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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

I must say chavvi u thought an awesome suspense
love it
love u that u try and i must say u r too good
i hope u will take part in future also

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

i was thinking same chavi dear..n u did it...superb..rock on

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angelwords

@angelwords

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

chavvi16- oh god!! you have written it so well...👏

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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

@chavvi

u have written it awesomely

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

chavvi dear u filled my suspense superbly...

waiting for some more parts by you

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

thanks you guys for liking it
i didnt think it was much good
but i guess it wasnt that bad then if you all liked it

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka
Part 1 kha h.
Gud idea

first page ke first post ke last mai

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: chavvi16
thanks you guys for liking it
i didnt think it was much good
but i guess it wasnt that bad then if you all liked it

it was too gud yaar..

continue..

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Part 29maan turned to geet..he hided his tension on his face n cupped her face..maan:fairy,will u wait for ur angel for some more time..i want to meet karan bhaiya..its so urgent..geet made a puppy face..geet:u r always busy in office..u dont have time for me..maan:pls fairy,u know na..we are alone in this world..we must work hard to face this world..there is a long way we must go..u know what u r 2 me..u r my world geet..
geet was now very sad..

geet st:how can i forget we both are orphans..but u never made me feel so..n u r working hard for us...

maan then thought to tease her..maan:are u afraid to be alone in my cabin..darpok girl..he rubbed the bad side of her..she came to a sherni mode..geet:i am not darpok..u know .n she started to throw the cushions on him..maan avoided all hitting him maan:then prove u r not geet:.ok u go i can wait even for an hour..

he made her accept ..he grinned at her and went to meet karan..

he asked nakul to be with geet,knowing how much scared she is when she is alone..she will be drawn back to past n sulk in her own grief..she needs someone always beside her..

note..

anyone can continue this..

only one condition..

u must update immediately after u reserve this post..

all new writers welcome

we all think of next scenes..what it can be..

u think like that n pen it down..

there is no story line..it will be taken the way u write n will be followed..dont hesitate readers..its just fun..we r there to help u..

Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago