW IMPORTANT MEETINGS LINED UP!!

DEV:-NO WAYS MAAN ...U R NT GOING TO SKIP D EVENT AT ALL...AFTRALL ITS UR BDAY TOMORROW...ATLEAST TAKE A DAY OFF N ENJOY D DAY...

YOU ARE ALWAYS LIKE A ROBOT WORKING ...LIVE LIKE A HUMAN FOR A DAY ATLEAST ONCE IN AN YEAR...

MAAN:-NO WAYS ..M HAPPY THE WAY I M...I M NT COMING N DATS FINAL..

DEV:-OK,..AS UR WISH...I WILL BE TELLING THE SAME TO DADIMA..N U KNW HOW UPSET SHE WILL BE...TO TOP THAT SHE IS THERE TO RELAX N GET HER TREATMENT DONE CALMLY...BT...ANYWAYS...WHAT CAN V DO...U HAVE IMPORTANT MEETINGS...

MAAN:-OH!!STOP DAT DRAMA DEV...U R NOT GOING TO DO ANYTHING OF THE SORT...

DEV:-WANNA GIVE IT A TRY...

MAAN(PISSED):-OK...I WILL B ATTENDING THE EVENT BT NT FOR LONG...I WILL COME.GREET N GO AFTR SOMETIME...DEAL

DEV:-OK DONE!!

BE READY TOMORROW AT 11...FOR A CHANGE BE THERE ON TIME URSELF...U R NT MY GIRLFRIEND I WILL BE PICKING UP(😆)_

MAAN:-JUST SHUT UP...U N UR IDIOT JOKES...

BYE M LEAVING GETTING LATE FOR OFFICE...

DEV:-BYE!!

SHOUTS(NAKUL KAKA...GET MY BREAKFAST M HUNGRY...)!!!

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NEW CHARACTER

PINKY MANCHANDA

GEET'S BEST FRIEND...SHE IS ALSO AN ORPHAN...SHE WORKS IN THE E MALL...LIVES IS DIFFERENT ORPHANAGE...

PINKY LIVES IN ORPHANAGE RUN BY KHURANA'S

GEET LIVES IN THE DB'S ORPHANAGE...

BUT BOTH OF THEM MEET IN THE EVENING N CATCH UP FOR THE DAY...

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-:PART-3:-

SAME DAY EVENING

GEET IN THE AFTRNOON WENT TO MEET PINKY...SHE WAS VERY HAPPY SINCE SHE HAD SAVED ENOUGH TO GET ZORO(ZORO IS A FISH GEET WANTED TO BUY FOR HERSELF...SHE SAW HIM IN THE SHOP WHERE PINKY WORKS) FOR HERSELF...SHE WAS SAVING FOR IT FROM THE LAST 8 MNTHS...

THE SHOPKEPER AN ELDERLY MAN LIKED GEET A LOT FOR A NATURE N PROMISED HER DAT HE WILL KEEP THE FISH UNTIL SHE COMES AND BUYS IT FOR HERSELF...

SO HERE SHE WAS SMILING NON STOP PAYING FOR ZORO...(I GUESS SHE HAS GONE MAD😆)

SMTIMES IN LIFE THERE ARE SMALL THINGS DAT GIVE US SO MUCH HAPPINESS WE CAN NOT MEASURE...SUCH WAS A DAY FOR GEET TODAY...

AFTR GETTING ZORO SHE LITERALLY JUMPED ON PINKY...

SHE KEPT ZORO ASSIDE ON THE TABLE...N TOLD PINKY

GEET:-I M SO HAPPY PINKY...I JUST CANT TELL U...THERE IS STILL TIME FOR UR DUTY HOURS TO GET OVER SO I M TAKING ZORO WITH ME DOWNSTAIRS ..WE WILL MEET AT THE USUAL SPOT..OK

PINKY:-OK...N TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF...N KEEP THIS...I KNOW YOU DID NOT EAT ANYTHING SINCE MORNING IN YOUR EXCITEMENT...WEN I CUM I WANT THE LUNCHBOX EMPTY...GET THAT..

GEET:-OK!BYE

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-:PART 4:-

THE E MALL

MAAN HAD AN IMPORTANT MEETING AND MUCH TO IS DISLIKE...THE CLIENT WANTED TO MEET HIM IN THE MALL TO DISCUSS THE PROJECT...HAVING NO OTHER OPTION MAAN WENT TO THE MALL...

GEET ALL CHIRPLY WAS WALKING IN CORRIDOR...GIVING ALL KIND OF EXPRESSIONS TO ZORO...WASN'T LOOKING HER WAY...LOST IN HER LAND...

ON THE OTHER HAND OUR PISSED ANGRY SINGH KHURANA WAS SHOUTING OVER THE PHONE SINCE THE CLIENT WAS LATE...BOTH WERE COMING TOWARDS EACH OTHER LOST IN THEIR OWN WORLDS...AAANNNDDD BANG...BOTH CRASHED INTO EACH OTHER

MAAN:-(HELL ANGRY BECAUSE OF HIS NOW WET SUIT...WAS GOING TO SHOUT ON THE GIRL AND GIVE HER A PIECE OF MIND)WHAT TH...AND WHEN HIS EYES FELL ON OUR GEET... SHOCKED HE WAS DUMBSTRUCK...(NEVER HAD HIS HEART FELL FOR SM 1 S BEUTY)

GEET BY THE TIME WHEN STOOD UP REALIZED THE GLASS BOWL HAS BROKEN INTO PIECES AND ZORO WAS LYING ON THE FLOOR FLATERRING...AS A REFLEX SHE HURRIDLY PICKED ZORO IN HER HANDS AND RAN TOWARDS PINKY... WITH ALL TEARED UP EYES SHE PUT ZORO IN SOME OTHER POT LYING ON THE TABLE...SHE THEN TOOK A BREATH...PINKY SAW GEET WORRINGLY...AND ASKED HER WHAT HAPPENED..N GAVE HER SOME WATER TO DRINK...GEET STILL CRYING TOLD HER EVERYTHING...PINKY ENSURED HER DAT ZORO WAS FINE...GEET CALMED DOWN A BIT AND REALIZED SHE HAS NOT GIVEN A LOOOK TO THE MAN WHO SHATERED HER ZORO'S HOME( DATS MELORDRAMATIC GEET) (WHOSE LIFE SHE WUD HAVE LVD TAKING)

ON THE OTHER HAND...MAAN'S CONDITION WAS NO LESS THAN ZORO...WHEN HE SAW GEET'S BEAUTIFUL EYES HE WAS ALL MESMERIZED...SEEING THE DEPTH OF THEM...HOW HER EYES WERE SAYING EVERYTHING...N THEN HE SHIFTED HIS GAZE TO THE OBJECT OF HER INTEREST...HE WAS SORRY FOR THE FISH...HE LOOKED BAK AT GEET...WANTED TO HELP HER N APOLOGISE...(HE THE ATTITUDE SINGH KHURANA WASN'T EVEN AWARE WHY WAS HE THINKING SORRY FOR THE GIRL TILL NOW)...BUT SHE RAN AWAY HOLDING THE FISH...N HE WAS NUMB TO HIS SURROUNDINGS WATCHING HER RUN...UNTIL HIS STANCE BROKE WITH HIS RINGING PHONE...

MAAN BROKE HIS THINKING STANCE N MOVED FOR HIS MEETING...LEAVING EVERYTHING BEHIND...HIS SOUL..HIS HEART...

BUT FOR THE MIND LETTING HIM BELIEVE TEMPORARILY DAT ALL THIS WAS AN ACCIDENT...