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~A TORN RELATION~


PART 6

hii
first of all thank u to all those readers who read and commented

secondly

for maaneet past

there are three different phases
1. past with maan's POV
2. past with geet's POV
3. maaneet's whole truth of the past

so i am starting with point 1

hope you will enjoy

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Accidently maan's hannd touched hers.. geet suddenly looked at him fearing that what if she will be abused once again…. She doesn't know why she was made to endure all the pain and incurable hurt… and she immediately left the ring that was in her hand … maan looked at her once.. she was averting her gaze…

Maan st: this bounds to happen maan to every new bride…

Although she was a new bride ..a girl he saw precisely second time that too on his wedding.. no their wedding but will be there any THEM OR THEIR between the two … or they will be just the individuals like they were before their alliance … bilkul ajnabee…

But maan doesn't know that the total alien feeling was never between them.. he himself had brutally snatched that the thin curtain between them laeving both of them completely bare for each other….

The first time geet left the ring she was actuallly shivering with his presence.. and the process repeated two times more making maan to win the game.. although the game signified that maan will rule geet and their married life but he forgot that she had already lost herself to him..so practically it doesn't matter who so ever win or loose ….. at the end they will be together no matters how much their moment of togetherness will make them to hate each other but they wont be able to resist when the spark of impending love will automatically made them to come close to each other…..

Maan looked at geet..

No wonder he feel nothing for her… and for the entire time being he was just performing his duties as a son…and now will do as a husband…. For a second seeing the terrified and pale face of his wife .. his heart felt peace like it was searching… but deep within it was the origin a deep volcano that will burst once he will came to know what all knowingly and unknowingly had occurred between them…..

The fear was visible on her face which for a time being he mistook as shyness…..

Maan sarcastically thought ….

Maan : abhi jo sharam haya hai iske chehre par wo kab badal jaye kuch pata nahi hai .. maan kabhi bhi iski bholi shakal par mat jaana…. Ladkiyan sirf dhoka de sakti hain….

But he failed to see the loathing and hurt in those averted eyes… her body was on a sudden fire.. it was like she just want to get away from there…..

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Geet was made sit with her head covered with the veil .. she was dreading every coming second … will she be able to get away from him … will he again force her into the relation...

Her mind screamed..

" why not kyon nahi karega wo … kya uss din tumhari baaten .. tumhari cheeken suni thi usne.. nahi na.. toh aaj.. ab toh tum uski patni ho.. jo chahe wo kar sakta hai wo tumhare saath…. Geet khamosh rehna toh tum bachpan se jaanti ho …. Ba ab iss khamoshi ko apni zindagi ki kadvi sachaai bana lo…. "

"Uski bebasi inn bejubaan aankon se chalak rahe aansun bhi bayaan nahi kar sakte hai….

Khud ko ek aise bawar me khone ka gam unn behtein ashkon se bhi nahi bayaan ho sakte the…."

Suddenly a painful smile came on her lips…. Her destiny will again play with her … it was the day she lost herself to her husband a week back and now again she will have to go through the same pain a today just with a mere difference that the screams and painful sobs will be now converted to the silence… the deadly silence that will kill her every passing second … the numbness will be there ….

Maan was not interested in even seeing the girl infront of him…. But he cant even leave he alone on their wedding night…..

One side his mind refused to go..and other side of him said… " uski kya galti hai jiski saza se doge maan…. Zindagi usi ke saath bitani hai…. Humsafar na sahi toh ajnabee hi samaj kar uska saath do…."

Maan st: ayesha tumne jo kiya uski saza toh mene tumhe de di par uss dhoke ne mujhe kisi par bhi yakeen karne se mana kar diya…. Sach tha ek bahaut bada sach ki maan singh khurana jitna pyar kar sakta hai usse kai jyada nafrat..aur phir tumne toh mere jazbaaton ke saath saath meri sabse badi kamzori ke saath kehlna chaha aur iski sazaa toh tumhe milni hi thi……

FLASHBACK……

A week ago…

Today maan had finally seeked his revenge from the girl whom once he loved …..

Though he never forced or imposed any kind of relation on her… always comply to her demands… although sometimes he might have loose his temper on her too but that doesn't mean that his love and his devotion to their relation was less…. But what she did was not something he could say that it was a mistake…

Never mistakes are to be forgiven but what she did was beyond any forgiveness…

Maan was celebrating in the HOTEL he himself had threw a grand and lavish party after all he did won….

Maan raise a toast….

Maan : this one is for my dear friend…

There were all his friends , business clients… everyone… after all playing with maan sigh khurana and then you will think that he will leave you was not in maan's dictionary…

Maan : everyone please enjoy yourselves….

His voice , his senses were filled with bitterness….. he was gulping drinks… there were no counts ….. he was drunk….

The girls dragged him to the dance floor…. Their were his business rivals too…. The girls tried to dance sensously like seducing maan.. but he just pushed the every other girl….

No matter how much he Is drunk but even in his loathing , revenge or bitterness he knew that he will never do anything that he will have to regret all his life…..

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NEXT: if maan is like this then what made him to loose all his sanity…???

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