Toote Hue Khwaab- Relics of a Departed Era - UPDATES LINK on PG 34

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Hello Friends... how are you all?

It's me Sam, writer of "Sargoshiyan - Whisper of Love"

This time Me and Halema are coming together with a new Maaneet Story

Basically this story came up in my mind from a Telefilm
"Amader Golpo" telecast in Bangladesh on Friendship Day
and one of the friend's personal life story attracted me 😆

But yes, we will change the plots in many ways and present here with our own twists 😉

So here we present...


Toote Huwe Khwaab.. Relics of a Departed Era


Our Previous Works...

Halema Presents... Piya Tose Naina Lage Re

Sam Presents... Sargoshiyan - Whisper of Love


Hope you all will join us in this story...

Love,
S@m and Halema xx ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ADD THIS USERNAME FOR PM's!
This story is starting very soon!! 😃
Prologue and Character Sketch (to be updated) on Page 1
PROMO 1 on Page 3
Trailer 1 on Page 4
PROMO 2 on Page 8
Part 1 on Page 12
Part 2 on Page 19
Part 3 on Page 24
Part 4 on page 28
Part 5 on page 33

Edited by samina_halema - 12 years ago
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Prologue

It's almost mid night. A winter's cold mid night

All the lights in the outside were shut down

Both sides of the house's, are looking like dark pitch black shadows

Sometimes from here to there the barking sounds of the dogs are coming, letting others know that they are awake to take care of their masters

People make sure to shut down there windows to keep their house warm from the cold winds.

But if you look closely, you will find out that in this cold breeze, one house's only one room's window is still open. But the person's face inside that room was invisible because of the darkness.

The person is looking at the moon from last 4 hours, in deep thoughts.

It seems that the person is totally unaware of the surrounding and what is happing around

It's her daily routine from last 4 years.

Every single day she used to rush to Handa Industry at 8 am. Come back home at around 9 pm. Then after completing her works she stands in front of the window and keep looking at the moon. Until sleep comes down to her eyes

Yes, she is Geet Handa. The only heir of the famous industrious, Mohindar Handa. The famous corporate girl well known by all the industrious in India

Geet handa, who took the entire control of the Handa industry, at an early age of 20. When she was still a student to complete her graduation

Like every day, she is now looking at the moon, in some deep thoughts.

When the moon hides behind the clouds, she comes out from her thoughts. She comes back to her bed, sits down and opens the side drawer that is attached with the bed.

A black leather diary

2008

Written above the diary

She opened the diary and came to the last side

On the date December 16th




(Poem written by Dipti_Sam, all the rights belong to the writer only, so don't copy it for your personal use, or i will take legal actions against you)

She closes her eyes, as tears come out from her eyes. This is the only time when she let those tears fell down, when no one is there to see her pain, to wipe these tears.


From last four years this is the way her life is leading, just the way he left her four years ago


I know i know, very bad starting 😆

hope you guys will support us in this story

don't forget to share your opinion, as we are totally confused whether you guys are going to like this saddy saddy starting or not


Loads of Love,

~~S@m~~


Edited by samina_halema - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character sketch



Geet Handa





Geet is a 24 year old young extravagant girl. But, one incident changed the whole course of her life and took away her existing flamboyant nature.

Maan Singh Khurana




Maan is a 25 year old open-minded man but with installed principles. Himself and Geet were close, but something caused him to move away from Geet, leaving her heartbroken.


Geet's Family:


Mohinder Handa (Geet's father)




Meera (Geet's cousin sister)





Maan's Family:


Savitri Devi Khurana (Daadi Maa)





Jaya Singh Khurana (Maan's Mother)





Dev Singh Khurana (Maan's brother)




Anvesha Singh Khurana aka Annie (Maan's sister)




Edited by samina_halema - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new FF
waiting for the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrates on new ff
waiting for the updates
title is amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATS DEAR
WAITING FOR THE UPDATES
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Hello..All the best Shona n haly baby for ur new ff...Me looking forward for it...
To u both With my ...❤️
Luv u both... 😃


Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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congrats for the new story
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u both when will u update ur respective works?

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