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Hey Girls me and Kesha wrote this story. It's her first maneet story. Hope you girls will like it!! To beast with loveIt was a rainy day Geet going home. She was drowned into the rain. Geet loved the rain but not today, today was her friends b-day and her entire hair where getting ruined thanks to this rain. Geet started walking faster and faster in the hope of not getting to wet. Geet tripped over a stone she fell down. Her dress had torned a bit and her knee was bleeding but not that badly.
''Damn my dress''
Just then she fellt a heavy hand on her shoulder.She turned around to see two big browns eyes starting at her.
''Are you alright Miss''
Instead of getting scared the voice made her feel secured.She fell herself getting lost in his bigg brown eyes.
''Miss, are you alright''

lost in a trance " umm... wht did u say sorry I didn't hear you... I was lost somewhere!"


The creature couldn't help but chuckle wen suddenly he got a strange smell he sniffed and sniffed and Geet started feeling insecure she thought tht the weird creature was sniffing her, just then his eyes stared at her leg where she was bleeding. Geet wanted to slap the shit out of him "how dare he stare at her legs lyk tht

"OMG!! your knee is bleeding come with me"


he took her to a near by pond and rested her soft delicate feet on his legs and took water form the pond and started pouring water from the pond on her legs
Geet winced in pain

"I'm sorry ,is it paining?"


Geet nodded her head in no and smiled ever so sweetly at him.
His heart skipped a beat the smile she gave him was one of the sweetest smiles he ever saw.
Geet then said

"its getting late I think I should head back now"
"n-no!! plz stay for a while its almost morning u can't leave as yet"
"but I have to go!"
"are u scared of me?"
"n-no y wud u think tht? u helped me!"
"well then let's just stay here besides there is just two hours again until sun rises and u wouldn't want to wake up your family members at this hour tht's if you have any!"
Geet thought it over st. "how can I not stay with this creature he is so sweet and I definitely can't go home at this hour "

she then sat there and they talked umtil Geet started feeling sleepy
Next Morning when Geet awoke she was in the arms of the most handsome man ever. Geet tried to remember what happnened. She remembered she went home with a weird creature then who was this handsome guy. She started at his face, just prince charming openend his eyes.Yep Geet thought this are the same brown eyes she saw yesterday.Maan found it kind of weird the way she was starring at him. He coughed to get her out of her la-la land.Instead of getting embarresed geet asked.
''Are you the same person who took me to his home''
''Eh yes I am''
''How come you don't look the same except your big brown eyes''
''Well I turn into a beast hiddeous creature whatever you want to call it after 8 pm and by 5 am I turn into a handsome man''
''No I disagree, you turn into a hiddeous creature after 5 am and into a prince charming after 8 pm''
''EXCUSE ME''
Geet giggled.Maan had never met such a weird person in his whole life, instead of being scared she was making fun of him.
''Haan sach toh keh rhi hoon. I don't like this look of yours you just look like a ordinary boy''

Maan was shocked to hear tht someone human had actually lyk him in his beast form he felt lyk he was falling deeper and deeper in love with this angel
" ok is there something wrong with u... you like me more in the hideous beast form?"
"yes u look way more handsome and bushy!" saying tht geet lowered her eyes in embarassment. Seeing this Maan had to tease her
"oooh so u lyk me in the bushy gross form?"
"you aren't gross... who told u... tht u were gross but thinking abt it now this look isn't too bad either I think u look awesome either way!"
"oooh well thnq u pari!!! no one has ever said this to me before" Maan said scratching behind his head
Geet looked at Maan in confusion
" who is Pari"
Maan looked at her lovingly and replied "its u silly thts my nickname for you since u resemble a pari"
"aww blush thnq u"
Maan just laughed at geet's childish behaviour then he looked deep into her eyes and said
"
I really like u pari"
"I really like u too beast''
''Beast''
''Haan kyu didn't like you nickname''

Geet smirked, Maan looked at her loveable.

''I loved it Misty''

''Ab yeh Misty koun hai''

Maan smacked his head.

''You silly your so sweet na iisliye Misty''

Geet blushed.

''Geet will you family be okay with me''

''I am sure they will. Dad always said he wants me to marry someone special''

Maan chuckled.
''Misty I don't think he meant with that marry a beast''
''Correction Mr it's a charming beast''
''Charming beast???''
''Haan in the morning you are a prince charming and at night a beast that makes you a charming beast''

"oooh! I see so I'm your charming beast"
"haan! and she snuggled closer to Maan
just then a girl came barging into Maan's room she was dark skinned and very skinny but she was beautiful...

"Maan!! daadima..."
and she stopped in her tracks as she saw Geet and Maan sitting up looking uncomfortable she gave Maan a teasing smile and then said
"ooh la la Maan slept with a girl I'm gonna tell on you!!"
"Kesha!!! no don't do tht I'll buy u tons of chocolate but don't tell plz"

Kesha looked at Maan and gave him a mischievous smile
"Fine I won't tell but under one condition!"
Maan looked at her with fright
"Kya!!"
" you have to introduce me to your girlfriend"
Geet blushed and her cheeks turned tomato red and Maan looked at geet teasingly
" yeh hai meri girlfriend Geet!"
Geet's blush got deeper and face went to a darker shade of red and
Kesha's face instantly lit up as she found a new friend someone to tease Maan with. Kesha jumped on Maan's bed and gave Geet a warm smile as she bursted
" Hi Geet, I'm Kesha Maan ki behen nice to meet you... so now that you are Maan's girlfriend tht means u will be my... Bhabi"

" Oye Kesha!! wht are you saying? c'mon leave Geet alone she needs to rest"

" but bhaiyaa..."

" No Kesha c'mon go now"
" fine but remember my chocolates ok!! ... or else...

" haan meri maa i will give plenty of chocolates now go and listen don't tell daadima anything abt geet ok!!"

"Ok!! bye GEET bye Bahiya"

"I really lyk ur sister Maan... is she a beast too"

" Not offically but she will soon be she's only 16 we don't turn completely until we are 18"

" and wht abt ur daadima?"
" ooh daadima is very old she is no longer a beast we become normal humans frm the time menopause begins"

"ooh ok cool... Maan i'm very Hungry can u get me something to eat?"

''After lunch Geet stood up to go home she promised Maan that she will talk to her family about him and tell him their dessicion asap.When Geet entered her house. Her dad walked over to her.
''Where were you Geet'' ''Dad I was with a guy''
A nervous Geet said.
'' Finally me Geetu had fallen in love''
Geet happilly nodded.
''So what's his name what does he do''
''Well his name is Maan singh Khurana''
''Not Bad a'talented young lad but still a bit ordinary, don't you think''
Mohindar chuckled and rememberd how Geet always told him her guy would be everything but ordinary.Geet smacked Mohinder.
''Dad he is not ordinary, okay!!''
''Oh really and what makes him oh so special??''
''He is a beast after 8 pm and a hottie after 5 am''
Mohinder playfully hit her arm.
''How dare you call a guy a hottie infront of your dad''
''Sholly but it's not just a guy, it's you would be son in law and that to a special one as I promised''
''So you want me to believe that he can turn into a beast after 8 pm''
''Yep''
Mohinder laughed.
''What it's true''
''Alright I want to meet him right now''
Geet called up Maan.
''Maan come to my place dad wants to meet you''
''Why''
''Just come na''
''Okay coming Misty''
Maan rang the bell. A happy Mohinder opened the door.
''So you can turn into a beast after 8 pm''
''ji''
A shocked Maan replied he never expected such a welcome.
''Oh really''
Before Maan could reply Geet yelled from behind.
''Dad will you let him come inside or what''
''Haan come in beta. Listen to me carefully are you sure you can turn into a beast after 8 pm''
''Yes sir''
''THeek hai I have decided if this is true, only then you can marry my daugther.To be sure that you won't play tricks I will watch you the whole time till you turn into a beast''
A excited Mohinder said. Wow Maan thought the entire family was mad.
Maan, Geet, and the rest of his family sat there in silence when the clock struck 8 Maan slowly turned into a beast
"Oh bhagwan this guy is really a beast and an ugly one at that"

Geet slapped Mohinder's arm
"Owww"
"no he iz not he is my best charming"
well sorry!!!... I was just voicing my opinion"
" well voice ur stupid opinions somewhere else... so wht do you think dad? is he a hottie or what?"
" are u sure he won't hurt you"
" what??? no sir I will never hurt my Pari"
''Pari??? Geet does he have another girlfriend??''
no dad tht's his nick name for me he also calls me Misty ☺️
Oh ok well he isn't ordinary for sure I like him call his family over tomorrow and I'll call the panditji and we'll finalize the date
yayyy!! geet said as she threw her arms around Maan
" so your dad approved I'll talk to my daddi tonite and she'll come tomoro"
" Haan!! and remember to bring Kesha"
" acha baba I'll bring my crazy sis too ok I'll go now and tell my daddi abt us "

Dadi and Kesha where happy that Maan found the love of his life. Maneet got married and lived crazy ever after😆Of course Geet would always dragg about the fact how she found someone oh so special to all her friends.Poor girls they thought he was special cause he was Maan Singh Khurana, if only they knew the truth😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Stupid like button on my phone refuses to let me click it ughhh hate when that happens
Wow didn't think this could be
He is right though she is weird so is her father
I mean who goes Gaga over a beast
But then its our Geet here ppl how was this not possible right
Awww wasn't it cute when she called him a beast charming
Haiyye main mar jawan what an OS
Hope you shall continue with more too
Would love to read them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeee superb fabulas ...os dear
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Crazy ever after 🤣 pura khandan crazy hai... Wow loved the os yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice..bbut The story moved very fast..
Within 24 hrs of meeting , they were discussing marraige...
I loved this line He is a beast after 8 pm and a hottie after 5 am..
Geet's whole family is crazy..I thought atleast her dad would object..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl_warrior

Nice..bbut The story moved very fast..

Within 24 hrs of meeting , they were discussing marraige...
I loved this line He is a beast after 8 pm and a hottie after 5 am..
Geet's whole family is crazy..I thought atleast her dad would object..

no-one can reject Maan even in best form😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS..Loved it

.Maaneet Scene were Superb😆

Thank x for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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If its fm you,its gotta be special.

Girl loving d beast form of prince charming and girl's family welcoming d prince wid open arms but wid a condition that he should have d ability to change into a beast.

Wow, Mel,you are fantabulous as always.And again coming up wid a new type of Maan.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great work girls.. Do make more.. Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

If its fm you,its gotta be special.

Girl loving d beast form of prince charming and girl's family welcoming d prince wid open arms but wid a condition that he should have d ability to change into a beast.

Wow, Mel,you are fantabulous as always.And again coming up wid a new type of Maan.

thank you sweets but it was Kesha's idea to make Maan a beast😆You know what the say put two mad people together and you get a mad story😆😉

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