MG SS Hamaari Prem Kahaani Thread 1 - Page 31

Originally posted by: had2bu

First of all this seemed like an integral part of the story

While the words you have used convey a long story, the timeline is only a day

Makes me wonder if Maan had never driven that road, never seen her, would he have taken this step?

In that sense, Geet would wonder how far she can trust him. I know she loves him and he loves her but is it only fate that is bringing them together.

Having gone through so much hurt in her past, how easy will it be to take a chance on someone who has left her before.

Love the symbolism that you bring in the story.

Very nice dialogues, very nice descriptions.

Awesome update Heytal

Eager to know the story more...

Hope you don't mind the questions.

Thanks for updating.

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply fabulous.loved it;

Originally posted by: love2_soma

abb kaise ja paogi geet...apni zindagi ko peechhe chhod kar...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Originally posted by: valli22

nice part..

geet did not regret it..n feeling herself as maans wife..

she want 2 go away from him cherishing the moment..

but maan stopped..

n he got her divorce papers..

her priceless possession..

she is free 4m her past life..

now maan will not let her go.

Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
awesome dear...
so Geet's marriage is over...
but shes free...
very good...
now shes tied only with Maan...
who is the disgusting person and do mention about the family but let it be short...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Awesome...


No words hw much i lovd it...


Conti soon


vry well writtn yar.

Both their dialogues were superb

Originally posted by: punam2712

GEET WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE HIM AGAIN, BUT HE KNOWS THAT IT IS NO USE RUNNING FROM YOUR MEMORIES

THEY GO WITH YOU ALWAYS

LOVELY UPDATE

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Heytal 😃
🤗
Updating 😃
Waiting 😉