FF Discussion: Vaidhumom(Lakshmi)'s FF...

Lakshmi di is fantastic...love both her FFs so much...waiting for the updates dear...

Hey Lakshmi,
here a little something on your FFs.

Geetika:
I don't know much about south India and their language/customs, yet I enjoyed every bit of the story. You showed that Geet doesn't need to be a punjabi sherni to tackle Maan. The fact that you actually added tamil phrases (thankfully with translation), made it so much easier to imagine the scenes and enjoy them. I did, just as I promised, read through all updated till now and enjoyed every bit. Geet's past, Maan's attitude and more over the other characters like Annie, Dadi, Meera/Yash and so on.
I am eagerly waiting for next updates, please don't make us wait so long... Best of luck with it

Journey Called Life:
Beautifully written FF. While Geetika has a more (for me) catching story, JCL has a nice structure.
Maan and Neha tracks are shown parallel with those of Geet and Dev. Komal is the link between both that they don't know yet. I just love how Maan and Geet feel attached towards each other as Komal's mama and papa. I wonder what will happend when they find out.

Overall, superb stories. I also want to thank you for something I never got the moment to:
You were one of the first people who encouraged me to continue posting my first FF. I will never forget that. Thanks

Love
Mina

i love your ff work...u r an amazing writer!!!