Ek anjani dor PT 17 PG 138 AUG 18 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi

Awesome update

loved it
aww geet is singlehandilytaking care of dhruv
i think this is maan's child
continue soon

thanks dear fr liking 😊
Edited by sweetsaloni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
nice starting
with different idea
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
part 1
interesting...
cont soon...

PS - when u update, can u post the link in the FF Daily Updates 4?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: jssood

nice starting

with different idea



thank u dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
~~ EK ANJANI DOR ~~

PART 2

geet was feeding dhruv taking him in her lap he was slowly slowly sucking his milk .

Cultching geet's finger in his hand . Geet had wrapped him in a blue warm blanket covering his tiny self . But dhruv he was in the mood of playing he was moving inside the blanket hitting the duvet with his tiny legs while geet was busy covering her naughty cute baby.

geet " dhruv kya kar raha hai , theek se doodh pe dekh kitna kamzor hai tu abb agar dudu nai piyega toh strong boy kaise banega mera baby , mumma ka strong boy hai" she said cooing her little life . When she saw that finally dhruv was not drinking milk she took his bottle and burped him .

her dhruv had been a little baby small than usual two months babies dhruv again hided himself in geet's neck . Geet looked at her little angel she always felt bad for him he is a shy quite and not only this he cries very softly sometimes like seeking for something ... And at that time it is difficult to calm him .

geet was looking at dhruv and felt bad

Geet " babaji kaise ma baap hai wo jo apne khud ke bache ko aise chod ke chale gaye ye bhi nai socha kaisa hoga wo , unke liye royega tarpega kaise ek maa itni pathar dil ho sakti hai ki use jise usne janam diya use chod diya babaji aapne bache ki takdeer aisi kyun likhi ... Nafrat karti hun main iske ma se jo ise chod gai
geet wiped her tears that flowed from her hazels she kissed dhruv softly who was already slept after his feed .

Geet setted pillows around him and done her daily chores . She prepared her breakfast and packed her lunch along with baby essentials . Today she has to report in her head office .

whereas on the other side in DELHI a man handsome enough to make girls gaga on him he is dreamy , DD ( dhakdhak ) of many girls but he , he now hate girls and specially her SURBHI his so called wife .
The pain he is enduring now the remorse which is killing him is just because her . Her greed and selfish nature had taken a little life even before it was born she the mother itself is responsible for killing that life .

Although he is the richest man who can buy anything but his enormous wealth can't make his baby survive . That wretched woman took his happiness , snatched it even before it can let know him . He is the powerful MAAN SINGH KHURANA his name is enough to change the scenario of business world he is the sole owner of the huge khurana empire but he lost the owner of his heart his unborn baby .

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Edited by sweetsaloni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: snehapriya

Loved d start.
Pm me wen u update d next part dear.



thank u dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Nice update loved it continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
nice part dear😊

i thnk is dhruv is maan's baby

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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
amazing story
it has a very different concept
can't wait to read more of it
pls pm me the next tym u update
update soon
waiting very eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
A VERY DIFFERENT STORY
GEET IS TAKING CARE OF AN ABANDOND BABY WHILE MAAN IS REMEMBERING HIS LOST BABY
PLEASE PM WHEN YOU UPDATE

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