MG FF:A torn relation pt link to thraed 2 pg 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Superb!!!!
Loved the concept... :)
amazing writing :):)
itzz an heart touching updates...
plzz do continue soon :):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
poor geet
she is going to get married to whom she lost..
n she couldnt voice too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Popr geet, hope to see them happy soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
omg maan did this
poor geet
nice update
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
~A TORN RELATION~

PART 3

Time never stops for anyone , it always heals those unwanted wounds those miseries which have been inflicted on us...

she couldnt sleep whole night the only thought that the next day will come as a life long punishment , those shiny orbs were having that undue pain ... Geet tried to sleep she for a moment closed those eyelids waiting for a peace to engulf her torn self .. A second passed cool wind from the window was teasing her awakened soul like just making her not to forget that truth of her life which will unfortunately conquer her already shattered dreams...

Please no what are you doing .. I think that's a mistake .. She was crying sobbing , please dont do this to me ., her dupatta was off he was kissing her like a hungry lion like telling her that today no one can held me back ... Fortunately his grip , his so called devoring was not so rough and not even soft but for her she knew what she is loosing his every word was making her to feel disgust on her he was highly aroused and drunk beyond limits... "today i will celebrate in the honour of destroying you " his words were so correct he was tormenting her voilating her in a sense he was speaking truth that was actually holding a double meaning ... She had stopped protesting wriggling just waiting for this to get finish ...

geet got up abruptly she was sweating very badly .,

geet looked at herself feeling him still within her she immediately pulled the quilt over her like protecting herself from him .. Drenched in sweat she rested her head on the headboard fearing again to get gripped in him if she closed her eyes.. Room was dark moonlight emitting in her direction falling on her... She smiled it was absolutely sarcastic she left the duvet and stand by the wide opened window ...

geet : ye chand ki khoobsurat chaandni bhi mere unn gehre daago ko mita nahi sakti jo mere zehen me bass chuke hain., iss chand aur mujhme koi bhi fark nahi hai babaji dono me daag lag chuka hai bas meri takdeer ne ye daag meri kismat me hi likh dala hai...

it was four in the morning geet got freshed , took a long shower everyday she tries to erase his marks those hidden scars but didnt know that sometimes your CULPRIT can only be your biggest balm that can even erase those deep scars that were never meant for you ...

geet looked at the new dress kept for her.. Just like a doll she wore , today she didnt want anything to come close it was the same day a week before she was killed voilated she didnt even prayed to her babaji since that day ... Everyone was complimenting her beauty she was made to wear chuda those red and white bangles were no more fascinating to her., her sister remarked seeing the adornments in her hands..

radhi : didi kaisa laga apna gift aapka chooda mamaji ne khaas taur se aapke liye banwaya hai .. Yaad hai aapki demands kaise aap kehti thi ki aapko sabse sundar chooda chahiye aur ye dekhiye jiju ka initial hai aapke choode me ...

radhika very excitedly showed her written a stylish MG it was actually covering both the letters like maan embrassing geet... Geet wanted to see somewhere that excitement that always covered her eyes was not there... All day the teasing and emotional atmosphere was there...

she was sitting in the middle her mother , sister beauticians , aunt , friend were there her sister made her wear those heavy anklets , she was made to wear all those lifeless stones .. Her dupatta was pinned to her head making a veil till her eyes...

"jis sharm aur haya ko uss kaanch ki gudiya me piroya jaa raha tha wo haya toh wo usi din khatam ho gayi"

rano : dekho meri gudiya kitni pyaari lag rahi hai ... She kissed her forehead ..

AT KHURANA MANSION

Everyone was waiting for the groom , KM was bustling with preparations filled with guests.. Their elder son was getting married it was actually a dream come true for Naina who always wanted her son to he happy ... She had choosen a perfect life partner for him.. But still everything was so fast .. Naina was looking at each and every preparation herself.. Vishal looked at his mother getting practically insane

vishal : mom calm aapki over excitement dekhkar kahi bhai darr na jaye ..
Naina just chided her son and glared at him...

vishal : let me see what bhai is doing even dadima is with him with dad...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
updated part 3


waiting for your likes and comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
nice update sssooo sad feeling for geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
so painful past of geet
eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
but why maan is doing this to poor soul
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Yr story flow is goin vry well.

Loving d story bt bit confusd.

Waitng fr nxt parts.

Conti soon.


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