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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you All so much for making it possible that This FF of me reached the 2nd Thread so Soon.. Muahhh to all yr 😃


Part 11


Geet was stunned. This sudden hug spotted a strange spell on her. It was unknown, unusual, unnamed. She did not hug him back nor moved a bit. She was just trying to identify was it true! Was it really happening or she had dreamed of him. She was feeling sensation in her body to feel his touch around her and certainly, was relishing too.



It passed a quality time till they could not be parted. After that Maan, when he felt his heart full of satisfaction he moved back emotionally. She too came back in her normal self with various of nervousness in her. She was looking down when Maan cupped her face. Lovingly he spoke "Thank God Geet you're alright. You dont know how much worried I had become for you! Searched every where.. asked to every single person about you but you was no where...every moment I had died thinking, worrying about you''... His tone started to rising heedlessly..''tum kaha hogi.. this one thought was making me mad!!!!''... He shook her clutching her shoulder '' Why the hell you needed to leave hotel !!! Why did not you wait for me outside..somewhere near there you Damnit!!!!!! did you ever think agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh mera kya hota...'' suddenly his sound sloped down and faded when saw her frozen eyes on him with some melted ice inside it. They became remain like that for fair moments and then some words came out from Geet mouth "Y-you were wor-ried for me? '' He words were merely hear-able but Maan knew what she had just said. And it was the moment when Maan realized, how he had opened his heart out before her, so closely. And the most surprising thing was, he was not regretting.. not a little bit. In fact he was feeling very light bringing his feelings out toward her.

"Wo mai... '' he tried to explain but could not and then a coughing sound caught their attention. "Dadimaa!! '' Maan spoke and then he realized the most important thing, " How did you come here Geet ??'' with confusion filled face..



Geet with fear started to explain him "Wo.. I asked some people about your address.. '' She told how manager treated and then she thought to wait for him out side of Mansion when Dadima spotted her and... ''

Again Dadi coughing sound came and this time, it was loud enough to be thought that as she might was awake.



"We shouldn't be here'' Maan said and drag Geet to the guest room. Room was very dark with no source of light was on. Geet afraid and then she heard the door been closed with slight thud. She turned to door direction .. "Maan??'' she spoke in dark. Her heart was racing with the closeness of him and also with the fear of darkness. "Maan where are you??'' her heavy breath was clearly hearable in dark blackness. She tried to search him...



"I'm here Geet! Light on hone se shyad Dadi ko pata chal jaaye. Wase , Mere sath andhere me dar lag raha hai ??'' He teased..



"Haan !... ..wo ji.. Nahi mera matlab hai Aapse nahi... wo andhere se !!'' the wave of nervousness was very noticeable in her rhythm of melodies voice. "Dont worry I'm here. Hold my hand'' Maan smilingly raised his hand to her. Geet searched for him. "Kaha hai??''



"Geet here!!'' Maan held her hand guessing where she was. With the sudden hold a slight moan of pleasure came out from her mouth with the shudder in body.



"Come .. sit here !'' He sat on bed . Geet tried to find bed patting her one hand in air.



"Nahi mila??'' Maan asked hiding his chuckle.



"Mil gaya'' She twisted her lips in annoyance.



So finally both seated , unknowingly very close that their sound of breaths could be heard by each-other. The black darkness of surround gave the very chance to bloom their closeness into togetherness. Sometime uncovering your feelings can be very difficult when you can see the effect in other's eyes. It stops you to go further.. but when the moment come to feel it without see, it make everything.. much easier to express.And this happened with both. When Maan hand reached her face and when, she pressed her face in it.. they both dint know. Everything was unthinking..natural.. Geet closed her eyes in reflex when felt his touching forehead in her... "Geet... '' He breathed.. " you dint tell me how did you come here'' his warm breath had fondness which absorbed Geet conscious completely..



"Wo.. ''

"Bolo na ''



"Dadi sa-saw me standing outside and she br.. ''



"And she brought you inside .. haina !!'' He opens his eyes which saw darkness only yet, could hear her rapid heartbeats. Least he knew it was not because of him but the fact was hidden from him, this was making her worry. "Maan I want to say something.. ''



"Hmm!!'' he was not out of spell yet..



"Maan wo.. Dadi ..''



"I know Geet .. but you dont worry..i will tell her everything tomorrow. I am sure she will accept you .. this marriage.'' he cupped her face..



"Nahi.. aap meri baat toh suniye.. '' She tried to say when suddenly heard a drunken sound from outside. Both came back in complete sense. Geet clutched Maan hand tight. "He is Dev.. my brother. I should go and check him'' He stood up to go. " Geet tum so jaao hm!!''



"Humara ek sath hona abhi shyad thik nahi hoga '' He thought. Leaving Geet Maan came out and watched Dev.. who was fully drunk, was talking on phone. Maan angered seeing Dev's being drunkish . "I'm going bro... jaa raha hu apne room me. Wo today we had party no.. so thori jyada pee li.. '' he grinned stupidly . He left to his room blabbering randomly. Maan too left his room before anyone could see him there...

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Next Morning, Dadi was settling dinning table when Geet came and greeted. "Good morning beta!'' Dadi said smilingly. Geet insisted to help her on that Dadi denied but Geet made her agree. Both were chatting and helping each other when Maan came out from his room and saw, them talking and laughing. He felt like his heavy heart became light all of sudden. He smiled looking them happy. He came down and took his seat.. "Good morning Dadima''



"Good morning Maan Beta.. '' she noticed Maan eyes on Geet on which, she was shying, looking down, hesitating. "Maan.. she is Geet!.. ''



"Good morning Dadi..'' at same time Dev came and greeted. He noticed Geet "Dadi ye kon hai ?''



"Geet!!! '' Both Dadi and Maan said in union excitedly.. on which Geet looked both one by one worried, seemed she knew what is to come very soon. "Dev.. she is Geet.. her husband has left her and so . She has come for seeking our help... !! ;;



And then Maan gaze instantly raised on Geet with utmost shock...





Precap : (same 😛)" Geet!! come Beta.. he is our family friend Mr. Maadhva.. he is in police beta..He'll help you '' Dadi spoke..

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"Listen... I need every single information about this girl.. as soon as.. Got It!!! ''


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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely😉

loved maaneet moments😃

opps now what will happen hope maan doesn't misunderstood her

waiting eagerly for next part
Edited by kkiddoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww lovuuu superb update...hayeee after hugging geet maan didn't feel ant regret it mean maan already fall in love with geet ...😳...hayeee so excited...😃...hayeee my heart was also beating fastly while maaneet was in dark room😉😉...lovu ye matt puch meri qqq...no comment...hehehehe...awesome update...mujhe dev pasand nehi aaying i think he will make some prob in geet's life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan ne tho apne dil ki bat bol dia.saans bhi nahi liya.😆...chalo maan ko geet mil gayi.lekin abb kya hoga police ko geet ke pati ko search karna hay abb maan kya karega😕..wating
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing n beautifull update...
maan huggng geet...
aw...
n dan all her fear n worry opn up in front of geet...
maan teasing geet...
im not getng g8 vibes frm dev..
isy maaneet se dur rkho.. plzz..
w8ng eagerly 4 next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan cnfessd hs feelngs,bt dadi ne bomb phod dia,nw polic vil search hr hsbnd hw maan vil fix evrythng.gud going mona cntinue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was simply a woowww update Love..:):)
i just loved that scene whn maan n geet entered in g dark room coz maan dont want to disturb dadima..;);)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part, lovely
maan confessed his heart's wishes in front of geet
geet want to say about her coming in KM but didn't get time and next day equally shocked & surprised for maan
surprised and happiness to see geet there and shocked to hear that geet's husband left her and she came to for help
continue soon
aab gaye kya hoga
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pls one more part

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