Life partner3,NEXT THREAD-PG154 - Page 51

Originally posted by: Diva7

yesss yesss yesss you did it 😆{yess divu...finally i did it...I am shedding tears of happiness...😭😃}... great job dear👍🏼...agar meri maaneet chitra mala{credit goes to chitramala ofcourse..thank you so much for that..It changed the entire course of story..I have not planned this confession for chapter 22 when i have started writing it..but you chitramala made me do this...😳😆} ka aisa asar hoga toh main ye kaam bohot pehle kar chuki hoti😆

frst i was like yeh humari pallu ne likha hai{haye rabba sharm aa gayi...😛☺️} yipppiiieee🥳 🥳 😆

now enough of my banter...back to business

wat to say chapter was delicious ☺️...finally d confession wid a kiss...i louuvvv u re😳

fantastically written...fr d frst time u hav written something like dis bt still there was a touch of yours in it{ofcourse diva there was a touch of my "Stupidity"..i bet not any manneet have confessed their love "comically" til now in IF..🤣} ...i can feel it, smell it, taste it ...n m relishing it😆😆

beautiful portrayal of emotions how sweetly u did it yaar... m in love wid d characters

"i still remember the "Heena design" on your legs..."...oh pallu y he didn't mention dat how he was mesmerized by d ring imprint on her right cheek 😉😆{maanu ko chodo diva ko sab yaad hai..}

"dark desire",...."You are too good to resist,chikne.!!!." 🤣

n then here comes our man wid his tale of ishtory

"For God sake..leave me geet...Don't you have father or brother at your home???" 🤣 🤣

"You would..."... felt so much power in his words 😳

i hope aarav will be okkk...tujhe bachche par taras nahi aaya zaalim...i luv him so much plz make him fit n fine as soon as possible varna mujhse bura koi nai hoga😆...aur ye dhamaki nahi chetavani hai woh bhi pehli aur aakhiri 😎😆😆{I am sorry divu..lil aarav has to suffer little in coming days..its essenital for story}

❤️luvd it ❤️luvd it❤️ luvd it❤️

issspecial warm hug {ohhh..i so much need it..keep on giving these hug even if you don't like coming chapters...😛🤗}fr u janeman in dis freaking cold weather😆

aa ja gale lag jaa meri jaan, dil khush kar ditta🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: -Mishu-

i want to say so many things!!!
but i forgot!!! 😆
update was awesome!!!
i loved it so so much!!
will edit when i remember what i want to say!! 🤣

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

that was a very sweet and cute update...

i completely loved the way these two are getting comfortable with each other... and msk seems to be totally shrewd... just with in few days he seems to know her habits and finds out if she is asleep or not... wow...

and i absolutely loved the confession... i think its first of its kind, the way he blurted it out !!!

Loved it... continue soon

Originally posted by: pingu.tingu

Awww super cute update ! Loved it ...palin you wrote it so well that i find purity in your every word ! It give me a sense of bliss whenever i read your update ! Sometime i dont even know how to describe my feelings after reading your update ! You made their relation like the relationship that occur in heaven :)

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ishq Da Rog Laga Oye Hoye.

I loooved my chocolate installment Nanandji.{Thank you parjai ji...😃}

It was just the right amount of sweet.😆{ofcourse ..I don't want my readers to be "diabetic"...😆}

There was just this sweet innocence in their romance.

I swear my lips were stretched throughout the whole update😃

Haye kitna bhola bhala sweet sa confession tha Geet ka yaar. Only an innocent pure at heart would confess her feelings of awareness attraction and love so candidly. There is absolutely no guile in her.{Thank you for these words parjai ji..It made me feel that finally I am successful in right portrayal of LP geet..the way I want to present this character when i have started LP...😊}

Palin I could just pull your cheeks for creating such an awesome character. {{oouccchhh☺️hhh...chodo mere gal...!!!!!!}

Since Maan didn't pull Geet's cheek I'll do them for you. Consider them pulled apple cheeks.

Humari dream girl ko yeh chikne laddu se pyaar ho gaya.

Haan haan Geet Puch usse,

Chikni surat tu kaha tha ab talak yeh bata.😆

Aur chikna laddu jaake pink wrapper mein chip gaya. 😆{use apni izzat bachani thi na...😆}

Par jab bahar nikla he was THE MAN.

He manned up and gave back to her the sweetest confession from his side along with a sweet kiss.😳

Waiting for my next fix.

Give me some more choclates baby.

Love you.🤗{love you too parjai ji..I would try to give next part asap...🤗}

Originally posted by: Susegad

Oye Chikni😆

Thank You for the chiramala

Jisne Palin pe jadu dala.

Uske Dimag ka khul gaya tala,

Aur Hume mil gaya update sa*la🤣

Originally posted by: ritzy09

wow what a sweetest awesome confession...no drama but still there was drame...no mincing words but still there was shyness...it was simple but yet so profound...it was humorous but so emotional...

Loved it completely Palin...{Thanks ritzy...😊}

Geet's pretense to sleep and feel...Maan's understanding her so well and tuned to her habits.{ocourse he has to be tuned to her habits vrna thand lag jati..😆..bhagwan aisi biwi se sab ladko ko bachaye jo raat me blankets utha k door fek deti hai}...her confession...his acceptance and response...all were wonderful

As to the disturbance...i did mind it but I guess Aarav's complexities need to be resolved{ it would take time..i think...😕}and wiped away as well...after all they are the first priority from second day of the marriage😆...

Originally posted by: chavvi16

oh my we certainly are moving forward in this relation arent we
took him long enough to realise his wife wasnt sleeping
wow he sure knows his wife's habits by now
awww wasnt it just adorable when she said she has been observing him really closely
well dear so has he
and they said i love you to each other
finally right
and lets not forget the little kiss
oh no no no whats wrong with little aarav
oh i hope to god the little one is all okay
take him to the hospital asap
oh man why does this have to happen when all things were going well
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: CrystalSaya

I JUST READ IT TWICE BUT I WAS SO STUNNED THAT I DONT KNOW WHAT TO WRITE...IT IS SO GOOD THAT I JUST VISUALIZE WHAT U WRITE...U R SO REALISTIC WRITER...I JUST LONE THIS MAANEET...JUST FEEL FANTASTIC THE WAY UWRITE MAANET'S CONFESSION...IF U WUD DRAG THIS PART FOR SO LONG THAN WE WONT HAVE SO MUCH FUN THEN...JUST GO BABY...U JUST MADE MY DAY TODAY ...L B WAITING FOR MORE ROCKING UPDATE.

Originally posted by: palindrome