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Posted: 12 years ago
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MU cleared... nice story..
will be waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful confession..😳😳😳😳😳finally maan got his love...hmmm so romantic..cant wait for epi..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read in 1 go nice os cont. soon
nice geet maan finally confessed waiting for epilogue
Edited by IshitaIrani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshitaIrani

read in 1 go nice os cont. soon

nice geet maan finally confessed waiting for epilogue

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Posted: 12 years ago
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EPILOGUE

"damn serious".The tears formed in his face.my hands automaticaly went there n touched the pearl like liquid frm his face.He hold my hand there moved towards his lips n planted a wet kiss there.I started blushing.
Maan's story.
so finaly she is mine.she is blushing,n thats her cheek red i m feeling like to bite her there now."geet don't make it more hard for me".she looked towards me with her brown almond like eyes,with the expression what?.that made me smile a little n i said,"if u blush like this then i will loose my control n claim u here as mine" while looking at her pink luscious lips.she turned to opposite side with shy. I made her sit in opposite chair like a true gentleman.she adorned the seat with her presence."so,geet now u think i have the permission to make u sit" she noded her head."so, say who i am to you now,that u have given me the permission" after a big silence she smiled n said"boyfreind".with that i started questioning her about our proposal n our date continued.
AFTER 6 MONTH
Geet's story
my phone rang in between my sleep,i know whose call is that .i recieved the call"hmmm.." frm other side i got a chuckling sound."oh! Jaan ur voice is so sexy at night" i smiled."geet u r sleeping peacefully making me restless.u r a big cheater ,u said if i won the bet i can kiss u ,but u cheated" i pouted with anger n said "maan don't lie ,i allowed u to do that.now u r lieing to me" with that my dreamy sleep was over.he replied,"jaan,but u know na i didn't asked that type of kiss,which u give u to the every other babies n puppy u see.i want the special one u know lip to lip"i blushed n said,"maan wait a little,u will get all u want in our special night only wait for two more night"."okay what i can do otherthan that i will wait for our special night.But u will be punished for making me wait,remmember that. Okay good night n sweet dreams about me."i am thinking how my whole life changed from our first date,we were girlfreind n boyfreind for 2 months.then we changed our relationship into fiance and after two days he will be my husband.it all seems to be a sweet dream.our love keeps on increasing as the days pass.
AFTER TWO DAYS.
Today is my marriage,today i m going to be his forever.I m waiting for the priest to call me to the mandap.maan is also waiting for me eagerly,as i m waiting for him.finaly the preist thought of calling me.i proceeded towards mandap,with my mother n other female relatives of mine.they all are teasing me like hell.finaly here is the most handsome groom sitting in mandap waiting for me to make me his.
MAAN'S STORY
after making me wait for this long,she is here the most beautifull bride in the whole world one n and only my geet.The whole ceremony took place very nicely we took 7 vows of marriage,i filled her partition with sindoor and tied mangalsutra around her neck.she is mine now, my wife Geet maan singh khurana now.both of our family is happy.Now i m moving towards my rm ,no our room.making all the barier in our rooms door away(all my cousin sis).i closed the door puting the bolt.my room is decorated full of roses. Only the light of scented candles are present,cool breeze is there which have the scent of my geet.My bride is sitting in the middle of the bed waiting for me.i removed my watch and kept it in the shelf and went towards her.and sat beside her in the decorated bed.
Geet's story.
he came ,sit very close to me n hold my hand which was clutching the lehnga of mine tightly.n said "geet, i want to see my jaan's face,can i?" he planted a kiss in my hand and asked "geet, can i?" i felt butterfly in my stomach.i said "hmm.."maan removed my veil over my face and touched my chin n make me look towards him.he said," today u have dressed kill me geet" i blushed.he started removing all my ornaments starting from mangtika to payal with sensous kisses in the ornaments place. I can hear both of us hearbeat beating for each other.after removing all ornaments,maan started opening my hair n planted soft kiss on my neck.he made me lay on the bed n said "geet i can't control any more"looking towards my lips.i was all red,blushing .i closed my eyes n said"i m all urs maan".i can feel him coming close to me,his breath faning my lips and then he claimed me as his by touching his lips over mine sucking my lower lips after some time i also started responding him.sucking and biting his lips.he created a havock inside me.i felt his hardness rubbing over my thighs sensously over the cloths,n i was all wet n ready for him .we were wild passionate whole night removing all barrier between us.completing each other emotionaly and physically.This is my story,no i should say our story.

Thankyou all of u ,for ur supports which encouraged me to write more n complete this story.
Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Special thanks to some special people who supported me through out the whole journey.and were there with me always n correcting me.
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Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful epi..finally maaneet married..lovely...tks for a beautiful story..keep writing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
Unfortunately I didn't know about this before.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely epilogue
finally maaneet married...
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 12
nice...
wow so they are getting married...

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