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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Susegad

<div>Oye kanjoos,hello, roz roz thode hi na khilati ho. Jo bhi khilati ho, woh bhi tumhe hila hilake thap thapake nikalni padti hain. 😆

Arey jo acchi cheez hoti hai wo thode thode instalments mein hi milti hai! Aur uss chhote instalment ke liye bhi thap thapana padta hai. Ainveyi thodi mile gi! 😉

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Arey jo acchi cheez hoti hai wo thode thode instalments mein hi milti hai! Aur uss chhote instalment ke liye bhi thap thapana padta hai. Ainveyi thodi mile gi! 😉

And this comment is exactly why I see the colored streaks in you.😆

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Susegad

And this comment is exactly why I see the colored streaks in you.😆

Okay. I give up. Maybe I do have those coloured streaks that you're insisting I have but they don't make themselves obvious very often! 😳

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Congrats Mariam on the new thread.

Maan's background came as a surprise. The way you write about his insecurities as well is like a breath of fresh air.

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

part 4
awesome part dear...
cont soon...

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I read both the chapters{chapter 3 and 4} in one go...

After watching GHSP till Dec 14 2011, I kind of dislike "Eye locks" but chapter 3 made me desperate for locking their eyes once..It was cute in its own way..Cuteness was subtle yet prominent..and it was all because of magic of your words and character portrayal...

My favorite line from the chapter is.."As the professors praise her speech and her confidence, I feel like a proud parent who's child has just won a difficult competition. "

I think maan's feelings for geet are beyond teenage attraction or infatuation..!!!😊

Coming to chapter four,

I loved each and every relative of maan,his mother,his elder brother and ofcourse his best friends..

He is completely different from what geet thinks him to be..

Waiting for her to know him{atleast look at him once}..Wait she did look at him at the end but why that blank expression on her face..

I am little scared...

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

congrates on new thread dear

aww lovely update

i'm caught

oh no\

beautiful line

waiting for next part

cont soon dear

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

congo for new thread dear

update was awesome

maan is a fun loving guys and also a mumma's boy😆😆

so geet atlast caught him watching her

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

congrats on new thread...
was in pondicherry so cud not comment...
nice update...
and cliffhanger...

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Congrats for d new thread buddy.

And d update,really soothing,chilling and a sweet one.

I love Maan's mom's character,representing a real modern lady.

And d frnd circle of Maan also superb.

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