MG FF:A torn relation pt link to thraed 2 pg 1

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Wow!

Wat a catchy title...

N prologue ws... Damn striking...

So geet is gettng married to maan after sheis pregnant wid his child BUT he doesnt knw abt it???????

Hw????????

Wen dey got intimate weren't dey in sense???

Jus one doubt whethr maan raped geet?????

If so plz request u to disgard any such part of story.

Nevr ever want maan to portray as rapist.
Coz alwaz want maaneet ff wid happy ending n if story is abt sum rapist then can nevr accept rapist nt being punished.

So plzzz...

Conti soon

n add me to ur pmlist plz

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

waiting for next part

cont soon

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dreamymishti88

@dreamymishti88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awesome

fabulous

liked a lot

continue soon

waiting

happy new year

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suhana_maaneet

@suhana_maaneet

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

~A TORN RELATION~

PART 2

Does life always move how we want , the path we ought to moved sometimes appear bleak , the glowing and the shimerring light looks like a dark confusing flame that will take everything within it leaving a shattered and torn soul to recover from its own pain when there will be no balm to aid those wounds which have ultimately wounded that heart which always seeks for a seeker to love and caress that bleeding soul..

geet was sitting on her bed her mehendi was dark extremely rich in dark color making the elder ladies to praise her luck that she will be getting a very husband who would complete her as his soulmate ... One of her relatives commented

relative : geet beta tera pati tujhe bohot pyaar karega apni palko pe bhitha ke rakhega dekh toh sahi heena ka rang kitna gehra chadha hai...

Her cousins couldnt stop admiring her fate ..

Radhi : geet didi dekhiyega jiju aapko yahan aane bhi denge itna pyaar karenge ki aap hum sab ko bhool hi jayengi..

geet immediately hugged her younger sister tears filled her eyes , for the first time she wanted to cry , sob keeping her head on her mother's lap she knew this is the last day for her to remain close to her mother tell her what she is feeling
" uss din unn palon ko jubaan pe laane se bhi dar jaati thi jakmo ko taaza karne ki himmat nahi thi usme wo dard jo zehen me bas chuka tha use nasoor banana nahi chahti thi

she doesnt know what happened why it had happened but the ulterior truth was he had taken her to his life ... Geet came out of the reverie the evening of her mehendi left her speechless and emotional .. She wiped her tears that were now a part of her life still she fears at night.. Geet caressed the blood red zari worked lehenga specially made for her soft and silky material heavy dupatta that will hide herself from him the heavy matching diamonds and rubys that will cover her delicate form ... Everything will be hidden covered yet she will be exposed to him...

geet slightly exposed her neck pull off her dupatta to see those marks which were fading away with time .. She touched her exposed skin to apply the cream that will make those marks vanish but the deep scars that he left on her that day can never be healed ... She was broken beyond repairment ..

he laid on his king sized bed fixing his eyes on the ceiling his mind and brain were in his control telling him what you did was well deserved .. He was no fool to leave her , she tried to play with him and he gave her what she deserved .. If he wanted he would have taken her to worst but this was no less than any worst...

maan : every girl is same that B*** deserve this you should be happy that you made her learn that messing with MAAN SINGH KHURANA can certainly leave you no where but deep down somewhere in the farthest and smallest corner there is a regret which always says

"YOU LOST YOUR MORALITY , VIRGINITY FOR HER "

you had somewhere lost yourself in a fit of anger

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thank u all fr ur likes and comments

waiting for your review

DIPTI AND SUHAANA

Edited by sweetsaloni - 12 years ago

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@jssood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

me first!!!!!!!!!!!
wow lovely lovely emotional update.. i having tears in my eyes, poor geet suffer lot.

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shri12

@shri12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

awesome geet wanted to confess her mother about her feelings

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

WHY IS GEET SAD, WHAT HAPPENED TO HER

WHY IS MAAN ANGRY, WHAT DID HE DO

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Zariya

@zariya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

so this is torn relationship of maaneet
hope so everything would be ok but what happened

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

poor geet is suffering a lot...!!!!

maan and geet ki marriage hai kya?? i thnk maan forced her due to some mu and geet's life changed becoz of that...gr8 ff..pls continue soon!!!!!!!

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Nadi

@MaanKiNadee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

AWESOME Update dear...sooo emotional yaar.feelin so sad for my Geetu...mEee confused bout wot happpn between Maaneet???oh God...so sad yaar...mujhe ruldiyaa ohhh mujhe ruladiya...

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