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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

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-:PART 5:-

After finalising the deal maan went back to his office and got engrossed in his never ending work...something mr.robot singh khurana hated the most was free time..bcoj he had nothing to do!!!!(oh so sad!!! bichara can't even go and hang out wid friends ,,,the media majes his life hell...)...and dat is wat happened with him now...his meeting dat was scheduled at 7 pm slot was canceled abruptly...having nothing much to do he sat back on his chair,head laid on the back rest ...relaxing...he clossed his eyes and...(lost in lala land)...the image of the same girl he saw in the mall came in front of his eyes...automatically a smile came on his face...(oh gosh!!!dat killer looks...we all can die for)...but then he remebered her tears and he again felt guilty for being a reason of her tears...he was not liking tears in her eyes...he just wanted to see her smiling...and surprisingly he did not know why was he thinking about her...but his heart controlled his mind and let maan have calm and peace not listening to his brain...suddenly maan was brought back from hiss lala by his ringing intercom..he was called up by adi getting informed by him dat its office closing hours...

maan was so surprised ..he did not realiZe how time flew by...he was actually thinking about her from the last two hours...he picked up his laptop and files and headed back to home...

AT HOME

he had his dinner and much unlike everyday he decided to sleep early...he was very happy and contnded today...and excited for tomorrowhe himself was not able to figure out the reason for the excitement...but for the time being he let himself open to be ruled by destiny and decided to enjoy the new feeling...let himself move with the flow...

-:TEASER:-

A LITTLE SNEAK PEEK INTO GET'S PAST

P.S. SORRY FOR THE SPELLING AND GRAMMATIC MISTAKES

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rsusmita
loved the parts dear
a small request dear, if you do not mind
can you please leave the space in between it will be easy to read

...thanku...butr sorry i cudnt get ur words...should i increase more space between the words...

do let me know...

i will correct my mistakes

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: deepali1022
hey...welcum dear...!!!
since dis is ur first try so all d best...!!!

concept is really nyc...
n starting too...!!!

thank you dear...

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

beautiful update and story..looking forward to next update...

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

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-:PART 6:-

On the other hand geet was very upset because zoro's home was broken and she did not had any more money left to buy a new fish pot(i don,t know what the round jar use to keep single fish is called)...pinky wanted to help her...but geet declined ...

so having no other option she took zoro back with her to the orphanage...n started looking for some pot she could give zoro...after searching a lot she got her hands on a glass bowl,not as big as zoro's old home but was the best option at the present moment...she then shifted zoro into it...she made expressions telling zoro dat she was sorry and was unable to do anything beter for him...zoro roamed around in the pot letting her know dat he was very happy being with her and this bowl does not matter...she then went to have dinner ,chatted with her friends...

at night she went back to her bed.and chatted with zoro(i m wondering itna kaise bol leti ho geet😆😆😆)..and then she dozzed aftr some time🥱🥱🥱...

in the later part of night geet was having a horrifying dream😭😭...she was all restless,panting and sweating in sleep...she wanted to help the lady,save her from all the evils...but she was scared...she had promised her ...dat she wont come out...so she was hiding and...

then she shreiked out loud😲 and woke up panting..she took a long breath and tried to calm down herself...she was used to it...smdays when she was emotionally charged up,sad or scared about something she sees these dreams haunting her...making her remember her past😭😭😭...she had felt very helpless at that time...

since she knew she won't be able to sleep anymore now she decided to go out in the garden...to her favourite place...under the open sky...the moon and the stars...she there then saw a shooting star and closing her eyes she wished

geet:-babaji...get zoro a new home ,pinky her love interest and make everyone in the orphanage who is alone..happy...and...yes please send me my prince charming(like all girls she also dreams of a prince and a lovey dovey family of her own...ek star se itna kuch...!!!)...plj plj plj fulfill all these wishes baba ji and i promise i wont ask you for anything else ever...par phele fulfill all these wishes of mine...i m ur favourite child na...!!😃😃😃

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

-:PART 7:-

KHURANA MANSION

Maan was called up by dev at 3 am in the morning ...because navaab ji just now got free from his party...so without no regretting for not calling maan at 12...he called him to wish him...

dev:-a very happy bday to u my chuddy buddy...

maan:-usually people either wish early in the morning or at 12...dats midnight...!!

dev:-yaar...atleast leave ur sarcasm for today...and get ur mood beter...aftrall its ur bday today yaar...and u knw i hold a vip position in your life...i can call u anytime..i wish for

maan:-i can see that!!!!

AFTER HAVING A GOOD FRIENDLY CHAT FOR SOMETIME...

DEV:-OK YAAR...HAPPY BDAY ONCE AGAIN AND REMEMBER YOU HAVE AN IMPORTANT EVENT TO ATTEND A11 TOMORROW...

MAAN:-HMM...i know that...thank you for ur wishes...see u tomorrow..

since maan was now awake he decided to call up dadima n take her blessings.

dadima:-a very happy bday to u beta..may god bless u with everything you wish today..

maan:-thank u so much dadima!! ab bataiye how are u doing..

dadima:-i m fine beta ..i guess i will be back soon

maan:-come soon dadima...i m missing you!!!(this side of maan is only seen when he isbery emotional...n he shows dis side of his only to dadima..)
& today he was remebering his mother while talking to dadima...

dadima:-i will come back soon maan...i m missing u too...bye tc...!!

after hanging up he stood near the window of his room lost in the memories of his mother ...he then saw the same shooting star. he remembered when he was small his mother told him about wishing upon shooting stars..

so he closed his eyes to pray for his family's happiness and automatically geet's face came in front ofd his eyes...he wished she always remains happy...

and dis was the moment he was sure and told himself he was in love with her...

and so many questions came to him...he doesn't even know her name,will he ever meet her again?? what will he say if they ever meet?? how will he react...what would he do????

he was so shocked...it was not even a day and here he was behaving so crajily...he told himself

maan:- i have really lost my senses...omg...i just don't have words..to put my feelings forth...

he encouraged himself...no negative thoughts maan you are the maan singh khurana....you can not loose her...yes,find about her and put your feelings in front of her and let her decicde...

but what if she said no...

no ways!!!maan think positive...she wont say a no to you...you are well setlled, so famous and most importantly...she will get to know how much you love her...haina...

giving himself some courage and putting forth some assuring and comforting words to himself he decided to search for her and get detectives hired ...(i m wondering maan singh khurana n this nervous...he has really fallen for her...😆😆😆)

thinking about her he then dossed off in his dreamland embracing himself in his new found feelings...his first love 😉

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deepali1022

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

nyc update dear...!!!

i wish maaneet ki sari wishes poori ho jaaein...!!!

hayeee...

me excited for maaneet's second encounter...!!

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

maan is in love with geet..😳😳😳😳lovely yaar..pls cont soon..

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

beautiful updates

superb one

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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rsusmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Desipunjaban

...thanku...butr sorry i cudnt get ur words...should i increase more space between the words...
do let me know...
i will correct my mistakes

read the parts dear nice one
ya increase more space between your words , then it will easy to read .. just like your part 7
continue like that ,nice concept dear loved continue

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago