MG OS A Walk in a Cloud Last Part/PG 20_4th Feb - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
superb Os dear

very much emotional 😭


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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
TICH
YOU MADE ME CRY
IT WAS EMOTIONAL I COULD NOT ABLE TO STOP MYSELF CRYING
THIS TYPE OF PROBLEM IS THERE IN EVERY SECOND HOUSE...
WIFE FEELS INSECURE ...MEN NEVER TELL THEIR EMOTIONS
WHY CANNOT THEY EXPRESS THEIR EMOTIONS...
WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE SOON

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
OMG.. it was lovly OS.. my heart felt very heavy after reading this.. update soon waiting to c Maan Geet's confrontation
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
omg when i read it on blog i really felt heavy now again after reading this me 😭
its really a wonderful update
maanu's own gaughter hate him thinking he donty lv them n do thing only 4 name sake babaji
n maanu aww he lv his family more than his life n bt dont know how to express
he lv her only her
me know haina
lvd it
precap waiting 4 more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Hey tich wow superb upd.👏

u really made me super emotional.

plz upd. soon.

wanna know the reason behind maan's behaviour.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
very emotional n painful story
very well
👏 written
all in pain, no body is happy ... payar hote hue bhi pyar se anjan hai
😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Hayee
you have updated this in if
i had read this story when you posted it for competition
and i Am in love with the story and writing

and i want to read it here in if too.. but i Am from mobile.. i want Some time to read and comment
and sorry can't even press like button from mobile
i found the story now will read it tomorrow and will comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Thant ws Absolutally Amazing OS Tich👍🏼
Loved it very much!!

aww so emotinal start...make me cry😭
well written...their emotiona n pain 👏

waiting for next part
conitnue super soon
Thank u for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful emotional OS! Wionderfully written! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IT IS A LOVELY STORY BUT I READ IT ON BLOG

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