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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Mannu I didn't know you write. Thanks for the pm.😃

Main padhke phir comment karungi.😉

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Susegad
Mannu I didn't know you write. Thanks for the pm.😃
Main padhke phir comment karungi.😉

it's my first one..
i wrote another long back. but it was worse..

and hopefully i won't torture with another story..😆😆😆
but who knows about future...😉😉😉

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shabnam

@shabnam22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

superbbb...poor maan trying so hard to talk wid geet but seems luck is not in his favour...

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rsusmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

loved it
read all the parts in one go
please give us epilogue and cute mannet moments
please waiting

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

i read all the parts in a go!
fabulous!
loved it
simply great

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Its soo sooo sooo awesome.

I've read so many stories on maaneet bt dis is d only ff having no villian bt jus a happy,sweet,cute n adorabl story.

Lovd evrything abt it Except its sooo short.

Conti soon.

N keep writng on maaneet.

We got a grt writer in maaneet fans clan.

Grt job dear.

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fatema_007

@fatema_007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

waiting eagerly for the next part

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: april12
lovely story
good to see a guy's and girl's perspective
i wonder if these type of stories happen in real life!

Yes they do. Sapne bhi sach hote hain, even though initially you may not even know, that it is your dream and you may be looking at something else altogether😳.

Par haan aisa bhi hota hain😉

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet
Its soo sooo sooo awesome.

I've read so many stories on maaneet bt dis is d only ff having no villian bt jus a happy,sweet,cute n adorabl story.

Lovd evrything abt it Except its sooo short.

Conti soon.

N keep writng on maaneet.

We got a grt writer in maaneet fans clan.

Grt job dear.

omg, i can't believe my writing can get such comment. when it comes to writing even an essay, i never get gud marks.
i'm a reader big one. so never expected that even i can get such comment. thanks for lovely comment..😊😊😊

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

I read it a few days back, but silly me, for whatever reason I thought i had commented on your story. Then I realized I hadn't., I had only replied to somebody's comment. 😆

All I will say is, this is a story that is very close to my heart and I absolutely loved every little thing you have mentioned in it, and how you carried the story over a number of years, very realistically. I loved how somewhere in the corner of her heart, Geet held a torch for Maan in her heart, even though it was not mentioned specifically, you gave it a subtle feel.

Also, I was not at all surprised at Maan's feelings for Geet. All the hints were there😉 Sirf Geet ne unhe dekha nahi. When you did mention his side of the story I was smiling crazily.😃

Loved the first epilogue, but still waiting anxiously to read further. Jaldi update karna Mannu.

I probably am a buddhi not up to date with the younger generation, so please englighten me, yeh GBM kya hain, and what is a paper dance😆