My Maneet with Writers Imagination

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AS i have promised you all,
i came up with another fun thread,
before telling you about this thread--> i wanted to congratulate all, because our forum is saved.. so party time--->> secondly Christmas is coming so Happy Christmas to all my buddies,

now coming to this thread, you must be thinking --> what is this thread?? what is it?? what we have to do?? etc etc...

So here are the answer-->


This thread will bring out the new writers who want to write but can't...



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RULES-->

you can reserve your part , but
if you reserve then you have to immediately update

Some question-->

What we have to do??


Ans- every person(writer and reader ) have to continue the story , where the last one left...
like, if i am leaving it at that time when maan and geet met in rain, next person will continue from there


HOW much we can write?

Ans- ( not more than 200 words)

Who all can join?

Ans- all of you are welcomed...

Who will look after this thread?
Ans- me!! and if anyone want to help then surely you can do..!!

Can me make three immediate post??
Ans- No, you cant make three immediate post...

How many post we can make here??
Ans- as much as you want (but not three immediately)

What if the two immediate post are made?
Ans- second post will not be considered

most importantly the current post should be related to last post
...

Hope you liked the idea...
do tell me your views...
lets see what type of story come out...

if hope not one has problem with it??
confused with name?? plzz suggest some name...!!


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Now lets start-->>


They were bestest friends from childhood until that incident happened which change the meaning of friendship for them...


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Now continue from here everyone...!!
i will be looking after the process...

this is my idea, don't copy it and
plz make it a peaceful thread only...

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INDEX

PART 1-PG 1(ANGELWORDS)
PART2-PG 1(BULBUL.A)
PART3-PG 1(suhaaana)
PART4-PG1 (BULBUL.A)
PART5-PG1 (suhaaana)
PART6-PG1(BULBUL.A)
PART7-PG 1(ANGELWORDS)
PART8-PG1(suhaaana)
PART9-PG1(BULBUL.A)
PART10-PG1( suhaaana)
PART11-PG1( valli22)
PART12-PG1(suhaaana)
PART13-PG2(
valli22)
PART14-PG3(
suhaaana)

PART 15 - PAGE 4 [BULBUL.A]
PART 16 - PAGE 4 [Suhaaana]
PART 17 - PAGE 4 [BULBUL.A]
PART 18 - PAGE 4 [Suhaaana]

PART26-PG7(angelwords)


Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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part 2

they both kids r none other than our maneet

geet is 14 yr old and maan is 16 yr old

suddenly both kid's parents died in an accident

now both r alone in their life and maan have to take responsibility of geet now

one request isha change max words in 200 as its difficult to write only 50 wors

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PART 3

when someone meant to us more than our life then nothing matters...
for maan geet was his life and for geet maan ..he was her everything...
actually it was the start of a bond which will later be transformed into the love that they will cherish all there life...
but sometimes this doesnt happen..
they were parted before even they met

geet was taken to her paternal home... to hoshiarpur and maan he was left alone with the memories of his mishty ...

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part 4

but suddenly maan get up from this horror dream and see geet is sleeping peacefull near him cuddle in him like ball .

he vowed today, he will take care of geet and dont allow anyone to part them now geet is maan life.

and they both have to fight from whole world for their right and business

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part 5

somethings cannot be changed and its maan in case of geet ...
he ust took her sleeping form in his arms it was like soothing and comforting to her shattered soul...first she was parted from her parents and now these greedy relatives are behind her to take all what belongs to her...
maan looked at the silent tears those tears were pricking his heart...he took a silent vow to never let her cry again...
he will be there for her no matter what conditions or circumstances be...
maan took her to a nearby cottage...he had rented for the night next day he will take her to delhi where his dad's ancestral property is there it will be enough for them...

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part 6

both r in cottage geet is in maan arm layin peacefully and suddenly starts to talk with maan.

"angel u dont leave me alone naa and go like mumma papa" geet asked and see maan with doe shape eye.

maan see geet lovely and cress her hair

"no fairy i will not leave u and now dont think about anything ok ur angel is with u" maan said calmly.

"angel where will we do live" geet asked a unknown fear is written on her face.

"fairy u remember ond day we went dadi ji house in delhi" maan asked.

"haa but dada ji is no more naa so we have to live alone there" geet asked.

"no shona i m with u naa so how r u alone" maan said.

"hmm" geet said.

"now sleep ok" maan said

...@@@@>...

PART 7


" OK angel, you are the best!! hum kab jayen ga??" said geet with a smile
this melted maan heart and he loving said
"hum kal jeyen ga..!!" said maan
"hmm.." said geet while rubbing her eyes
" meri fairy ko neendh arahi hain..!!" said maan
"hain angel, bahut.." said geet while showing her hand
"ok now you sleep i am here only" said maan while putting a spread over her..
geet slept while maan stood watching her...
and night finished , with new day and new begnining...

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PART 8

since it was delhi so maan made arrangements for them...after preparing the breakfast maan silently went to his sweet mishty...
maan: fairy get up... its already eight we have to leave ...wake up sweety...
while his fairy just came near him and got cuddled up taking his hand and slept...
geet: angel please sone do na...
maan: fine then i am leavng...maan said in a teasing arrogant way
but actually the tone scared his jaan
geet: you won't leave me na angel she asked getting a little scared
maan: now freshen up and we will have to leave after breakfast

it's been four hour they reached delhi...maan's father's trust worthy employee KARAN helped maan
he was a sponsored child whom his dad helped and now he is taking care of his gardian's son and his fairy...

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part 9

maan is start to make geet ready for school as today he has to go office so he is taking leave from collage as he is promoted child and write now in bba second yr.

"angel what r u doing? make a poni tail in right way" geet said and see maan with cute anger.

"i m doing fairy see, i m tying but ur hair" maan said but stop in middle to see his loneness danger eye who is ready to eat him.

now both r ready to go school and office but geet first went to near their parents photo and joing her cute little hand infront of them.

"mumma papa and babi mumma -papa, why u leave us and went to god now see how angel doing all work plzz give me strength to help my angel" geet pray innocently unaware maan is watching her with moist eye.

maan come near geet and sit in front of her on his knees and take her both hand in his hand and said,

"ur angel only wants ur smile so i can get strength to fight with all world hmm"

geet nod her head and gave maan her sweet full teeth smile

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part 10

g
eet's glowing face was all that he needed...
if his fairy is with him then nothing can be wrong...but now he will have to make sure that geet will be comfortable and most impotantly he can fulfill her all needs her all wishes...

their loss is something which cannot be made to vanish into thin air...he knew both of them needs time...
he know that the gloomy and sad face that geet is hiding is just for him...

maan st:
geetu..i know you are still not gotton over ma papa's death but i cannot make you to go through what can destroy you...
i know your relatives will be searching for you...
but i will make sure that nothing can hurt my fairy...your angel is always there for you...

maan was lost when geet's tug to his hand brought him back...
she was all ready and surprisely giving him instructions what to do and what not to do...

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part 11

geet was smiling only for maan..his angel..he is the only one for her

when all were behind her money ..he was the one to take care of her..her need..her happiness..

she knew he is also going through the same phase as he has also no parents..

he hide his pain like she hides for him

they both sat in the car..

maan dropped her in school..

geet:bye angel..have a gud day..n all the best for ur first project

maan smiled at her..

maan:thank u dear..when i got ur wish i know i will succeed..n all the best for u too..give ur exams well..i want to see u top in all subjects..

geet:i will make u proud..

maan:bye fairy..

maan left to his office..today is his day which is going to turn his official life..

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PART 12

geet actually looked at him till he was out of her sight...
she joined her hands and prayed to her babaji...

geet: babaji...please make my angel suceed in whatever hardships he will face...please make those clients impressed by him...
she cutely prayed and went to her class...

here maan reached KC...

though he has been familiar with each and every thing but the loss of his father and the support today he is been searching cannot be found...he just closed his eyes for a second to remember his parents and went inside...
the staff greeted him...
but like we get changed with situations maan too had put a strict and rough exterior

he went to the cabin..which was engraved for MD's but he will have to earn it...
everything comes with a payment and he will earn that position
just for his geet...his fairy..he can't let her suffer...she is the main reason for his existence now

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now reader and writers may continue...

Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dee you also write something..plzzz😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar humare forum mein kya ho raha hai...

but anyway...good to see new thread...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome idea
it will help those who want to write but can't
nd i will try my fullest to write something
but now my mind is not working
will try some other time
sorry
but heads off to ur brain
for upcoming with innovative idea
really like the idea
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




yaar humare forum mein kya ho raha hai...

but anyway...good to see new thread...



matalb?? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesia

awesome idea

it will help those who want to write but can't
nd i will try my fullest to write something
but now my mind is not working
will try some other time
sorry
but heads off to ur brain
for upcoming with innovative idea
really like the idea



you can join whenever you want, but do write
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Part 13
maan looked again the surroundings..his dads dream..his hard work..when he was MD KC was at top..when he left all came to ground..he was young..n his care taker was not as efficient as his dad..but thanks to him at least he sufferred to keep KC alive..he is very gud person indeed..otherwise who will take care of him n his fairy...all property will come under maan when he is 18..n karan is very much eager to get rid of his responsibilities..for that maan must prove himself.he must prove that he can take care of this vast empire..
maan decided,he will bring kc to top as his father dreamed..he took a deep breathe n walked toward the conference hall..compared to all he is very small...but his aim is high..his will power is more than any one who is sitting there..maan closed his eyes took blessings of his parents mentally..his closed eyes brought the smiling face of his fairy before him...he smiled..he will win this at any cost for them..for his geet..he started the presentation with full confidence..just making all his clients mesmerise with his presentation..
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelwords

anyone wants to continue??

iwill start this..
n ask one by one to res..after me..n 2 update ...

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