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Posted: 12 years ago
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Epilogue 2

Maan entered in his room. He was excited as well as nervous. It will be his first night with geet. Obviously he was not thinking about that first night but he was certainly looking forward to talk to Geet about his feelings and atleast ask her views on him.

When he entered, he was expecting a nervous or shy bride but not a crying one. Here she was crying buckets. He didn't know what happened. He just freaked out as at his home he has never seen anyone crying since ages (except fake cries from dadi). Forgetting everything he rushed to her and asked the reason. She replied that she is missing her family.

"I sighed. It was supposed to be natural but somehow weird for me. I asked without thinking that why is it as she has been living in Delhi since her graduation times, away from her parents. As a result i got her famous glare which shut my mouth for a moment.

She replied that at those it was different. Those times, she used to go home whenever she missed them. Even if it was just two days holidays she used to run away to her home. But now it would be different.

I still didn't get the logic. I told her that now also she can go. Who would stop her? Her look told me that i'm talking something stupid. She replied simply that it's a girl thing. No boy can understand.

Oh common Geet. My family is not Hitler type sasuraal. They all love u very much trust me. They are not that typical serial wala sasuraal. Haan dadimaa thodi dramatic hai but daadu always handle her with "care".

"I know." She replied.

I was surprised. I looked at her for the answer.

"I have seen it. Actually we shifted in the flat at second floor in building behind ur house in my second year. I used to watch u guys having fun many a times from my kitchen." she replied.

I smirked at her for this revelations. She was little blushing.

I sighed – "i wished i would have known that u r staying here."

"u didn't know that" she seemed surprised.

I asked her to change into her night dress. This reminded her that it was our first night together. She hurried away to take out her clothes and then went away to change.

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We both are standing after changing our clothes. Don't know what to talk or what to do.

It take all my courage to talk to her but i started.

" I know Sagar has told u about my feelings for you. But still i want to tell u myself. I have loved u since college days. U know, geet, i never believed in love at first sight. But i was attracted towards you at the first sight only. I wanted to search you, find out about u. I didn't know the reason at that time. I was confused just like a teenager. I thought it to be a infatuation or crush but love never came to my mind. It was just after sessions break, i realised that I have fallen for you. Still i thought that it will be over just like others got over. It was college love. But then u became my obsession. I couldn't think a life without you. I love u.

She didn't say anything. I was afraid.

Please say something geet. It was like a desperate plea. I wanted her to speak.

"U know, maan, for me u were two persons. One who was college hunk who was an arrogant hag with tons of attitude, always having that stupid smirk on your face..."

Hey don't call my smirk supid. You know it is very famous...

"Don't interrupt me. I detested that maan. But i loved the other maan whom i used to admire from my kitchen, who was a son, a brother, a fun-loving guy. I used to admire u from my kitchen because it made me feel my family closer. I loved ur family bonding just like my family. But that love and admiration always used to go in drains just at the college gates because that always reminded me ur attitude."

"you loved me..." maan asked her with little shock..

Her hand was on her mouth. I think that's when she realised that she has revealed something which she never wanted to. I just hugged her. I don't want to tease her right now when i got my world. I just wanna this hug not to end. Her simple confessions made me mad.

I felt like shouting, dancing, singing, all things in this excitement. My geet at any point of time loved me.

Geet

OMG, i just confessed. I was shocked. And then his hug gave me another shock. But it was strange that i felt some peace in my heart, some lightness. May be because it put rest to my confusions that why love word for me is attached with him. But still i was nervous. It felt like eternity when he left me. I couldn't look at him. I don't know what he is expecting from me now.

Then only i listened him saying that now we should sleep as it's already midnight. To make the environment light he said whether i'm expecting him to sleep on couch like serials.

I really wanted to give him a tacky reply. But instead i reminded him of a very embarrassing situation.

Haa, I got him.

Flashback

I was sitting in CCD waiting for him. He just turned up. He was looking little nervous. And his first statement was "do u know a kiss never makes a women pregnant?" i was shocked beyond words. What the hell he was saying? Before i can ask him his daadu turned up.

Flashback finished.

" actually i was really nervous for our first date. So i called meera di and talked about it. She laughed at me. After some talks, she told me that u r very innocent and it is going to be very difficult for me after marriage. To relax me more she told me that u think that a kiss can make a girl pregnant. That happened in the morning only and it was running in my mind when i came to meet you. Due to nervousness, i blurted out." He finished his monologue.

I just nodded and we went to sleep of course on our bed. That was a start. But we were looking forward for this relation to blossom. And then i realised that i was happy very very happy.

This was my story, my twisted love story. Finally i completed it. Many mistakes are there. But it is my debut story. So please forgive me.

I realised during writing this story that how much our writers work hard.

For writers--- HEY GUYS, U R AWESOME. I REALLY SALUTE TO WRITE AWESOME STORIES FOR US. I'M CRAZY READER. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.

I love u all guys for liking and commenting on this little stupid "TWISTED LOVE STORY"



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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

U know i felt so excited to put the status updating. Don't know why. But still i loved this feeling ...😆😆😆😆😆😆

on serious note.

i want to thank Chitra for her creations for my os also.🤗for u dear. i felt so special first time.


have a look

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3376888/creations?pn=4


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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
This was damned cute and probably the cutest end I have ever read. Amazing work Mannu, write more. The closing lines had me grinning. Twisted love story it is.
PS: For Miss Glassdoor, you feel younger, miss old bones😆
Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Mannu De give me a hug ma 🤗

This was such a sweet little story. Did I tell you, you have an awesome sense of humor?
And kabardaar if you call such a sweet thing stupid now.

"Hey don't call my smirk stupid." 🤣

And reply "Don't interrupt me." 🤣 🤣

You are awesome De 👍🏼

P.S You must write whatever new ideas you get. You have a way of bringing in that faint tingling sensation that makes one feel young all over again.

P.P.S Congrats on the new job darling, all the best!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Mannu De give me a hug ma 🤗

This was such a sweet little story. Did I tell you, you have an awesome sense of humor?
And kabardaar if you call such a sweet thing stupid now. (actually ye hangover hai years back maine ek or story likhi thi. usse padkar mujhe bhayanak sapne aate hai...😆😆😆😆😆 )

"Hey don't call my smirk stupid." 🤣

And reply "Don't interrupt me." 🤣 🤣

You are awesome De 👍🏼

P.S You must write whatever new ideas you get. You have a way of bringing in that faint tingling sensation that makes one feel young all over again. dekhti hu abhi to time ki bahut problem ho gayi hai..

P.P.S Congrats on the new job darling, all the best! thanks alot dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Hiii...Awesome ...Loved it...maaneet sooo cute...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
nice part dear..
maan talked with geet..
he confessed his feelings..n she too opened up..
loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i come on this os 2day n read it one go
n must say
awesomeee
n please pm me ur next ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked the ending very much.
A very nice idea.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it a lotzzz :) :)

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