M&G FF ' BLACK MAGIC ' Part 1st@14 18/02/2013

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hello guys ,, i am again here to disturb you all with my another story . I know i am not very good writer specialy when its come to updating my FFs and here i am starting a new FF . Please ghussa na karna its not my fault but SANA ka b fault . She push me to write this story . Now cant keep this story in my head anymore so bear me once gain . I am really very nervous about this story as i am first time writing something like that but will wait for you response .

Introduction
BLACK MAGIC people knows about is as a bad thing . Like some people in our society use it to fullfil their own nasty wishes . But is their only one type of Black magic or it exist in other forms . Did Only Black Magic destroyed peoples lifes or its our own nasty wishes and deeds that sometime make us to do the bitter act that can destroy our whole life .

So here is the story of " BLACK MAGICE "

He did a sin in his EGO
&
She make him her CAPTIVE

He snatch her everything to win a BET Just a BET
&
She snatch his PEACE With her BLACK MAGIC


SHE LEAVE HIM WITH HIS EGO TO ROT IN HELL ALONE &
ASK HIM TO FIND HER FOR HIS PEACE

WAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE

Please tell how is that
very nervouse
please please its a request

love u all
seher


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Index
Prologue below
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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana
Gurmeet Choudhary on the sets of Geet
A very rude and arrogant persone . With very high attitude and why not when you have every thing in this world Power , Money , Fame Good Looks and Luck . All these things can spoil you and he is the one famouse spoil young Business man . He Get what he want . Have a big ego once he take chalenge he never backout at any cost .
Love his Girl friend Sameera and they are soon going to marry .



Geet
Drashti Dhami
A simple yet very attractive Girl . No one Know her reall name and her identidy . She works at a night club . No one know from where she come and where she go and why anyone want to see a girl with Dark Features . Yes she is not fair like other girls and it seem she don't mind either . But she have magical eyes . EYES that can make anyone loose their sense . Her eyes can make anyone their prisnore and no one can eccape from those magical Hazels . She have a power with her that if she want someone to be her then that person have to her's only . She believe not to hurt anyone But if someone hurt her she never leave untile she get her revenge . Her only one BAD HABBIT
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" Prologue "
She switched on her phone and as expected her phone buzz with call . She took a long breath forming next word that she is going to speak . She come and stand in balcony looking at the world down . Beta where are you larky waly a rahy hn ajj tu juldi ghar aja . She heared her mother's voice although her mother is try to control her voice but tremble in voice said it all . She smiled bitterly on her mother attempt Maa unko inkaar kr do ab kisi larky ki zaroorat nahi hai She said in a straght voice and in return she just heard Gasp Kon hai wo or kya tu ny He mother asked wishing badly she said no but when she hear nothing she close her eyes in pain . Did he love you She asked again NO she pause for a moment then speak . But he have to be mine wo chahy ya na chahy ussy mera hona hi hoga .The grief in her voice said it all and her mother know their is nothing that can stop her .


Maa jashan ka intzaam kro She said in complete cange tone Kis baat ka jashan teri zindgi ki berbaadi ka tery dard ka . tery zindagi bhar k gam ka ,,, kis baat ka jashan . Her mother could not control her tears more and she broke down her only child's life got ruined and she is asking for party . Party to celebrate her new sorrow Party to celebrate her destruction her new pain that is gifted her for life time . Maa did we evey celebrate our happiness even we don't know what happiness called . How it felt . We always celebrat our pain aur ye dard zindagi bhar k liye hai to iss ka jashan be utna hi barra hona chahiye na Mom arrenge a party like never before ... Log to khushi mn jashan mnaty hein or hum apni BERBAADI ka jashan mnayein gy She said in a very happy voice she can hear her mother's cries on other side but she ignore all this Maa i will be back in 1hour bye she said before throwing her sell with full force .



She held sheet properly around her body when she here click of door opening . She come inside where he is standing with bags in his hands . She silently held one bag that have cloths and leave for bathroom . He watch her every move keenly she did not react like other normal girls when he told her that he will not marry her and he love his friend Sameera . She did not cry nor she ask him to marry her after what happened last night and looking at bed he know he is the first men who touch her . But still her ignorance hit his ego hard He want her to come to him ask him to be with her . He want to see her cry he want her to beg to him and then he will leave her . Then his ego will be satisfied . But he don't know what is store for him .



She come out of bathroom wearing her cloths But she did not have any make up on her face . Tum ne make up nahi kiya He could not help but to ask her Ajj k baad mn kabhi make up nahi krun gi She tell him straight and that a thing he did not like but don't know why he want her to be in make up like before . Don't think to blackmail me to get me back very soon i am going to marry sam . She turn and give him a bitter smile You think i will come to you no Mr Khurana you your self will come to me and beg to me and ask me to be with you . She said challening him further . He harshly pull her to him In your dreams He spoke looking in her eye that's when he notice her eye colore is change its no more black but its honey brown and in second he feel her eyes boring inside him in his heart making him their captive . He want to tore his gaze but could not he feel himself paralyzed in front of her eyes . Its like his whole existence depend on these hazel nothing left in his own control . He never felt like this the way he is feeling now he want to scream but his voice did not come out . He want to breath but his lungs not working .



Next moment he found himself plastered against wall and she leaned on him she kiss on his forhead then down to her way and with each kiss he felt himself drowning in unknown feeling .

She tore his shirt and kiss on his heart sucking hard
Your peace of heart is with me now

She kiss him on lips a soulful kiss and on the end she suck his lips
Your peace of soul is with me
she looked at him one last time with boring her eyes
Your peace of body with
She turn to leave but stop for a moment

YOU ARE UNDER MY BLACK MAGIC
FIND ME IF YOU WANT YOUR PEACE BACK .

She stop at the door step and looked back only to find him standing still like statue looking at her with blank eyes .

Don't think to marry with anyone else because jiss raat tumhaari shaadi ho gi meri ratein be rangeen ho jayein gi tum to ek larki k saath stuck ho jao gy but mein to... She leave her sntence and turn to leave when his pleading voice stop her WHAT IS YOUR NAME On his question she let out small mocking laugh as she saying hi RAAT GUZARLI SAATH OR NAAM KA PTA HI NAHI

My name is BLACK ANGEL

hello guys prologue likh di
do tell me how is that
kuch acha ye bura lagy to btana zaroor

please please do tell me

love u all
seher

Edited by love4all - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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FIRSTY A BIG HUGS


CONGRATS ON NEW FF DI ❤️

n mai kya kari 😲
mai toh bohot sweet bachi hu 😳


AWESOME CONCEPT DI 😃

LOVE IT 😊

PLS CONTINUE SOON 🤗

love ya 😃


Edited by Brown-Eyes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous Concept
waiting for the update
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congo for new story

superb intro...do continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowieee firstly congo for the new story seher di...
Extremely new and innovative concept, eagerly looking for it 😃
Am sure u'll rock it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for d ff.
interesting concept.
cont.soon.
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congrats for the new story dear
its interesting
continue soon.

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