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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 5
last part
u finished this?
nice lovely one dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
simply amazing.
Plz continue with new maaneet ff,
Will be waiting,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow u write quite well dear⭐️ plz giv us a epilogue also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum story...
loved it..
read it all in one go...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely story
good to see a guy's and girl's perspective
i wonder if these type of stories happen in real life!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IT WAS A LOVELY STORY
THE END WAS ABRUPT
YU CAN STILL GIVE AN EPILOGUE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Epilogue Part 1

Geet

I don't know what i'm feeling. Frustration, irritation, hate, anger, happiness, love or what. I just don't know. Since Maan singh Khurana has left my home, i'm in a big dilemma. I felt little relax, little bit happy also. But then when my mind started working, one by one all negative thoughts started coming. What the hell was he doing here. Why did he want to marry me. Does he want some sort of revenge. But i've not done anything bad to him. And then i remembered his attitude in my room. It seemed to me that he was ordering me to marry him. I so wanted to kill him... right now i'm on my terrace walking left and right to cool my head. It's a big problem of being an introvert that you can't share your feeling with everyone.

Maan

I'm feeling i don't know what. There in her room i behaved like an MCP. I realised this when i talked to sagar about how i proposed her. I don't know what is going on in her mind. What will she think of me. Of course she had said yes for the proposal but that was more of her parents decision. She hadn't said anything. I really wanted to know her views on this marriage.

Geet

We are getting married within one month. I don't know what to think. Just yesterday i received shock of my life when my senior from college, Sagar sir called just to tell me that the Great Maan Singh Khurana fancies me since college days. I received shock of 440 volt. Just half an hour before it was decided that i'm going to Delhi for wedding shopping with Meera di. Wedding shopping will be done with khuranas. We are leaving for Delhi.

Maan

I called Meera di for help. I really wanted to talk to Geet. I was already messed up and then came another problem when Sagar told me that he had told Geet about my love for her since college days. I don't know what she was thinking. So i asked Meera di to fix my meeting with her kiddo sister. She called me in morning that she with Geet has come to Delhi for shopping and staying at her In-Laws place. This was some relief for me poor soul.

Geet

Right now i'm sitting with Maan and his Daadu. The thing was that maan called me yesterday and asked me to meet him at CCD. I reached there at the time given by Prince Maan Singh Khurana. But here Mr. Prince was late and it was just few minutes he settled down there comes another shock, his daadu. With the look i can say that Maan doesn't know about it. But i was really embarrassed being caught like that. Maan was too irritated to even sit comfortably. Daadu started leg-pulling. But as he caught Maan's face expression, he dropped the idea. Then they both dropped me at my place.

Maan

I'm too angry to say or do anything. It was really important for me to talk to Geet face to face and know her views. But Daadu messed up everything. Before that I had already committed one mistake. After coming back i just blasted everyone. And now i'm sitting in my room. I know that it was just a joke for them to catch me red-handed with Geet. But they are not understanding the importance. I tried my best to meet geet one more time but it became impossible as Geet was reluctant and secondly, shopping which as it seems to me a bigger event than marriage. She was always with somebody whenever she went for shopping. I'm standing here in my shervani in my car going to HP for my marriage.

Geet

I'm sleeping with my mother-in-law. It is my first night. Right now i'm feeling little relaxed as the wedding rituals are over. And second thing that bollywood styled first wedding night has always freaked me out. I just got to know that in real life first night is spent with MIL not with husband.

Maan

I'm super pissed. And now cursing all bollywood directors, producers, story-writers and all bollywood fraternity. Reason the colourful dreams they show about the first night. Here the rituals are completely different and the bride has to eat and sleep with her NIL. So Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana is right now sleeping with her MIL. I was thinking of talking to geet i so wanted to clear things about my feelings. I don't know how many people have messed up. But a general idea I got from their talks was that Meera Di, Daadu and sagar have talked to Geet about my love for her. But now i've to wait one more day.

Guys, i'm on tour and just after reaching home i'm going to join my job (i'm employed finally).

I've written little bit which i'm posting. I'm not even amateur writer. So please bear with me. It is first part with Maneet POV. I'll give give one more part with their first conservation.

Edited by mannubhardwaj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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To my comments ki bhuki bachi,
The update was amazing
I'm super pissed. And now cursing all bollywood directors, producers, story-writers and all bollywood fraternity. Reason the colourful dreams they show about the first night
This had me in splits. I didn't know about this ritual. Does it really happen? Ah, serves him right. I didn't find him MCP. Instead I find him cute, god knows why. Amazing one Mannu
Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii...Awesome...Loved it...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting for the next epilogue!

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