MG OS A Walk in a Cloud Last Part/PG 20_4th Feb

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sridevi

@sridevi_n

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

it was emotional and awesome update.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

wow lovely emotional tearful update dear.. happy tears , thanku tich for giving tis feel.. i love te scenes so so much.. te way geet wake and found my maan missing and te way she felt insecure and te way my maan cuming from washroom and geet drooling and te way my maan missed his jaan ki expression and te way my maan sensing her feelings and te way he is hugging her and te way geet consoling him and te way my maan melting her with his love and washing his pain too was so emotional.. te way kids searching they mom and te way my maaneet was messy messy was lovely.. te way my maan saying his geet to ask him watevre she wants but she is hesitating and them asking for vacation was so lovely.. my maan and his daughter ki talk was so lovely emotional and te way my maan with his family was so lovely.. my maaneet family ki day was so lovely emotional tearful, wat they missed my maan started to fulfill it was so lovely my naughty maan romancing his get in front of his kids was so lovely.. te way my maan saying abt vacation and te wya he is cancelling his meetings was so lovely.. i love te update so so so much dear

tich really im so happy to read tis os, very heart touching os, not only my maaneet ki family me too WALKING WITH THEM IN THE CLOUD...I LOVE IT

Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

LOVED THE STORY

THIS IS A HOUSE HOLD STORY

HUSBAND/FATHER IS SO BUSY WITH WORK THAT HE LOSES SIGHT OF THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IN HIS LIFE - HIS FAMILY

THEY MOVE SO FAR THAT IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO GET BACK

LOVED MEGHA, SHE WAS SO HURT BY HER FATHER'S INDIFFERENCE TOWARDS HER MOTHER THAT SHE FOUND IT DIFFICULT TO BELEIVE HIM

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

last part
fantastic dear...
an emotional ride...
Maan has lost 18 years of this...
there will always be a void...
its not a short span of time...
but at least everything's fine now...
Mohit is so cute and Megha understanding...
awesome one dear...
loved it...

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Noshin_Diya

@Noshin_Diya

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

it was soo touchy but i just loved it. u present a simple & a real story with a huge masala which made it a superb, dhamakedar, blockbaster OS... SImply FATAFATI

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kuhu

@kuhu18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

THANKS TO CONT THIS SS

i loved every bit of it

last part was just awesome

all trying to leave past and move forward with each other sport

Maan was hesitant to talk to his kids that was emotional Geet sported him loved the growing bound between father and daughter

Geet and Maan always had this but was not shown to each other or released ... Maan miss his 18 years but now his full time for his family and he has worked so hard in past so he can afford it now so he is all for his family now

loved whole story and Maaneet love and understanding for other AWESOME SS

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pariversh

@pariversh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

hi tich!!! i luv ur ff,s i m silent reader bt for 1st time or may b 2nd time i m commenting btw as alwayz ur ds os iz kamal👏👏👏

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

wonderful OS ! true reality of many many families with difference in degree of ignorance and indifference. how many families miss their moments of togetherness for work... too much of work... to scale the heights of their career. how many lost their youth... their laughter and how many women are left alone with kids to look after. pity those kids who never get some of their dad's time... love.though maan truly loved geet and his kids, in his quest for earning more, giving luxuries to his family... went far away from his family. even his kid started hating him... not comfortable with him... what is the use of such wealth, such sucess. glad maan understood the need to spend time with family... enjoy the life as it comes... give kids the love and care they deserve... love wife the way she deserves to be loved. beautifully written !